1、Deep South Module 1 Section Writing 描述地点的文章写作技法指导佳作构建示例目录Contents 写作技法指导一、写作要领写此类文章应注意以下几点：1内容一般包括该地方的位置、面积、人口、历史、气候、特产等。也可以适当地融入人文风貌，简单介绍当地的文化遗址、民间风俗及有趣的生活方式等。但是一定要抓住该地方的主要特色，这样才能给读者留下深刻的印象。2要遵循一定的写作顺序。描述该地方的位置时，首先要找好中心点，再由近及远，也可以先整体后局部，或按照一定时间顺序或空间层次。描述时可以适当使用过渡性连接词。3可以适当运用比喻句式。形象的比喻可以给读者展示一幅生动的画面
2、。二、增分佳句1There is a tall shelf on the left of my room.(on the right of,in the front of,near the window)2Above the bed,there is a large painting of the blue sea.(on the right of the room)3The office building is in the east of the campus.(in the south of,to the west of,in front of,behind,at the back of
3、)4The monument,which was built in 1894,stands in the center of the square.5China is located in Asia.(be situated，be surrounded by,lie to the east of)6It covers a huge area of 9,600,000 square kilometers.佳作构建示例【题目要求】请根据下面的提示，以“Antarctica”为题写一篇 100词左右的短文。主要内容如下：1南极洲在地球的最南端；2它的面积大约为 1 400 万平方公里；3它是世界上最
4、寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆盖；4它的自然资源有铁、煤等；生存的动物如企鹅、鲸等；5目前只有一些科学工作者居住在那里。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为一篇_；2确定中心人称：本文主要人称为_；3确定主体时态：使用_。说明文第三人称一般现在时二、构思第一部分：概括南极的地理位置。第二部分：介绍南极的占地面积、特点、生存的动物和自然资源。第三部分：说明目前只有一些科学工作者居住在那里，将来有一天也许会有很多住户住在那里。第二步：核心词汇想周全1_ 最南端2_位于3_在方面丰富4_目前5_适应6_包括extreme south lie in be rich in up to now ad
5、apt to including 第三步：由词扩句雏形现1南极洲位于地球的最南端，它是世界上最寒冷的大洲。(简单句)Antarctica lies in the extreme south of the earth.It is thecoldest continent in the world.2它的面积大约 1 400 万平方公里，常年有冰雪覆盖。(cover an area of,be covered with)It covers an area of about 14 million square kilometers.Itis covered with cold thick ice a
6、nd deep snow all year long.3它拥有许多我们都知道的动物如企鹅、鲸鱼和海豹。他们已经适应了它的极端条件。(简单句)It has many well-known animals such as penguins,whales and seals._They have adapted to its extreme conditions.4此外，它含有丰富的矿产资源，包括铁、煤等。(whats more)_including iron,coal and so on.Whats more,it is rich in mineral resources 第四步：句式升级造亮点1
7、用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句改写句 12用 v.-ing 形式作状语改写句 2Antarctica,which is the coldest continent in the world,lies in the extreme south of the earth.Covering an area of about 14 million square kilometers,itis covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all year long.3用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句改写句 3It has many well-know
8、n animals such as penguins,whales and seals,which have adaptedto itsextremeconditions.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇AntarcticaAntarctica,which is the coldest continent in the world,lies in the extreme south of the earth.Covering an area of about 14 million square kilometers,it is covered with cold thick ice and deep s
9、now all year long.However,it is a very rich continent.It has many well-known animals such as penguins,whales and seals,which have adapted to its extreme conditions.Whats more,it is rich in mineral resources including iron,coal and so on.Up to now only some visiting scientists live there.Maybe one day lots of households will live there.