1、2013版英语高考专题辅导与训练精练精析（大纲版）：专题强化测评（二十一）短文改错、书面表达（一）(限时45分钟/每组)（一）第一节: 短文改错（1）Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly, 1. _a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you2. _tell him a secret, never will he talks about it with anybody3. _else. Besides, a friend is always good listene
2、r when you 4. _need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some 5. _words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes6. _him happily too. Whats more, a good friend is willing to7. _offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you8. _some advices. In a word, friends are those
3、you like and 9. _trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with them. 10. _（2）One Sunday morning, Jack and I go fishing on a river. 1. _To our surprise, we found the water was very dirty and smelly 2. _that we couldnt see the river bed at all. We also found some3. _来源:学科网rubbish or dead
4、fish floating on the water. That afternoon4. _we caught only one small fish, that seemed ill. Most fish in 5. _the river were dead. Why? That is because of the chemical6. _factories along the river are always pouring its waste water and7. _来源:学。科。网rubbish into the river, making the water polluting s
5、eriously. 8. _Therefore, it is difficult for us see fish alive in the river. 9. _I think some measure must be taken to stop the pollution. 10. _第二节: 书面表达来源:学&科&网你叫李浩，你美国的笔友Jack在网上发现这样一幅漫画，他写信询问你这幅漫画的意思。请你用英文给Jack写一封回信，解释一下这幅漫画所反映的社会现象。内容要点包括：1据报道70%以上的火锅店都向火锅里添加化学添加剂；来源:Z*xx*k.Com2火锅店这样做的目的是降低成本、节约时
6、间，让火锅更诱人；3向火锅里添加化学物质对人体的危害；4如何解决这一危害大众健康的问题。注意：1参考词汇：漫画cartoon; 火锅hotpot; 化学添加剂chemical additives; 食品安全food safety2可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3词数100左右。信的开头、结尾和格式已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack, Im glad to hear from you again. _来源:学,科,网Z,X,X,KIt is a great pity that I may not be able to treat you to a delicious hotpo
7、t when you come to visit me one day, isnt it? Yours, Li Hao（二）来源:Z_xx_k.Com第一节: 短文改错（1）Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over1. _the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since2. _long ago, many adults and children called their friends together 3. _to spend hour
8、s, even days play games. One of the reasons people4. _like to play is that sports help them to live happily. In other words, 5. _they help to keep people strong and feel good. When people are6. _来源:Z+xx+k.Complaying games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities7. _for their health.
9、Having fun with their friends make them happy. 8. _Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. In American9. _big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 10. _（2）I picked out a baby bird without any feathers on my1. _way home. It was too young to feed itself,
10、so I took it2. _into my room and fed it careful. It grew up a month later. 3. _It kept in a birdcage made by myself. One morning, I4. _happened to think that it should return to the nature and that5. _the forest should be its home indeed, so I set it free. 6. _To my surprise and joy, it fly down and
11、 stood on my shoulder, 7. _appeared to welcome me when I came back after school. 8. _From then, I often saw it fly away as I left for school9. _and fly back when I came to home. We were good friends for years. 10. _第二节: 书面表达假设你是武汉大学附中高三(1)班的李华，今年即将高中毕业。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的看法。1. 对获得的帮助表示感谢;
12、2. 消除与同学之间的误会; 3. 努力学习，实现人生梦想; 4. 对学弟、学妹的建议。注意：1. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯; 2. 词数：100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。High school is regarded as the best time in a persons life. As a Senior 3 student, it wont take long before I graduate._答案解析（一）第一节（1）1.【解析】howwhat 由what引导宾语从句，从句中like缺宾语。2.【解析】secrets后加with share sth. with sb
13、. 与某人分享某物。3.【解析】talkstalk will后须加动词原形。来源:学科网ZXXK4.【解析】always后加a listener是可数名词，且此处是泛指。5.【解析】hearhearing after是介词，后接名词或动词-ing形式。6.【解析】isare that代指先行词words，所以谓语动词要用复数形式。7.【解析】happilyhappy 形容词作宾语补足语。8.【解析】去掉to which you need作定语修饰help，意为：提供你所需要的帮助。9.【解析】advicesadvice advice是不可数名词。10.【解析】spentspend 前后时态须一
14、致。（2）1.【解析】gowent 由时间状语one Sunday morning可知该处需要用一般过去时。2.【解析】veryso 由下文中的that, 可知此处应是so. . . that. . . 结构。3. 4.【解析】orand 该句为肯定句，rubbish与dead fish为并列关系，所以应用并列连词and。5.【解析】thatwhich 此处是非限制性定语从句。6.【解析】去掉of 此处是because引导的表语从句。7.【解析】itstheir 用their代指the factories。8.【解析】pollutingpolluted 水被污染。此处用过去分词作宾语补足语。9
15、.【解析】see前加to Its difficult for sb. to do sth. 中，it为形式主语，for sb. to do sth. 为真正的主语。10.【解析】measuremeasures measure当“措施”讲时，为可数名词，所以此处应改为measures。第二节【参考范文】Dear Jack, 来源:Z+xx+k.ComIm glad to hear from you again. The cartoon you came across shows a major concern about food safety in China. It is reported
16、that over 70% of the hotpot restaurants are adding chemical additives to their hotpot to save time, reduce cost, and make the hotpot look more inviting. However, the effects of the chemical substances on peoples health remain unknown and most people tend to believe that chemical additives will do gr
17、eat harm to human bodies, even causing cancer in some cases. It is certain that strong measures should be taken to make sure hotpot is safe. Whoever adds harmful elements into the hotpot is a danger to society and should be severely punished. Otherwise, people in China may never have hotpot. It is a
18、 great pity that I may not be able to treat you to a delicious hotpot when you come to visit me one day, isnt it? Yours, Li Hao（二）第一节（1）1.【解析】andbut 连词错误。两句之间是转折关系。2.【解析】womanwomen 平行结构的错误。短语men and women表示“男男女女”。3.【解析】called前加have 一致关系的错误。根据文章语境，这里应用现在完成时。4.【解析】playplaying 非谓语动词形式的错误。句型spend time (
19、in) doing sth. ，意为“做某事花费多少时间”。5. 6.【解析】feelfeeling 非谓语动词形式的错误。keep people feeling good使人们感觉良好。7.【解析】howwhy 连接手段的错误。That is why. . . , 那就是的原因。8.【解析】makemakes 一致关系的错误。非谓语动词充当主语时，谓语动词用单数。来源:学科网9.【解析】去掉the 冠词使用的错误。短语the others是“其余的人”，这里指的是“别人”。10.【解析】sellbuy 行文逻辑上的错误。根据文意是“买票看球赛”。（2） 1.【解析】outup 短语搭配错误。
20、pick up为“捡起，捡到”的意思。pick out挑出。2. 3.【解析】carefulcarefully 形容词/副词用法错误。此处修饰动词fed, 需要用副词carefully。4.【解析】kept前加was 语态错误。主语为物，keep为及物动词，因此应使用被动语态。5.【解析】去掉the “return to nature” 表示“回归自然”之意。6.【解析】itsits 此处用its来代指“小鸟的”。7.【解析】flyflew 时态错误。由stood可知，应用flew。flew与stood为并列谓语。8.【解析】appearedappearing 非谓语动词错误。此处应当用app
21、earing来作伴随状语。9.【解析】then后加on from then on从那以后，为固定搭配。10.【解析】去掉to 介词多余。come home为固定搭配，此处home是副词。第二节【参考范文】High school is regarded as the best time in a persons life. As a Senior 3 student, it wont take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students. Firstly, I would like to sh
22、ow my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, its high time to say sorry to my classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, Ive made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains. ”Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no man.