1、Unit 6 Disaster and hopeWriting safety guidelines 表 达 巧 提 作 文 升 本单元的写作项目是写自然灾害时的安全指导,这种题目要求根据可能遇到的危险的内容有针对性地写出遇险时的安全指导。基本框架1开头(beginning)分析遇到的危险2主体 1(body1)介绍危险来临前的各种准备3主体 2(body2)危险中的各种应对措施4主体 3(body3)写出危险中不应该做的常用词块1Organize personnel protection 组织人员防护2Move to a safe place转移到安全地带3Avoid walking on b
2、anks and bridges避免在岸边和桥上行走4Pay attention when walking in water.在积水中行走要注意观察。5Get off the high hill从高山上下来6Dont climb the trees when there is lightning.闪电时不要爬树。7Cover your mouth and nose with wet clothes or towel用湿的衣物或毛巾捂住口鼻8Hold your head quickly迅速抱住头部9Send the poisoned or burned person to hospital将中毒
3、或烧伤人员送医院救治常用语句精彩开头1If you are trapped in the flood what will you do to help yourself?如果你被困在洪水中,你该怎么做来自救?2If you find somewhere around you is on fire,how will you escape safely?如果你发现周围的某个地方着火了,你怎么安全逃生?3When there is an earthquake,you must obey the following rules to keep yourself safe.如果发生地震,你必须遵循以下规
4、则来保证自己的安全。丰满主体1Attention should be paid to prevent smoke poisoning,prevent suffocation.要注意防止烟雾中毒,预防窒息。2When opening a room door,touch the door with the back of your hand first,see whether it is hot.开房间门时,先用手背接触房门,看是否发热。3When you cant escape,dont hide in the attic or closet.当无路可逃时,不要藏在顶楼或者壁橱等地方。4Lear
5、n more self-rescue common sense in advance.提前学会更多的自救常识。余味结尾1Helping those who are in need is making a great difference.帮助需要帮助的人让这个世界大不同。2Keep in mind that you should keep calm and dont panic.要记住保持冷静不要慌乱。夏天即将来临,暴雨增多,积水增加,洪水泛滥。新华学校为了增加学生的安全自救常识,准备了一份关于暴风雨时的安全知识宣传海报。请根据以下提示拟定海报内容。1收听广播或看电视,了解天气信息。2一旦遇到
6、洪水,尽量待在高处,或者抓住能在水中漂浮的东西。3暴雨中不要在大树下避雨,尽量避免在积水深的地方行走。4要求:1.词数:80 左右;2可适当增加细节,以使文章连贯。参考范文Flood Safety GuidelineSummer is drawing near.In order to keep you safe in case of flood,keep the following in mind:Things to do before a flood:Keep yourself informed of the weather forecast and take your raincoat o
7、r umbrella in time.Things to do during a flood:In case of a flood,stay at a higher place waiting for rescue,or catch something that can float on the water to rescue yourself.Things not to do during a flood:Dont try to find shelter under high trees.Pay more attention to the deep water and avoid walki
8、ng in water.Activity 5 On book(page51)1.What is the purpose of safety guidelines?2.What type of language is used in safety guidelines?To increase readerschances of surviving a natural disaster.The language is concise and simple,with many imperative sentences as tips.Activity 6 On book(page51)Make no
9、tes for flood safety guidelines based on the hurricane safety guidelines Activity 6Now write flood safety guidelines.Use the expressions in the box to help you.Activity 7Share your guidelines with the class.Writing Criterion:Correct tenseProper formatRich expressions(various,proper)Beautiful handwritingIncluding Things to do before the disaster Things to do during the disaster Things not to do during the disasterThank you!