1、Foreign Food Module 3 Section Writing 介绍餐桌礼仪 写作技法指导佳作构建示例目录Contents 写作技法指导一、写作要领在人们的日常生活中，怎么也离不开饮食、吃饭、喝茶等行为，不论形成好的习惯还是坏的习惯，不论喜欢吃什么样的食物。这类文章往往可以写成说明文或是议论文。1写这类文章一定要明确自己的写作方向，明确自己的态度和观点；2在写作中要运用一定的写作方法，清楚地将要写的内容表达出来；3还要表达自己鲜明的观点，以及文章用什么时态来写。二、增分佳句1be supposed to2keepin your left hand3Its polite/impoli
2、te/good manners/bad manners to4While eating,youd better not5You are not allowed toover the dinner.6You should express your thanks to佳作构建示例【题目要求】起源于西方的快餐在中国越来越流行，尤其是在儿童和少年群体之中，备受青睐。为此，美国某饭店快餐部在你校进行了一次调查。请你以“Fast Food”为题，写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文，简单介绍以下几个方面的内容：1快餐受欢迎有其原因；2从营养角度来讲，快餐却远远不能令人满意；3医生的建议；4你的观点：对快餐还是
3、少食为佳。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为一篇_；2确定中心人称：本文主要人称为_；3确定主体时态：使用_。议论文第三人称一般现在时二、构思第一部分：说明现象：现如今，快餐在中国日益流行，尤其是受到孩子们和青少年的欢迎。第二部分：快餐受欢迎有其原因；但从营养角度来讲，快餐却远远不能令人满意。第三部分：说明医生的建议；发表自己的观点：对快餐还是少食为佳。第二步：核心词汇想周全1_ 受欢迎的2_方便的3_点菜4_营养5_远非popular convenient order nutrition far from 第三步：由词扩句雏形现1现如今，快餐在中国日益流行，尤其是受到孩子们和青
4、少年的欢迎。(现在进行时：be popular with)2快餐很方便，可以节省许多时间。(It is convenient to do)Nowadays,fast food is becoming increasingly popular in China.It is especially popular with children and teenagers.It is very convenient to get fast food and it can save a lot of time.3你只是进入一个快餐店，订购你的食物，你订的食物会立刻准备好。(and 并列句)4其次，它的受欢
5、迎程度也来自于快餐店的清洁、舒适的环境和优良的服务。(result from)You just go into a fast food restaurant,order your food,and your food is ready in no time.Secondly,its popularity also results from the clean and comfortable environment of fast food restaurants and the excellent service there.5然而，快餐在营养方面远远不能令人满意，特别是对儿童和年轻人的健康和
6、成长。(especially for；简单句)6因此，医生建议人们，尤其是儿童，应该尽量少吃快餐食品。(asas possible,suggest)However,fast food is far from satisfactory in nutrition,especially for the health and growth of the children and young men.Therefore,doctors suggest that people,especially children,should eat as little fast food as possible.7你
7、太忙了抽不出足够的时间，快餐是最好的选择。(tooto)You are too busy to spare enough time and fast food is the best choice.第四步：句式升级造亮点1把句 1 合成一个简单句2用 sothat句式改写句 23用含 when 时间状语从句改写句 7Nowadays,fast food is becoming increasingly popular in China,especially among children and teenagers.It is so convenient to get fast food tha
8、t it can save a lot of time.Fast food is the best choice when you are too busy to spare enough time.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Fast FoodNowadays,fast food is becoming increasingly popular in China,especially among children and teenagers.There are several reasons for its popularity.First,it is so convenient to get f
9、ast food that it can save a lot of time.You just go into a fast food restaurant,order your food,and your food is ready in no time.Secondly,its popularity also results from the clean and comfortable environment of fast food restaurants and the excellent service there.However,fast food is far from sat
10、isfactory in nutrition,especially for the health and growth of the children and young men.Therefore,doctors suggest that people,especially children,should eat as little fast food as possible.I quite agree to their suggestion.In my opinion,fast food is the best choice when you are too busy to spare enough time.And youd better turn to it once in a while.
