1、浙江省云和县2015高考英语短文改错暑假专练（4）及答案下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。A young man called Low-Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011 He suggests living a low-carbon life, which m
2、eans using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the
3、 light Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving Some people think what he is doing is just a show No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior Although what he is doing has no huge
4、 effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life【参考答案】6.A young man called Low-Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011 He suggests becameliving a low-carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the airFor
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6、t he is doing is just a showNo one canlive such a simply life with so many modern invention around usAs far as I am concerned,simple inventionsI am strongly in supporthis and his behaviorAlthough what he is doing has no hugeofeffect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life 删除4.短文改
7、错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Maria, a 91 - year- old woman, has an unbelievable experience last week. A group of thievesbroke to her house b
8、ut took nothing away with them. Maria remembered that the windowswere broken and all her box were opened, but nothing was missing. Instead, she found ahandwritten note that was said, This is help you get by. Beside the note there was some money. It seemed that the thieves realized how poor Maria liv
9、ed and derided not to take somethingbut to help.One policeman who has been working for 40 years is surprising by this event too. Later Maria framed the note received from her friendly thieves but used the money to buy sweets for his great grandchildren.【参考答案】4.Maria, a 91 - year- old woman, has an u
10、nbelievable experience last week. A group of thieves had broke to her house but took nothing away with them. Maria remembered that the windows intowere broken and all her box were opened, but nothing was missing. Instead, she found a boxeshandwritten note that was said, This ishelp you get by. Besid
11、e the note there was some tomoney. It seemed that the thieves realized how poor Maria lived and derided not to take poorlysomethingbut to help.One policeman who has been working for 40 years is surprising by this anything surprisedevent too. Later Maria framed the note received from her friendly thi
12、eves but used the money to andbuy sweets for his great grandchildren. her5.短文改错假定英语课上老师要同学之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处）不计分。Attention please, everyone
13、. We accepted the weather forecast on the radio this morning that there will have a heavy rain tonight. Be sure shut the windows and doors until you leave your classrooms. The winter sports meet that we planned to hold on tomorrow will be put off. After it becomes fine, well make other announcement.
14、 We will have classes on Thursday as usually. Since it is cold tomorrow, please put on more clothes in time. Those who comes to school by bike dont keep your umbrella open while riding.【参考答案】5.Attention please, everyone. We accepted the weather forecast on the radio this received/gotmorning that the
15、re will have a heavy rain tonight. Be sure shut the windows be toand doors until you leave your classrooms. The sports meet that we planned to beforehold on tomorrow will be put off. After it becomes fine, well make other去掉on another announcement. We will have classes on Thursday as usually. Since i
16、t is cold usual coldertomorrow, please put on more clothes in time. Those who comes to school comeby bike dont keep your umbrella open while riding. umbrellas短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横
17、线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。One day I happened to find a chatting room on 76 my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried 77 to chat with some of them . To my surprised, I found 78 the oral English of some junior students were better 79 than me . I asked them for
18、advice and they told me 80 to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I 81 would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ.82 Day by day I learned from many useful words and 83 expressions . With time went by , I found that I could 84 even communicate some college students freely .85 【参考答案
19、】 76 77. there where 78. surprised surprise 79. were was80. me mine81. But So/And82. practisepractising 83. 删除from”84. As With or went going 85. communicatewith下文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许
20、修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Most students feel like nervous before taking an important exam. Some feel dizzy or tiring, some lose their appetites for food and other even suffer from sleep problems. All the symptoms have terrible effects in their exams. How can they get rid of these bad symptoms? Personal, i
21、ts important to make a careful plan in advance to review what they have learned, what will help them reduce the pressure. Besides, they should arrange their time properly. They shouldnt stay too late because only enough sleep makes them energetic and enable them to perform well in an exam. Whats mor
22、e, a balanced diet can contribute to their perform in exams. They are supposed to eating nutritious food such as eggs, milk, meat, carrots, walnuts, etc. 【参考答案】Most students feel like nervous before taking an important exam. Some feel 删除dizzy or tiring, some lose their appetites for food and other e
23、ven suffer from sleep tired othersproblems. All the symptoms have terrible effects in their exams. How can they onget rid of these bad symptoms? Personal, its important to make a careful plan Personallyin advance to review what they have learned, what will help them reduce the whichpressure. Besides
24、, they should arrange their time properly. They shouldnt stay uptoo late because only enough sleep makes them energetic and enable them to enablesperform well in an exam. Whats more, a balanced diet can contribute to their perform in exams. They are supposed to eating nutritious food such as eggs, p
25、erformance eatmilk, meat, carrots, walnuts, etc. 短文改错I was real sad when I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again and again, I decided buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my ey
26、es as soon as we went into the store. It looked so cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle. He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn t afford such an expensive one. Then I choose another one, which cost him
27、only 200 yuan. It was not perfect,so it was much better than the old one.【参考答案】 I was real sad when I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again and again, really I decided buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a to locatedfriend ca
28、lled Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked A so cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle. shopkeeperHe wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn t afford such whic
29、han expensive one. Then I choose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect, chose meso it was much better than the old one.but6.短文改错下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在下面加上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
30、I like riding my bikeThough it is not very new, but it is my best friendI find very convenient to go anywhere with a bikeRiding gives me not only exercises but also pleasureI use my bike almost in summer when the weather is warm and dryIt can be very pleasant in winter when it is cold and rain is po
31、ur downIt can also be very dangerousOf course I will be very carefully on my bikeIn fact, accidents are not the only problemOnce I went to bookstore on my mothers bike to buy some books and come out to find the bike missingNow I have two strong lock 【参考答案】6.I like riding my bikeThough it is not very
32、 new, but it is my best friendI findveryitconvenient to go anywhere with a bikeRiding gives me not only exercises but also pleasureIexerciseuse my bike almost in summer when the weather is warm and dryIt can be very pleasant inmostly cant（ 或unpleasant）winter when it is cold and rain is pour downIt can also be very dangerousOf course I will bepouringvery carefully on my bikeIn fact, accidents are not the only problemOnce I went to careful abookstore on my mothers bike to buy some books and come out to find the bike missingNow Icamehave two strong locklocks