1、A组 短文改错高考真题Correction 1 (2019课标全国)I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to th
2、e playground. To everyones surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now. Correction 2(2019课标全国)Since I was a kid,
3、 Ive considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a
4、 doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need. Correction 3(2019课标全国)Ive had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens
5、 a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”. In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created
6、 for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.Correction 4(2018课标全国)During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find
7、 a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they
8、 earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.Correction 5(2018课标全国)When I was little, Fridays night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card g
9、ames of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didnt realiz
10、e how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.Correction 6(2018课标全国)It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to rea
11、d his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, “The
12、 classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well.”Immediate, I raised my hand.Correction 7(2017课标全国)In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I th
13、ought I had learned the instructors orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word,“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“Turning left!”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes l
14、ate, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.Correction 8(2017课标全国)Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare
15、 time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came,
16、 they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!Correction 9(2017课标全国)When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of h
17、igh school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. T
18、his picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.Correction 10(2016课标全国)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had
19、to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.Correc
20、tion 11(2016课标全国)The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If w
21、e go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 12(2016课标全国)The teenage year from 13 to 19 we
22、re the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didnt seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents co
23、uldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Correction 13(2015课标全国)When I was a child, I hoped to
24、 live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global w
25、arming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, well live to regret it.Correction 14(2015课标全国)One day, little Tony went to a shopping cente
26、r with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and tellin
27、g him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.Correction 15(2014课标全国)Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted so
28、me cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although
29、 we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!Correction 16(2014课标全国)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and tw
30、o in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees arou
31、nd the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.Correction 17(2016四川)It is Mothers Day today. Though its a western festival, its popular in China now.Mom
32、has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mothers Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay
33、in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Moms favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mothers Day!” Mom was grateful and moving.Correction 18(2016浙江)When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time h
34、e arrived home at end of the day, wed greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in t
35、he top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Correction 19(2015浙江)My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the
36、view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could n
37、ot enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never fo
38、rget it.Correction 20(2015陕西)My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.
39、I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My fa
40、vorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!Correction 21(2015四川)Hi,Janice,Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend her
41、e. We hang out together during lunch and after school. Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I dont like to go anymore, so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship. Ho
42、w do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.GraceCorrection 22(2014浙江)I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our
43、tickets. A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had
44、 previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.Correction 23(2014辽宁)Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although weve been delighted to have you as neigh
45、bors, were hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dogCleo.Weve called several time about Cleos early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute shes outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with
46、the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 oclock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincere
47、ly,Jack and RoseCorrection 24(2014四川)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Dont panic or get out of line,
48、 and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If its a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.B组 模拟精选Correction 1(2019届福建泉港一中、南
49、安国光中学期中联考)Of my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one who makes an impression of me. Though he is 50, but he appears very young. Undoubtedly, hes one of the most popular teacher in our school. Comparing with other teachers, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various ways to make
50、 his classes lively and interesting. In his point of view, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. Consequently, instead of giving us immediately answers, he is always encouraged us to think by himself whenever he puts forward questions. With his help, weve made rapid progresses,
51、learning how to analyze and settled problems. What wonderful world of “why” he leads us to! Correction 2(2019届湖北孝感一中、应城一中等五校期中联考)One of my friends have sent me a short message, say that true friends are one soul in two bodies, which moves me very much and makes me think how true friendship is.Nowada
52、ys, the word friendship has been used very often that it has lost its meaning. Some jokingly put it that friends are made to be taken advantage. In my opinion, true friendship doesnt mean that when you need your friends help, youll treat them to dinner. True friendship is the communication of the he
53、arts and understand of the souls. True friends keep you in the mind, no matter where they are. Once you have found such true friends, do treasure him. With friendship, life proves happily and harmonious.Correction 3(2019届湖北宜昌示范高中协作体期中)Swimming is my favorite sport. I usually swims in a swimming pool
54、 close to that I live. Yesterday, my friend Tony and I decide to go swimming in the sea. It turned out to be one of the most exciting experiences I had ever had. At first, seen the waves coming one after another, I was afraid. Though I was not a bad swimmer in the swimming pool, but swimming in the
55、sea was different. I was just about to give it up while I suddenly noticed a little boy walking towards the sea calm. Weak as he seemed, he went straight into the sea with any hesitation. Encouraged by her, I overcame my fear and finally made successful attempt.Correction 4(2019届湖南浏阳六校期中联考)One Monda
56、y afternoon, we were playing basketball in playground while I suddenly slipped and fell over. On seeing that, all my classmates rushed to me. Under the help of several other students, Li Xiang, one of my best friend put me on his back and head to for the clinic immediately. It turned out that my rig
57、ht ankle got injured but I had to be sent to hospital. He did not leave until an ambulance arrived. The following day, he came to see me. To my greatly relief, he brought textbooks to them and helped me with my lessons. It was a great pleasure to have such a devoting friend.Correction 5(2019届福建长汀一中等
58、六校联考)Recently many schools have taken up tough measures to forbid students to bring their smartphones to school. Therefore, some students break this rule and some even play with their smartphones in class and that makes the teachers discouraging.The disadvantages of students bringing smartphones to
59、school is obvious. On the one hand, smartphones can distract students attentions. On other hand, some students may get access for some unhealthy websites, which does harm to their development. Whats bad, some students are likely to compare the brands of their smartphones with their classmates.In my
60、opinion, I strong support banning smartphones in schools. Only by this means can you devote more energies to our study and achieve our goals.Correction 6(2018福建漳州二次调研)I am so glad you can visit me in London. Knowing that youve never travel outside of Asia, Id tell you a bit about you can expect to f
61、ind. When I first arrived, I found that London is such a international city. There are many Chinese restaurants, so British people hardly eat Chinese food for breakfast. Most of them get used to bacon or egg with a few slices of toast. Tipping always puzzles me. If you want to avoid to getting confu
62、sed, you should always leave 10% of the bill to the service. Besides, its very difficult for our Chinese to understand British humour. So dont be surprised when you dont think anything is funny. The majority of British people is friendly. Anyway, I am so looking forward to your visit there.Correctio
63、n 7(2018安徽合肥二次质检)Last Saturday our class went hiking in a countryside. We meet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily while a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so frightening and even burst into tears. One of my classmate found a long
64、rope and we finally got him out. Fortunately, she didnt suffer seriously injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted. We managed to sending her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience well never forget it, though we didnt enjoy ourselves very much that day.Correction 8(2018河南新乡二模)My
65、 friend and I always played outdoor when we were young. During spring rains, we climbed up to our comfort tree house and played cards. Then in the amused autumn, we rolled around in the orange leaf. This all end one day, when my friend received video game player for his birthday. In the begin, he so
66、metimes invited me over to play with him. But this began to happen less and less, because of his house was small, and his mother didnt like visitors. Now we never see each another, as he is always played his video games. I miss my friend.Correction 9(2017四川宜宾二诊)Dear Editor,Im a senior high school st
67、udent, named Li Hua. Nowadays, it was fashionable for us students to have iPads. Using an iPad, you can listen to music, download learning materials, and so on. Obvious, it greatly helps us at our studies. Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphon
68、es, that makes teachers and other students annoying. Some of them even waste time play video games in class.In my opinions, the classroom is a place to study in. Therefore, we should make a good use of iPads to improve our studies. Meanwhile, schools should make some rules instruct the students to u
69、se iPads properly.Correction 10(2017山东枣庄一模)It is my grandfathers eighty birthday today. As usual, all my family got together to celebrate him. We bought him a lot of present, and my father prepared a big birthday cake. At the dinner party, we sing the Happy Birthday song. He made a wish happy before
70、 he blew the candles out. With a surprise gift, I cooked a dish for him! As I had never cooked before, he was so surprised that the dish was served. My grandfather said that it was the better birthday gift he had received. Actually, my mother helped me cooked it and I had been practiced for several
71、days.C组 提升训练Correction 1(2019届湖南三湘名校教育联盟一次联考)Last Sunday, my family went for walk in a nearby park. We wanted to breathe the fresh air and having fun there. However, when going out, we find it was cloudy and smoggy. Only a few people were walking quick on the streets wearing their masks. I was wonde
72、ring why was the matter when my little brother began to cough loudly. Suddenly I realized that it was air pollution. So we had to go to home that day. Smoke from cars, buses, and factories make the air dirty, that is harmful to our health. I think they should all do some thing to keep the air clean.
73、Correction 2(2019届安徽皖南八校一次联考)Many a child take what their parents do for them for granted. They havent realized the meaning of be grateful. But they always get angry with their parents because they dont get what they want. My friend once told me the news that a little girl went out of the house and
74、refuse to return home as her parents did not give her enough money. I was so shocking to hear it. I would never ask much from my parents because I knew it was not easy for him to make a living. And I always feel so thankful to what they have offered to me. If someone who gives me a hand when I am in
75、 need, I will remember him and if I have a chance, I will pay him back. In short, it is a grateful heart makes us becoming kind people and create a harmonious environment.Correction 3(2019届福建安溪一中、养正一中、惠安一中、泉州实验中学期中)I have a older sister. Her name is Monica. He is very pretty and smart, with long bla
76、ck hair and big eye. She is always ready to help me and look after me. But she was used to be easy to get angry, especially that she was with family members only. Once I talked to her this problem. Feeling terrible sorry, she agreed with me but promised to make a change. She also thanked me for maki
77、ng her aware of her problem. She had made huge progress on that bad habit so far. Now I like her even more and I am glad I have so a great sister.Correction 4(2019届吉林省重点中学二次联考)Growing up, I didnt have much ambition and I was wasted a lot of time on video games. One day, I picked up a book, that was
78、about seven habits of highly successful teenagers. We dont remember much about the story, and one key concept that truly impressed me was the idea of time. The book stressed the importance of use our time wisely. During that time I was aimless person. It sounded crazily, but I determined to read it.
79、 After I read it, I make a decision to spending as much time as possible just reading. Ive made great progresses since then.Correction 5(2019届安徽江淮十校二次联考)Miss Zhang is one of my most favorite teachers. She has a slim build and always ties his hair in a ponytail. She is 35, but she looks quite young a
80、t her age. Which impresses me most is Miss Zhangs way of teaching. She devotes herself to teach and prepares well for every class. Not only did she help us to understand “what”, but she explores “why”. She encourages us to think independent and have discussions among ourselves when we faced with pro
81、blems. She is such a inspiring person with a strong sense of responsibilities, and we all respect and admire her.Correction 6(2018江西赣州3月模拟)My name is Li Ming, a student studied in Ganzhou No.18 Middle School. I am eager become a volunteer in your group and I can work till my next term begins. I have
82、 a real talent on singing. I get first prize in the singing competition in our school last year. However, I can teach children how to sing songs. Besides, I play the piano very well, that will help a lot in my work. I am warm-hearted and always be ready to help. Helping other people makes myself hap
83、py. I believe I can make friend with the children. I hope I am fortunately enough to be a member of your group.Correction 7(2018安徽江南十校3月联考)It is no doubt that we produce lots of garbage every day. However, few people have the habit of sorting waste.This will bring lots of problem. First, the value o
84、f things that can be recycled or reused, such as plastic and paper, are reduced. Besides, deal with some waste by burning it will cause serious environmentally pollution.For these reasons, the government should take effectively measures to call for waste sorting. More publicity campaigns and public
85、service advertisements should run to raise public aware. The government can also design the colorful garbage cans with clear waste-sorting images on it to encourage people to sort waste.Correction 8(2018山西二模)My mum is a volunteer in a hospital. She brought dinner every Sunday to the people attending
86、 their relatives who are in hospital.One Sunday, Mum asked me to help her with dinner. At the first, I didnt want to, so in the end she persuaded me to go. Half an hour late, we arrived. We quickly set up a table and started giving people food. The people serving there were deeply moved and showed o
87、ur gratefulness. It was amazed to look at peoples face, especially those of children. It made me feel gladly for being there.That day I realized that the value of life is not only about receiving, but giving as well.Correction 9(2017江西八所重点中学4月联考)Last night I was at a coffee shop. There was a wonderf
88、ully music show. As I got up to get a cup of coffee and a cookie, I notice a middle-aged woman near me. Clearly, she had caught in a fire of some kind. His face was so badly burned that she looked very tight. I thought about how brave she was to come out but appear in public. When I returned back to
89、 my seat, I turned towards the woman and said, “Isnt he a wonderful performers?” And I gave her the largest smile I was able to give. To my pleased, she looked right at me and gave me a huge smile for return. It was her smile which made her whole face light up last night. She was beautiful.Correctio
90、n 10(2017河北衡水中学下学期期中)Is creativity a natural gift like good looks, or is it something that it can be acquired like knowledge? If we analyze the creative process careful, we might know what it is and what it might work. The creative process has always accepted as the source of all important works in
91、the arts, so we should not think the creativity plays a role only in the arts. Every major scientific discover begins with someone seeing the world differently from the way others sees it. And this is which creativity is all aboutimagining the world in the new way. We all have the potential to imagi
92、ne the world in an absolutely new way. In fact, we are born for it. A组 短文改错高考真题答案Correction 1 (2019课标全国)Correction 2(2019课标全国)Correction 3(2019课标全国)Correction 4(2018课标全国)During my last winter holiday, I went to the countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I a big change there. The first
93、time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and animals. Last winter when I went again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of. They also had a small pond in they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by the fish. I felt that their life
94、 had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, he agreed.Correction 5(2018课标全国)When I was little, night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all in the sitting room. As kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matte
95、r how many times I asked to them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to that playing card games would help my brain. Still I was unwilling to play the games them sometimes. I didnt realize how right my parents until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me I was a child turn
96、ed out to be very useful later in my life.Correction 6(2018课标全国)It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just. Everyone was silent, to see who would be called upon to read his her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager to take part in the class activity; others were nervous and
97、 anxious. I had done homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, “The classroom is a place for learning and that learning from textbooks, and as well.” , I raised my hand.Correction 7(2017课标全国)In the summer
98、 holiday following my birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard the/my first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructors orders, once I started the car, my mind blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the ,“
99、Speed up!”“Slow down!”“ left!”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes , the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a stop just in the middle the road.Correction 8(2017课标全国)Mr. and Mrs. Zhang / all work in our school. They liv
100、e far from the school, and it takes them about hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are in planting vegetables in their garden, is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. , they
101、often get some useful from the Internet. When summer , they will invite their students to pick the fresh vegetables!Correction 9(2017课标全国)When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I grown not only physically, also mentally in the past few years. About one month after t
102、his photo was , I entered my second year of high school and a new member of the school music club. Around me in the/this picture are the things were very important in my life at that time:car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and colle
103、cting the music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of high school days.Correction 10(2016课标全国)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some p
104、eople even to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is . Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables high quality oil are for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in short period of time. Instead, he hopes that business will grow .Correction 11(2016课标全
105、国)The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about to do during the holiday. We can between staying at home and a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about the world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can
106、broaden view and gain we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we /can go to places of interest nearby. I that it is a good idea. It does not cost , yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 12(2016课标全国)The teenage from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and
107、 years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by . However, my parents didnt seem to think . They always me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be from them. I showed them I was independent
108、by strange clothes. Now I am leaving home college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to wheneverI need help.Correction 13(2015课标全国)When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in the c
109、ountryside. There the air is clean the mountains are green. Unfortunately, the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very problem. The we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. rare animals ar
110、e dying out. We must ways to protect environment. If we fail to do so, well live to regret it.Correction 14(2015课标全国)One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his .It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After at the
111、 toy for some time, he turned around and found /where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and to cry. A woman saw him crying and him to wait outside shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw his parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were worried.” Tony promised her that this would
112、never happen again.Correction 15(2014课标全国)Nearly five years ,and with the help our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since thenfor all these we been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As a result, the plants are growing .The fruits are small
113、in size, but juicy and .There are so that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but / we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing tomatoes at no cost!Correction 16(2014课标全国)My dream school starts
114、 at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We need to do so homework. Therefore, we have more time after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school like a big garden.
115、There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or by the lake listening to music. The teachers here are kind and.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.Correction 17(2016四川)It is Mothers Day today. Though its a western fe
116、stival, its popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, she has to do most of the . She is a great mother. Both Dad I planned to do something on Mothers Day. We up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in hand. I asked
117、 Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked inthe kitchen. The dishes /what I cooked were Moms . At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mothers Day!” Mom was grateful and .Correction 18(2016浙江)When I was a very young , my father created a regular practice I remember well years . Every time he arrived h
118、ome at the end of the day, wed greet at the door. He would ask who we and pretend not to us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they , my father would lift my sister and me up to sit the top of the fridge. It was b
119、oth and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Correction 19(2015浙江)My old classroom was interesting because three of the classroom were made glass. I enjoyed close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could se
120、e the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around .Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the cl
121、ass was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in a hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me like I was dreaming. I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.Correction 20(2015陕西)My soccer coach retired in last week. I wa
122、nted to do special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the biscuits in the world, so I to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really .My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor I was pack
123、ing them up.At party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just to get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me the biscuits with happy laughter!Correction 21(2015四川)Hi,Ja
124、nice,Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want to share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I you last time, I made three new here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. Weve been spending a lot of time in karaoke bars. Its been three Satu
125、rdays now and it really costs me . And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I dont like to go anymore, Im afraid Ill lose their friendship. do you think I should do? If you me, would you talk to ?Please help with me and give me some advice.GraceCorrection 22(2014浙江)I was taking
126、 a train to Londons Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching for the ticket, which was eventually
127、 found under a seat several rows from owner. The person who found ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the their help. If we could show concern to others need, the world would be a bet
128、ter place to live in.Correction 23(2014辽宁)Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors, were hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dogCleo.Weve called several about Cleos early morning barking. It is difficult to why she barks every minute shes
129、 outside. The early morning barking been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.,Cleo tends to bark average of six hours a day. T his morning she barking even before 5 oclock. That is too much for us, considering how the houses are.We appreciate apologies and goodwill, but we hope
130、that you can figure out a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and RoseCorrection 24(2014四川)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk what you should do when a fire alarm off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait for your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close
131、to your teacher and.Dont panic or get out of line, and to remain quiet and .Soon the firefighters will come and put out fire. If its a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing hurt, tell your teacher immediately.B组 模拟精
132、选Correction 1(2019届福建泉港一中、南安国光中学期中联考)Of my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one who makes an impression me. Though he is 50, but he appears very young. Undoubtedly, hes one of the most popular in our school. with other teachers, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various ways t
133、o make his classes lively and interesting. In his point of view, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. Consequently, instead of giving us answers, he is always us to think by whenever he puts forward questions. With his help, weve made rapid , learning how to analyze and problem
134、s. Whata wonderful world of “why” he leads us to! Correction 2(2019届湖北孝感一中、应城一中等五校期中联考)One of my friends sent me a short message, that true friends are one soul in two bodies, which moves me very much and makes me think true friendship is.Nowadays, the word friendship has been used often that it has
135、 lost its meaning. Some jokingly put it that friends are made to be taken advantageof. In my opinion, true friendship doesnt mean that when you need your help, youll treat them to dinner. True friendship is the communication of the hearts and of the souls. True friends keep you in the mind, no matte
136、r where they are. Once you have found such true friends, do treasure . With friendship, life proves and harmonious.Correction 3(2019届湖北宜昌示范高中协作体期中)Swimming is my favorite sport. I usually in a swimming pool close to I live. Yesterday, my friend Tony and I to go swimming in the sea. It turned out to
137、be one of the most exciting experiences I had ever had. At first, the waves coming one after another, I was afraid. Though I was not a bad swimmer in the swimming pool, but swimming in the sea was different. I was just about to give it up I suddenly noticed a little boy walking towards the sea . Wea
138、k as he seemed, he went straight into the sea any hesitation. Encouraged by , I overcame my fear and finally made a successful attempt.Correction 4(2019届湖南浏阳六校期中联考)One Monday afternoon, we were playing basketball inthe playground I suddenly slipped and fell over. On seeing that, all my classmates ru
139、shed to me. the help of several other students, Li Xiang, one of my best put me on his back and to for the clinic immediately. It turned out that my right ankle got injured I had to be sent to hospital. He did not leave until an ambulance arrived. The following day, he came to see me. To my relief,
140、he brought textbooks to and helped me with my lessons. It was a great pleasure to have such a friend.Correction 5(2019届福建长汀一中等六校联考)Recently many schools have taken up tough measures to forbid students to bring their smartphones to school. , some students break this rule and some even play with their
141、 smartphones in class and that makes the teachers .The disadvantages of students bringing smartphones to school obvious. On the one hand, smartphones can distract students . On the other hand, some students may get access some unhealthy websites, which does harm to their development. Whats , some st
142、udents are likely to compare the brands of their smartphones with their classmates.In my opinion, I support banning smartphones in schools. Only by this means can devote more energies to our study and achieve our goals.Correction 6(2018福建漳州二次调研)I am so glad you can visit me in London. Knowing that y
143、ouve never outside of Asia, Id tell you a bit about what you can expect to find. When I first arrived, I found that London is such international city. There are many Chinese restaurants, British people hardly eat Chinese food for breakfast. Most of them get used to bacon or with a few slices of toas
144、t. Tipping always puzzles me. If you want to avoid to getting confused, you should always leave 10% of the bill the service. Besides, its very difficult for Chinese to understand British humour. So dont be surprised when you dont think anything is funny. The majority of British people friendly. Anyw
145、ay, I am so looking forward to your visit .Correction 7(2018安徽合肥二次质检)Last Saturday our class went hiking in countryside. We at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so and even burst into tears. One of
146、 my found a long rope and we finally got out. Fortunately, she didnt suffer injuries, but it seemed that her ankle was slightly twisted. We managed to her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience well never forget it, though we didnt enjoy ourselves very much that day.Correction 8(2018河南新乡二模)My
147、friend and I always played when we were young. During spring rains, we climbed up to our tree house and played cards. Then in the autumn, we rolled around in the orange . This all one day, when my friend received a video game player for his birthday. In the , he sometimes invited me over to play wit
148、h him. But this began to happen less and less, because of his house was small, and his mother didnt like visitors. Now we never see each , as he is always his video games. I miss my friend.Correction 9(2017四川宜宾二诊)Dear Editor,Im a senior high school student, named Li Hua. Nowadays, it fashionable for
149、 us students to have iPads. Using an iPad, can listen to music, download learning materials, and so on. , it greatly helps us our studies. Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, makes teachers and other students . Some of them even waste tim
150、e video games in class.In my , the classroom is a place to study in. Therefore, we should make a good use of iPads to improve our studies. Meanwhile, schools should make some rulesto instruct the students to use iPads properly.Correction 10(2017山东枣庄一模)It is my grandfathers birthday today. As usual,
151、all my family got together to celebrate him/.We bought him a lot of ,and my father prepared a big birthday cake. At the dinner party, we the Happy Birthday song. He made a wish before he blew the candles out. a surprise gift, I cooked a dish for him! As I had never cooked before, he was so surprised
152、 the dish was served. My grandfather said that it was the birthday gift he had received. Actually, my mother helped me it and I had been practiced for several days.C组 提升训练Correction 1(2019届湖南三湘名校教育联盟一次联考)Last Sunday, my family went for a walk in a nearby park. We wanted to breathe the fresh air and
153、fun there. However, when going out, we it was cloudy and smoggy. Only a few people were walking on the streets wearing their masks. I was wondering was the matter when my little brother began to cough loudly. Suddenly I realized that it was air pollution. So we had to go to home that day. Smoke from
154、 cars, buses, and factories the air dirty, is harmful to our health. I think should all do some to keep the air clean.Correction 2(2019届安徽皖南八校一次联考)Many a child what their parents do for them for granted. They havent realized the meaning of grateful. they always get angry with their parents because t
155、hey dont get what they want. My friend once told me the news that a little girl went out of the house and to return home as her parents did not give her enough money. I was so to hear it. I would never ask much from my parents because I knew it was not easy for to make a living. And I always feel so
156、 thankful what they have offered to me. If someone who gives me a hand when I am in need, I will remember him and if I have a chance, I will pay him back. In short, it is a grateful heart that makes us kind people and create a harmonious environment.Correction 3(2019届福建安溪一中、养正一中、惠安一中、泉州实验中学期中)I have
157、 older sister. Her name is Monica. is very pretty and smart, with long black hair and big . She is always ready to help me and look after me. But she was used to be easy to get angry, especially she was with family members only. Once I talked to her about this problem. Feeling sorry, she agreed with
158、 me promised to make a change. She also thanked me for making her aware of her problem. She made huge progress on that bad habit so far. Now I like her even more and I am glad I have a great sister.Correction 4(2019届吉林省重点中学二次联考)Growing up, I didnt have much ambition and I was wasted a lot of time on
159、 video games. One day, I picked up a book, was about seven habits of highly successful teenagers. dont remember much about the story, one key concept that truly impressed me was the idea of time. The book stressed the importance of our time wisely. During that time I was an aimless person. It sounde
160、d , but I determined to read it. After I read it, I a decision to as much time as possible just reading. Ive made great since then.Correction 5(2019届安徽江淮十校二次联考)Miss Zhang is one of my most favorite teachers. She has a slim build and always ties hair in a ponytail. She is 35, but she looks quite youn
161、g her age. impresses me most is Miss Zhangs way of teaching. She devotes herself to and prepares well for every class. Not only she help us to understand “what”, but she explores “why”. She encourages us to think and have discussions among ourselves when we are faced with problems. She is such inspi
162、ring person with a strong sense of , and we all respect and admire her.Correction 6(2018江西赣州3月模拟)My name is Li Ming, a student in GanzhouNo.18 Middle School. I am eager to become a volunteer in your group and I can work till my next term begins. I have a real talent singing. I first prize in the sin
163、ging competition in our school last year. , I can teach children how to sing songs. Besides, I play the piano very well, will help a lot in my work. I am warm-hearted and always be ready to help. Helping other people makes happy. I believe I can make with the children. I hope I am enough to be a mem
164、ber of your group.Correction 7(2018安徽江南十校3月联考) is no doubt that we produce lots of garbage every day. However, few people have the habit of sorting waste.This will bring lots of . First, the value of things that can be recycled or reused, such as plastic and paper, reduced. Besides, with some waste
165、by burning it will cause serious pollution.For these reasons, the government should take measures to call for waste sorting. More publicity campaigns and public service advertisements should be run to raise public . The government can also design the colorful garbage cans with clear waste-sorting im
166、ages on to encourage people to sort waste.Correction 8(2018山西二模)My mum is a volunteer in a hospital. She dinner every Sunday to the people attending to their relatives who are in hospital.One Sunday, Mum asked me to help her with dinner. At the first, I didnt want to, in the end she persuaded me to
167、go. Half an hour , we arrived. We quickly set up a table and started giving people food. The people there were deeply moved and showed gratefulness. It was to look at peoples , especially those of children. It made me feel for being there.That day I realized that the value of life is not only about
168、receiving, but giving as well.Correction 9(2017江西八所重点中学4月联考)Last night I was at a coffee shop. There was a music show. As I got up to get a cup of coffee and a cookie, I a middle-aged woman near me. Clearly, she hadbeen caught in a fire of some kind. face was so badly burned that she looked very tig
169、ht. I thought about how brave she was to come out appear in public. When I returned back to my seat, I turned towards the woman and said, “Isnt he a wonderful ?” And I gave her the largest smile I was able to give. To my , she looked right at me and gave me a huge smile return. It was her smile made
170、 her whole face light up last night. She was beautiful.Correction 10(2017河北衡水中学下学期期中)Is creativity a natural gift like good looks, or is it something that it can be acquired like knowledge? If we analyze the creative process , we might know what it is and it might work. The creative process has alwa
171、ys been accepted as the source of all important works in the arts, we should not think the creativity plays a role only in the arts. Every major scientific begins with someone seeing the world differently from the way others it. And this is creativity is all aboutimagining the world in new way. We all have the potential to imagine the world in an absolutely new way. In fact, we are born it.
