1、浙江省Z20联盟2023届高三第一次联考读后续写解析原文本Chicken Soup for the Canadain SoulYou tend to hit where you aim, so aim high!-Bob Templeton It started when I was in high school. Growing up in the small town of Palmerston, Ontario, I had a dream: to work in television.My parents had a little Stedmans store, so we were
2、definitely not fancy people. When I was in grade twelve, I went to a guidance counsellor who told me I could be a nurse, a teacher or a hairdresser. I thought they were all great careers, but I knew I really I wanted to work in television. I was too embarrassed to tell my counsellor, however, or any
3、one for that matterexcept my parents. To me, it sounded like a dream that could never come true.Thankfully, my parents had raised me and my siblings to have a lot of confidence. Both my parents, but especially my dad, often said, “You can do anything you want to do.” My dad believed in total equalit
4、y, and he was particularly supportive of the girls in the family. He was my steady rockalways there for me. With his help and encouragement, I applied to the radio and television arts program at Ryerson in Toronto. I was ecstatic when I was accepted. I really loved the program and worked hard and I
5、was named the most outstanding graduate of 1969.Just by getting into Ryerson and graduating at the top of the class I was already living my dream. I began to think that maybe the dream could come true. After I graduated, I worked for Bell Canada for a while, writing and producing commercials. I soon
6、 decided, however, that what I really wanted was to be on camera.I went to the CBC and CTV and applied for a job. They both said the same thing: “We love your education, but you dont have any experience. Come back when you get some!” And I kept saying, “How can I get this experience? Ive been busy g
7、etting an education.” They both turned me down.Luckily, Global Television had just started broadcasting in Canada that year. I thought to myself: Im new and theyre new. I dont know a soul there, so if Im going to get to know one person at Global, it might as well be the president. It really boiled d
8、own to how badly did I want a job, and what was I willing to do? I found out who the president was and decided to call him cold. What could I lose? I was scared, but I knew deep down inside that this was what I wanted. When I called my dad and told him my plan, he said, “Good, Faye. Thats exactly wh
9、at you should do.”With my heart just about pounding out of my body, I called up the president of Global Television, spoke to his secretary and asked if I could speak to Mr. Slaight. She said sure! Suddenly Mr. Slaight was on the phone. I had practised what I was going to say. I had focused on and vi
10、sualized my goal. I said, “Ive heard that your studio facilities are amazing. I could come at eleven oclock on Tuesday or eleven oclock on Wednesday for a tour. What would suit you better?” I caught him totally off guard. He stuttered a bit, then picked a day. When I hung up, I was scared but elated
11、.At 11 oclock on the appointed day, I arrived at the studio. Mr. Slaight took me around and introduced me to everybody. They must have thought I was someone very importantbut I was just a girl from a small town of only seventeen hundred people. I had picked eleven oclock on purpose, because I though
12、t Mr. Slaight might invite me to lunch. Sure enough, after the tour he said, “Are you free for lunch?” Of course, I accepted.We went to lunch at The Inn on the Park. When we sat down, he looked and me and said, “What do you want?” He sounded a little angry and frustratedbut very curious.“All I want
13、is a chance,” I said. “I just want a chance. If something on camera comes up at GlobalI dont care whatI want a chance to audition. I just want you to know my face, so that when my resume comes in you can put a face to it. Thats all Im asking.”I didnt know whether Id ever hear from him again, but thr
14、ee months later, his secretary called. “Mr. Slaight wants to know if youd like to come and audition for a new game show,” she said. And I answered, “Sure Ill come!”When I arrived at the station, I went right into an audition for a new show called Wintario. Fred Davis, who was Mr. Canadian Television
15、 to me, was there along with various high-level management from the Ontario Lottery Corporation. They were looking for a certain chemistry between Fred and me, and had to make sure we would work well together on camera.Everything went beautifully. Fred and I hit it off right away. I didnt realize it
16、 until the next day, but they had hired me on the spotbut nobody told me! When I went back to the studio the following day, for what I thought was another reading, I was instead handed an airline ticket to Sault Ste. Marie to do the very first Wintario show. No one even told me officially that I had
17、 the job, but I had the job!The next week Fred and I did the first Wintario show in Sault Ste. Marie. I was nervous. What if I make a mistake? What if I forget where I am? This was live TV, and I didnt want to make a fool of myself. And I was still in awe of Fred Davis. When I began to walk out on s
18、tage, however, and the negative thoughts entered my head. I replaced the negative thoughts with positive ones: This is going to be the best show ever, I told myself. You are going to just shine!My positive thinking worked. It was a good show, Fred and I were great together, and I began to realize th
19、at night just how wonderful a man he really was. Fred has since passed away, but he was a great friend for many years.At that time, 85 percent of Ontario households bought lottery tickets, so on Thursday nights, everyone tuned in to the show. With the proceeds of the lottery, Wintario helped build c
20、ommunity centres, arenas and art galleries. And the people in small towns throughout Ontario just loved us.During that first show, I thought of my parents at home watching, and said to myself, Look at me now, Dad! My parents later came to any shows nearby, but that first show in Sault Ste. Marie was
21、 just too far.That was the beginning of the weekly travelling show that Fred and I did for the next twenty-two years. Altogether, I did 660 shows.During the early years of Wintario, I also hosted a talk show and had about twenty commercials running at the same time. I had a lot of TV coverage. My da
22、d would often say, “Faye, I knew all along you had this in you.”When people came into his store he would ask, “So, did you watch Wintario last night? Did you see my daughter?” He talked to everybody about me being on television. I would hear about this from my mother, who is more quietly proud of me
23、. When my parents went to Florida, dad would say, “I see you have Ontario license plates on your car. Do you watch Wintario? Well, thats my daughter!” Thats how proud he was.From Wintario, everything happened for me. I did a talk show at Global, I hosted the National Santa Claus Parade for fifteen y
24、ears, I did hundreds of television commercials, a number of movies, training videos, travel shows and a business show. And everything came from finding the courage back in 1975 to make that one phone call.开始题目I had a dream from primary school: to work in television. My parents owned a little grocery
25、 store, so we were definitely not fancy people. Thankfully, my dad had raised me to have a lot of confidence. He often said, “You can do anything you want to do.” My dad was particularly supportive. He was my steady rock always there for me.With his help and encouragement, I was admitted to the radi
26、o and television arts program at Ryerson in Toronto. I really loved the program and worked hard and I was named the most outstanding graduate. I felt like I was already living my dream. I began to think that maybe I could apply for an internship (实习资格) in CBC or CTV.Luckily, Global Television had ju
27、st started broadcasting in Canada that year. I thought to myself: Im new and theyre new, so if Im going to get to know one person at Global, it might as well be the president. I was scared, but I knew deep down inside that this was what I wanted. When I called my dad and told him my plan, he said, “
28、Good, Faye. Thats exactly what you should do.”With my heart just about pounding out of my body, I called up the president of Global Television. Suddenly Mr. Slaight was on the phone. “Ive heard that your studio facilities are amazing. I could come at eleven oclock on Monday or eleven oclock on Sunda
29、y for a tour. What would suit you better?” I caught him totally off guard. He stuttered a bit, and then picked a day. When I hung up, I was scared but excited.I arrived at the studio on the appointed day. When Mr. Slaight took me around, he looked at me and said, “What do you want?” He sounded furio
30、us but curious. “All I want is a chance to audition (试镜). I just want you to know my face. Thats all Im asking.”I didnt know whether Id ever hear from him again, but two weeks later, his secretary called, “Mr. Slaight wants to know if youd like to come and audition for a new school life show.” I imm
31、ediately answered, “Sure!”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1: When I arrived at the station, I went direct into the audition and began my short performance.Paragraph 2: Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching.后续故事整理分析时间：The day of
32、the audition The day of my first public appearance on TV地点：The audition hall、stage人物：I：confident、dare to try、have my own ideas、bold、have a clear dream and work hard for itDad：the steady rock、supportive、raised me to have a lot of confidence主题：努力奋斗、实现梦想主要情节：Paragraph1：我从小学有一个梦想：在电视行业工作。虽然我家不是很有钱的那种，但是
33、爸爸总是支持我，是我坚实的后盾。Paragraph2：在爸爸的鼓励帮助下，我进入瑞尔森大学并成为优秀毕业生。我很热爱这个行业并且很优秀，想要申请在CBC或CTV实习。Paragraph3：幸运的是那个全球电视今年在加拿大刚开始播出，我觉得既然我和他们都是新的，最好去认识台长。我告知爸爸计划并得到支持。Paragraph4：我给打台长电话，并想约时间参观工作室，使得他措手不及但还是订了时间。catch sb. off guard就是让别人“猝不及防”，“感到惊讶”的意思。Paragraph5：我在约定日子到了演播厅，Mr. Slaight带着我四处走动时，愤怒又好奇地询问我。我表达了自己想要试镜
34、的机会和被记住的意愿。Paragraph6：两周后，我接到秘书电话并且接受了试镜机会。构思分析：这篇文章是一篇的“负”转“正”的续写，但是这次【正】已在原文给出。前文：【负】When Mr. Slaight took me around, he looked at me and said, “What do you want?” He sounded furious but curious.【正】I didnt know whether Id ever hear from him again, but two weeks later, his secretary called, “Mr. Sl
35、aight wants to know if youd like to come and audition for a new school life show.”从台长稍微有点生气又好奇地询问我到最后给了我试镜的机会，是一个伯乐赏识的过程，已经由负转到正了。所以个人思路是在试镜过程中或者最后表演过程中制造矛盾冲突，一个【负】的过程，即紧张的过程；到后续试镜或者现场直播表演过程再转为【正】，即充满自信，游刃有余。当然如果写后续是一路【正】到底也没有问题，即试镜和表演都很成功，总之朝着正能量大方向，实现梦想即可。Paragraph 1: When I arrived at the station
36、, I went direct into the audition and began my short performance.Paragraph 2: Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching.根据给出的两句话参考可能会写的内容第一段内容：由于第二段开头给出提示第一段一定要写到我面试通过，这样才有机会在电视上表演。所以我的表现最后一定是不错的，并且获得了面试机会。中间过程可以曲折，比如紧张、结巴也可以很通畅，表现得很完美。第二段内容：我开始表演
37、，可以写表演的顺畅，是因为多天的排练和努力。演出大获成功，名声大噪等等，事业蒸蒸日上，最后点题呼应第一段由于爸爸的支持帮助鼓励等等。下水作文When I arrived at the station, I went direct into the audition and began my short performance. Hardly had I said a few words when my mind went blank. Clutched by a sense of nervousness, I began to stumble over my words. When I was
38、 at a loss, the chief examiner slowly came over and gently patted me on the shoulder, encouraging me not to be tense. Slowly, my previous restlessness gave way to the full confidence to well finish the performance. The next three minutes witnessed my smooth performance and I was told to have passed
39、the audition. By the show day, I often threw myself into the rehearsal round the clock. Whenever I felt worn out, my fatigue magically faded away after visualizing the bright smile on my parents cheeks when they saw my performance on TV.Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV w
40、ith my parents at home watching. Through the spotlight, what came into my sight was a full house. With every line deeply engraved in my mind, I stood on the stage and devoted myself to the performance. Eventually, the show became a hit and its ratings were more than high. With overflowing delight an
41、d infinite joy boiling in my heart, I couldnt wait to share the good news with my parents. They inspired me to carry on and strive to shine in the industry. I deeply knew that without my fathers help and encouragement, I wouldnt have fulfilled my dream and achieved so much.官方范文When I arrived at the
42、station, I went direct into the audition and began my short performance. With boldness, I finished my performance relatively smoothly though palms were sweating. Never in my wildest dream did I imagine that I was indeed assigned the intern job to act on a school life show and my first public appeara
43、nce on TV was in five days. After sharing the thrilling news with my dad, I received the warmest congratulations and expectations from my family. Picturing my families eagerly waiting for my performance，I worked day and night as busy as a bee for fear that I would make a fool of myself live on TV.Fi
44、nally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching. Wearing fancy dress and delicate make up, I was so proud but nervous that my show would be watched by so many audience. My mind suddenly went blank as I was immersed in my thoughts and totally forgot my lin
45、es. Deep frowns gradually climbed on my partners face, with whose sudden vigorous pull, I was driven back to the reality. I soon came up with a little trick to make up for the embarrassing blank. As the show went on, so concentrated was I that I hardly dared to even blink my eyes. After my debut, I rang my dad with frustration and disappointment, only to reap his trust and encouragement again. It was literally dads love that supported me along my way to be an outstanding actor.