1、2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（20） 含答案 短文改错Traffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wai
2、t in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.In my opinion, the government should develop public transport. It should be cheaper and more convenient and c
3、omfortable. Besides, we should use public transport as much as possibly. Its better to share cars during rush hours. In a word, we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars.参考答案：SocauseseasilywaitingistheircitiesaTraffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rus
4、h hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also,
5、 traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.*结束短文改错He is already a singer and a director, so what is the Taiwanese superstar Jay Chou up to now? Hes a talk show host. His program Mr.J was first broadcast on October 31. But unlike her music, the show hasnt
6、lived down to public expectations and has suffering a storm of criticism(批评).Chou was reported be nervous about the first shows. At that time in fact, it is only thanks to another celebrity(名人)guest that the program wasnt a failure. In a late show, Chou was criticized for gossiping about Lam Chiling
7、(林志玲), a model from Taiwan, in an attempt to decrease audience rating(收视率).参考答案：He is already a singer and a director, so what is the Taiwanese superstar Jay Chou up butto now? Hes a talk show host. His program Mr.J was first broadcast on October 31. But unlike her hismusic, the show hasnt lived dow
8、n to public expectations and has suffering a up sufferedstorm of criticism(批评).Chou was reported be nervous about the first shows. At that time in fact, it is only to show wasthanks to another celebrity(名人)guest that the program wasnt a failure. In a late show, laterChou was criticized for gossiping
9、 about Lam Chiling(林志玲), a model from Taiwan, in an attempt to decrease audience rating(收视率). Increase*结束(2)(25 min.)(2012师大附中月考)请你简要概述图中所述新闻事件，并针对路人的反应发表自己的看法，如果你是在场的路人之一，你会怎么做？ _参考范文One possible version：Since 13th Oct., 2011, China has been captivated by the distressing case of twoyearold girl Xia
10、o Yueyue, who was coldly ignored by passersby as she lay bleeding in the street after being struck by a delivery van. Video shared widely across social media documented the incident in horrifying detail, including at least 18 people walking past Xiao Yueyues body without so much as a glance. In my e
11、yes, those 18 people have shamed the whole of China. Owing to the new complexities of Chinese social life, people had lost their reverence for life and felt indifferent or even cold about life or death.Any one of us might become the passerby at the side of Xiao Yueyue. If I were one of them, I would
12、 stop, move her out of the center of the road, or extend a hand of comfort, carrying her away from danger. Everybody should examine his own conscience: if we were in the same situation next time, how could we help ourselves? Only by lifting a hand to help others, we save ourselves.*结束短文改错Dear Mr. Li
13、,Im very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in the morning, but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycles front tyre（轮胎）flat. I wanted to take bus or taxi to school, and I didnt have any money with me. I had to look for a place along the street to ge
14、t my bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops were open in the early morning. So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. Thats how I was late for school.Please dont worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help if ne
15、cessary.Yours,Wang Hui 参考答案：Dear Mr. Li,Im very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in lessons usualthe morning, but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycles front tyre (轮胎) flat. I wanted to foundtake bus or taxi to school, and I didnt have any mone
16、y with me. I had to look for a place a but along the street to get my bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops repaired that / which were open in the early morning. So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. Thats how I was late for school. whyPlease do
17、nt worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for helpabout / over themif necessary. Yours,Wang Hui*结束高考英语：写作综合训练集写作话题议论篇 诚信是处世之本。但是在中学生当中，考试作弊、抄袭作业、欺骗家长和老师等现象屡见不鲜。请你对以上种种现象作简要描述，并以How to guarantee honesty为题，从三个方面，谈谈如何保证学生做到诚信。注意：1词数：120左右；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。How to guara
18、ntee honestyAs we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. Much to our regret, however, _ Honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.【参考范文】-One possible version:As we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. Much to our reg
19、ret, however, it is nothing new that some middle school students cheat in exams, copy others homework and fool their teachers and parents. Therefore, how to guarantee honesty should come to our attention.Personally, I think honesty education is necessary. For instance, courses on honesty can be offe
20、red to students; activities like story-telling and lectures are also worthy trying. With the concept of “being honest” rooted in their minds, honesty can be reflected in their daily life and study. Besides, related rules and regulations should be laid down. Detailed criteria should be applied to eva
21、luate students in aspects such as homework, tests, relationship with teachers and parents.Then, strict measures should be carried out to punish those who cheat, and consequently, they must assume responsibility for their bad behavior, thus considerably reducing chances of cheating next time. Honesty
22、 is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.本文是一篇开放式的作文，只提出了一个话题“How to guarantee honesty”,话题非常切合学生实际生活，让每个学生都有话可写。此题留给学生了一定的想象空间，有利于优生的发挥。文章的人称以一、三人称为主；时态为一般现在时；本文可用三段成文形式成文。内容要点： 1. 学生中存在的作弊现象；2. 解决这一现象的方法；3. 总结要点。*结束短文改错Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usuall
23、y. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation
24、, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved. I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need. 参考答案：Last weekend I wen
25、t to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake usualwhile suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a when heard shockedlittle child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were sta
26、nding by without doing anything. people Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I andmanaged to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved. myI was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need. of hope*结束