1、2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（17） 含答案 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）。并在其下面写出修改后的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。修改：在错的词后划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。 Im a middle school student name Li Ming. Im writing to tell you something. Recently Inoticed many of my classmates often go to the
2、cyber cafe near our school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat. Some students were even talking about love affairs online. On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful informations. The
3、 Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of it. Otherwise, it will give us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively.参考答案Im a middle school student name
4、Li Ming. Im writing to tell you something. 1namedRecently I noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students 2,去掉in 3.surprised playing computer games, watching films or chat. Some students were even 4c
5、hattingtalking about love affairs online.5.in On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful 5.in 6.whereinformations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than 7 informationplace for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of it. Otherwise,
6、 it 8 a placewill give us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make 9do 10 measuressure that students use cyber cafes positively.*结束(4)(25 min.)(2011沈阳市高三质量检测三改编)假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论大学生开网店的问题。以下是你所在班级的讨论情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。赞成反对1. 大学生时间充裕，具有丰富的网购经验；2. 大学生思想活跃，了解时尚需求。1. 大学生开网店浪费
7、时间，会耽误学业；2. 大学生缺乏经商经验，容易失败。你的观点注意：1词数不少于120；2不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；3开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Editor， Recently, our class have had a heated discussion on whether college students should run online shops._参考范文One possible version：Recently, our class have had a heated discussion on whether college students sho
8、uld run online shops.Some students think that college students have not only enough spare time but also rich experience in online shopping. Besides, they know the trend of fashion very well, which is helpful for their jobs in the future. Others, however, hold the opposite view that running online sh
9、ops will waste a lot of time, which can definitely affect their studies. Whats more, it is easier for them to fail in the business owing to the lack of experience. As a result, the failure will have a lasting influence on them. In my opinion, college students should focus on studies first. After all
10、, running an online shop requires much time and energy. College students should devote most of their time to studying instead of making money. Yours truly，Li Hua*结束短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线()划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线
11、划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。 Although all the students seem very happily at our school, as 66_far as we concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful67_if the school could be decorated. We students thought the school68_looks like a desert a
12、nd the concrete walls like the grey sky in69_a rainy day. We would be much happier and are able to study70_better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, 71_photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons72_and enrich our lives. Original art work are too expensive
13、, but 73_unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a74_little money, it can make our school a nicer place. 75_参考答案、短文改错66. happilyhappy 67. we后加are 68. thoughtthink69. inon 70 去are或arebe 71.正确 72.thatwhich73.workworks 74. unlessif 75. itwe*结束高考英语书面表达讲义：表格作文 (3)(25 min.)(2012师大附中月考)
14、假如你是红星村的李华，家乡人民决定开发农业旅游，邀请你参与策划红星生态山庄旅游项目，并请你写一篇英语文章向旅游者推介红星生态山庄。地理位置长沙市以北35公里处， 占地面积15平方公里；北面靠山，湘江从村边经过主要产品茶叶， 绿色蔬菜，鱼等 娱乐休闲项目钓鱼，生态旅游有利条件(不少于两条)参考词汇： ecological village注意： 自拟标题，词数不少于120。_【参考范文】One possible version：A village like no otherDo you feel tired after a weeks hard work in the noisy city? Wh
15、y not visit Red Star Ecological Village and try something different to relax yourself? Red Star Ecological Village is a beautiful and quiet village, located 35 kilometers north of Changsha, which only takes approximately 30 minutes drive from the center of the city. It covers an area of 15 kilometer
16、s. It is a place where you can see many big pine trees in the mountains in the north, where you can see a lot of ducks on the Xiangjiang River, and where you can join the villagers picking up green tea leaves and growing vegetables in the garden. If you are a fishing lover, you can go fishing in the
17、 pond and barbecue what you get in the water under the big trees. It is really fantastic to enjoy your lunch in the open air with your family and friends, talking and laughing.Whether you are looking to try green food or enjoy quiet country life, Red Star Ecological Village is the place for you. Com
18、e to Red Star Ecological Village and try something different to relax yourself.*结束短文改错(第一节：短文改错(共10小题)假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I saw an accident
19、happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldnt mo
20、ve. The young man didnt know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.参考答案、 短
21、文改错(共10小题)I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebrahappen 去掉tocrossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, when andbut he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her m
22、otorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldnt his badlymove. The young man didnt know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the policewhatarrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and sent policemenwrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast. 加he或去掉was*结束
