1、 2014高考英语书面表达系列系列（24）及参考范文第四部分：书面表达(满分35分)(2012合肥质检一)网购已成为很多高中生青睐的一种现代购物形式。请你以“Online Shopping”为题，并从以下三个方面，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己对网购的一些看法。越来越多的高中生喜欢在网上购买商品网上购物可能存在的问题你的建议注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：网店店主Internet shopping provider假货fake goodsOnline Shopping_范文借鉴Online ShoppingNowadays, shopping through
2、 the Internet has been becoming increasingly popular among senior students and they prefer to buy almost everything they want online.Online shopping, however, can sometimes bring headaches to students when they enjoy shopping online. Firstly, the quality of the goods may not be as good as they are d
3、escribed and it is possible for them to buy fake goods. In addition, some students find it very hard to make a change when they are not satisfied with the commodities bought online.I strongly hold the view that regulations and rules should be worked out to screen and check Internet shopping provider
4、s. If so, I believe a promising online shopping is just awaiting us. *js (一)高考英语作文议论文常用句型：段首句1.关于人们有不同的观点。一些人认为There are different opinions among people as toSome people suggest that_.2.俗话说(常言道)，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。There is an old saying Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is
5、correct in many case seven today.3.现在，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，；其次，。更为糟糕的是Today，which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First，Second，.What makes things worse is that.4.现在，很普遍，许多人喜欢，因为，另外(而且)。Nowadays，it is common to ,Many people like because.Besides，.5.任何事物都是有两面性，也不例外。Every coins has two si
6、des and is not an exception.6.关于人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)，在他们看来，Peoples opinions about vary from person to person. Some people say that,To them，.7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题，这个问题变得越来越严重。Man is now facing a big problemwhich is becoming more and more serious.8. 已成为人的关注的热门话题 ，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。has become a hot topic amon
7、g people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9. 在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中
8、的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出。很显然，但是为什么呢？According to the figure/number/statistics/percentagesinthe/chart/bargraph/line/graph，It can be seen that while .Obviously，but why？*结束(一)高考英语作文议论文常用句型：中间段落句1.相反，有一些人赞成，他们相信，而且，他们认为。On the contrary，there are some people in favor of .At the same time，they say.2.但是，我认为这不是解
9、决的好方法，比如。最糟糕的是。But I dont think it is a very good way to solve .For example，.Worst of all，.3.首先，。而且，最重要的是First，.Whats more，.Most important of all，.4.面临，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来。一方面，另一方面，Confronted with，we should take a series of effective measures to .For one thing，For another，5.早就应该拿出行动了。比如说，另外。所有这些方法肯定会。
10、It is high time that something was done about it. For example .In addition. .Allthe measures will certainly.6.然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，也有它的不利的一面，象。However，just like everything has both its good and bad sides，also has its own disadvantages，such as.7.尽管如此，我相信更有利。Nonetheless，I believe thatis more advantageo
11、us.8.完全同意这种观点(陈述)，主要理由如下：I fully agree with the statement thatbecause.(三)高考英语作文议论文常用句型：结尾句1.至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为As far as I am concerned，I agree with the latter opinion to some extent .I think that2.总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来。In a word，the whole society should pay close attention to the prob
12、lem ofOnly in this way canin the future.3.但是，和都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如，而。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于Butandhave her own advantages .For example，whileComparing this with that，however，I prefer to4.就我个人而言，我相信，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为Personally，I believe thatConsequently，Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because5
13、.随着社会的发展，。因此，迫切需要。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。With the development of society， necessary toIf every member is willing to contribute himself to the society，it will be better and better.6.至于我(对我来说，就我而言)，我认为更合理。只有这样，我们才能For my part，I think it reasonable toOnly in this way can you7.在总体上很难说是好还是坏，因为它
14、在很大程度上取决于的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现。It is difficult to say whetheris good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of.however，from a personal point of view find8.综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论From what has been discussed above，we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that9.如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现
15、一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是If we can not take useful means，we may not control this trend，and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly，so what we should do is*结束高考英语书面表达写作指导-议论文（观点类）1.正反观点式议论文模板导入：第1段：（导入话题）（观点有分歧）正文：第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）.(列出23个赞成的理由)第3段：However, the
16、 others are strongly against it. （反方观点） (列出23个反对的理由)结论：第4段： （个人观点）2.观点论述类议论文模板：导入：第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. （亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对）The reasons for this may be listed as follows. （过渡句，承上启下）正文：第2段：First of all. Secondly. Besides.(列出23个赞成或反对的理由)结论：第3段：In conc
17、lusion, I believe that. （照应第1段，构成总分总结构）段首句. 导入：1 No one can doubt the essential fact that over the last years has caused wide public concern all over the world. 人 in increasing numbers are beginning to believe that 没有人能否认这一重要事实：最近几年？问题在全世界受到了普遍关注。越来越多的？开始相信这种状况将2 There is a general debate today over
18、 the phenomenon of 3 When it comes to education,-说到4 Theres no denying the fact that.-.事实不容否认-5 _ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. 已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。6 There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone
19、 from bad to worse.无可否认，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。7 There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫无疑问，我们的教育制度令人不满意。8 Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. 虽然我们的国家很富有，但是我们的生活质量却令人很不满意。9 .It goes without saying that. 不用说.(意思是：论述的内容是显而易见的）
20、意见分歧：1 No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。2 _ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. 在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。3
21、 Many people believe that- produce positive effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to promote-4 People differ in their attitudes towards failure. Faced with it, some of them -. Others, however,-人们对失败持有不同的态度。面对失败，有人-，。然而，另一些人却-5 To average people, they often tend to live
22、 under the illusion that, is this really the case?对于一般人来说，他们常常以为，然而这是真的吗？6 There is a growing tendency for sb to -越来越多的人人seem to tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward 7 An increasing number of experts believe that ？will exert positive effects on However, this opinion is now being questioned by
23、 more and more -who complain that have brought many serious problems越来越多的 -相信-起到积极作用。然而，越来越多的-却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨-了许多严重的问题8 What calls for special attention is that.需要引起特别注意的是.科技发展:With the opening and reform policy being carried out, thousands upon thousands of foreign visitors are crowding into our count
24、ry. They are eager to see this old mysterious land with a splendid culture of more than 5,000years.?I随着改革开放政策的贯彻执行，数以万计的外国游人涌入中国。他们渴望参观这个有着5000多年灿烂文化的神秘古国。In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.在过去的几十年，先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间
25、更长成为可能。human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.中间段落句1 -人-tend to have a favorable attitude toward - 2 Using bicycle contributes greatly to peoples physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.使用自行车有助于人们的身体健康，并极大地缓解了交通阻塞。3 The harder you work, the
26、more progress you make.你越努力，你越进步。4 Many people seem to overlook the basic fact:许多人似乎忽视了这个基本事实：5 Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.听音乐能使我们放松。6 On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge我们绝对不能忽视知识的价值。7 There is no one but longs to.-人们都希望-8 So precious is time that we cant afford to
27、 waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们不能浪费它。结尾句From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although indeed bring us many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldnt be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. 通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：尽管-很多优点，但它的缺点不可忽视，且远大于它的优点。From what has been discussed ab
28、ove, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that_.综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论 It is difficult to say whether _is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of_. However, from a personal point of view,I find-在总体上很难说是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现第四部分：书面表达(满分35分)(2012朝阳期末统考)假设你是红星中学高
29、三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Voluntary Activity”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的内容，叙述在12月5日志愿者日当天，你们班到公交车站参加志愿者服务活动的过程。词数不少于60。稿件的开头已给出。提示词：桶bucketOur Voluntary ActivityDecember 5 was memorable because it was Volunteer Day and we did some meaningful work._范文借鉴Our Voluntary ActivityDecember 5 was memorable because it wa
30、s Volunteer Day and we did some meaningful work. After class, we went to a nearby bus station with some buckets and our volunteer logo. Upon arrival, we started to clean the buses immediately. Some were carrying water. Some were wiping the floor of the buses. Some were cleaning the windows. After th
31、at, we tried to lead the passengers to queue for getting on the buses. Some even helped the old onto the bus. Before leaving, we took some photos to record our voluntary activity holding a flag with our logo. Which, I think, is the best explanation of our activity: try to give others a hand as much as possible.
