1、10书面表达精练精析20篇1根据所给内容提示，以My home为题，写一篇80100词的短文。提示：1) 120-square-metre flat on the fourth floor2) three bedrooms (for my parents, grandparents and me)3) a study, a computer4) a bathroom and a shower, a large balcony, a kitchenMy home_2根据所给提示以“My dream house”为题，写一篇短文。80词左右。要点如下：1. 房子很大，是一个有花园和游泳池的三层房屋
2、。花园里长满了花，很好看。2. 底楼有一个大的厨房和餐厅，我可以邀请20多个朋友来吃饭。3. 二楼有电脑房，和一个大客厅，可以和朋友在客厅聊天、看电视。4. 我有自己的卧室，大又干净。My dream house_3请根据以下提示，以“My Neighborhood”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍你的社区情况。提示：1. 不大，但非常漂亮；2. 有个大型游泳池，我每周游泳两次；a big swimming pooltwice a week3. 有个篮球场，经常举办篮球比赛； have basketball matches4. 有个大型购物中心，可以买到各种各样的东西； many kinds
3、 of things5. 人们很友好，彼此相互帮助。be friendly to each otherMy Neighborhood_4根据下面的汉语提示，写一篇短文介绍你的家乡，70词左右，包含以下要点。要点：1我的家乡离徐州市不远，很美丽；2我家离市中心乘公交车约40分钟的路程，我家周围有许多建筑物；3市中心有购物商场、电影院；4我的家乡空气清新，家乡的人友好、善良。_5假如你是Jenny。Sandy和Millie下周要来你家乡参观。请根据提示，通过邮件向他们介绍一下有关你家乡的情况，要求要点要全面。80词左右。1.你很乐意领他们参观你家乡。2.镇中心附近有一个剧院，一个青少年活动中心（y
4、outh centre）和一个购物中心。3.人们在剧院欣赏戏剧，在青少年活动中心有很多有趣的事可做，玩不同的球类游戏，上网（on the internet）查找很多信息。周末许多人去购物中心。4.空气很新鲜，人们喜欢住在这儿。Dear Sandy and Millie,_Yours,Jenny6根据提示，写一篇题为“My hometown”的短文，约5060词。提示：1. 位置：在江苏沿海；2. 现代化小镇，有许多高楼；3. 有四家大型购物中心，可以买到各种东西；4. 没有太多的空气污染（pollution）；5. 人民富裕（rich）、幸福。My hometown_7 Simon邀请Neil
5、到他家参加他的生日聚会。请根据提示写一篇70词左右的短文。提示：从学校大门出来，乘地铁，从B出口出来，然后向右转，一直走并经过天桥。然后沿着第五大街直走，经过红楼，当你来到红绿灯处时，过马路。继续一直走到路的尽头，你会看到一棵树，Simon家就在它的后面。_ 8你的远方朋友Kathy想从北京到你所在的海滨城市玩几天。请根据以下要点给她写一封信，告诉她怎样到你家等内容。1.出火车站乘9路公交车至迎宾路社区；2.你家在社区中心，即在公交站后边；3.你家离大海不远，可以每天步行去那儿。注意：1.可以适当增加细节；2.词数：80词左右，短文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Kathy，_Yo
6、urs, Sue9. 假如你是Millie，你打算在家举办一个生日聚会，请你根据以下提示，给Simon写一封邀请信，请他来参加聚会。80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示：1.时间：4月21日，本周六，下午两点。2父母会准备大量的食物和饮料。3路线：乘地铁，从A出口出来，向右转，沿着淮海路走，然后在交通灯处左转，直走，就会在左边看见一家邮局，我家就在邮局的后面。Dear Simon，I am going to have a birthday party at home this Saturday. _I am looking forward to seeing you at th
7、e party.Yours，Millie10假设你所生活的小区将在这周末举行一个互帮互助的活动，为社区居民提供一些便民服务。请你根据所学内容并适当发挥想象，帮助社区中心写一篇80词的英语书面通知。通知的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入要求词数。NoticeWe are going to have an activity called “Helping each other” at the community centre this Saturday afternoon._Everyone is welcome!Community CentreJanuary 21, 2016参考答案：1例文My ho
8、meMy family live in a 120-square-metre flat on the fourth floor. It has three bedrooms-one is for my grandparents, one is for my parents and another is for me. There is a study in our flat. It is small but comfortable for me to study in, and I have a computer in it. We have a bathroom and a shower.
9、Its easy for us to take a bath or shower. Our balcony is very large. There is also a kitchen. Look! My mother is busy cooking lunch for us.【解析】题干解读：题目要求以“My home”为题写一篇介绍自己家的短文，要求包含提示的所有内容，字数在80100词之间。写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时，采用第一人称口吻。主要具体介绍自己家有多大，几个房间以及房间的用途是什么。作文可多利用“there be结构”。2My dream houseMy dream hou
10、se is very big. It has three floors with a garden and a swimming pool. The garden is full of flowers and looks very beautiful. On the ground floor，there is a big kitchen and a dining room. I can invite over twenty friends to have dinner. On the first floor，there is a computer room and a big living r
11、oom. My friends and I can chat and watch TVin the living rom. I have a bedroom of my own. It is big and clean.【解析】这是一篇话题作文。以“My dream house”为题，写一篇短文。80词左右。时态主要为一般现在时。人称主要为第三人称。本文较简单，所给词汉语提示，就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点列出提纲，所写内容必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。尽量使用高分句型。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再
12、读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：我梦想的房子我梦想的房子很大。它是一个有花园和游泳池的三层房屋。花园里长满了花，很好看。底楼有一个大的厨房和餐厅，我可以邀请20多个朋友来吃饭。二楼有电脑房，和一个大客厅，可以和朋友在客厅聊天、看电视。我有自己的卧室。它又大又干净。【点睛】书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致
13、等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。3One possible version:My NeighbourhoodMy neighbourhood is not very big but beautiful. There is a swimming pool. I go swimming twice a week. There is a basketball cour
14、t. We often have basketball matches there. There is also a large shopping mall. We can buy different kinds of things there. People here are very friendly. They often help each other. Welcome to my neighbourhood.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料文写作，根据题干所给的社区情况，结合提示词进行描述；保证内容完整，条理清晰。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主
15、，在写作时可写成一个段落，但是要分清层次；第一个层次总述社区情况；第二层次描述社区的游泳池、篮球场和购物中心；第三个层次描述社区的邻居都很友好，欢迎大家来社区。4One possible version:My hometown is not far from Xuzhou. It is very beautiful. It takes about 40 minutes to go to the city centre from my home by bus. There are many buildings around my home. In the centre of the city,
16、there are shopping malls and cinemas. The air is fresh in my hometown. People here are kind and friendly. I love my hometown.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容写一篇短文介绍自己的家乡。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍家乡的位置、周边环境、配套设施以及家乡的人等内容。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。5Dear Sandy and Millie，Im very happy to
17、 show you around my hometown.There is a theatre，a youth centre and a shopping mall near the centre of the town. People often enjoy the opera in the theatre. People can do many interesting things in the youth centre. We can play different ball games and look for a lot of information on the Internet.
18、At weekends many people go shopping in the shopping mall.The air is very fresh in my hometown and people like living here. Welcome to my hometown.Yours，Jenny【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍自己家乡的短文。题目中给出的材料较为详细，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，注意文后要适当表达自己的感想。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时态来叙述。注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下
19、文之间可以适当使用连接词。【详解】写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。【点睛】写作之前要认真阅读所给提示，确定文章中心。注意文体、人称和时态。文章要有层次、流畅。可以适当发挥，写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文的紧密联系，要符合逻辑关系。表达要清晰明确，使用短语
20、，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。6My hometownI live with my family in a town near the sea in Jiangsu Province. It is a modern town. It is small but beautiful. There are a lot of tall buildings in the town. And there are four big shopping malls too. We can buy all kinds of things here. There is less air pollution
21、here. We are all living a rich and happy life here.【解析】这是一篇要求介绍自己的家乡文章。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。7One passible version: Here is the route to Simons home. Walk out of the school gate. Take the underg
22、round, get out at Exit B and turn right. Walk straight on and youll see a bridge. Then cross the bridge. Walk alongFifth Street. Youll pass the Red Building. Cross the road when you are at the traffic lights. Walk on until you get to the end of the road. You will see a tree. Simons home is behind it
23、.【解析】这是一篇材料作文。【详解】英语作文一般分为三个部分第一部分：开篇点题交代写作目的：介绍怎么去Simon家的路线。第二部分：具体内容描述具体路线：从学校大门出来，乘地铁，从B出口出来，然后向右转，一直走并经过天桥。然后沿着第五大街直走，经过红楼，当你来到红绿灯处时，过马路。继续一直走到路的尽头，你会看到一棵树，Simon家就在它的后面。第三部分：提醒对方不要错过自己的房子。8例文Dear KathyWelcome to my hometown! Now I am happy to tell you the way to my house. After you come out of t
24、he train station，you can take the Number 9 bus to Yingbin Road Community. My home is in the centre of the community. Its behind the bus stop. You cant miss it. By the way, my home is not far from the sea. So we can walk there every day. The sea is very beautiful. I think you will have a great time h
25、ere. Yours，Sue【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，写信告诉Kathy怎样到我家。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Now I am happy to，My home is，I think等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头欢迎Kathy来我的家乡，接下来介绍怎样到我家，最后祝愿她在这里玩得高兴。此处the way to, come out of, in the centre o
26、f, by the way, have a great time等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。9Dear Simon，I am going to have a birthday party at home this Saturday. I would like to invite you to my party. The party will start at 2 pm. on 21 April. My parents will prepare plenty of food and drinks for us. We will also sing together and play gam
27、es.You can come to my home by underground.You can get out at Exit A. Turn right and walk along Huaihai Road. Then turn left at the traffic lights and walk straight on. You will see a post office on your left. My home is behind it.I am looking forward to seeing you at the party.Yours，Millie【解析】这是一篇给材
28、料作文，给Simon写一封邀请信，请他来参加我的生日聚会。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am going to，I would like to，We will等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我要邀请你参加我的生日聚会，接下来介绍生日聚会的情况以及来我家的路线，最后我期望在聚会上看见你。此处would like to, invite sb to, by unde
29、rground, get out, turn left, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。10One possible version:NoticeWe are going to have an activity called “Helping each other” at the community centre this Saturday afternoon.Some volunteers will come here and help us with some problems. Mr. Zhang and Mr. Wang are good engin
30、eers. If there is something wrong with your broken TV sets, computers or fridges, you can ask them for help. Miss Yang, a good English teacher, will give children a talk on how to study English well.There are also some doctors from the community hospital. They will help us with our health problems.It will begin at 9:00 a.m.Everyone is welcome!Community CentreJanuary 21, 2016【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一则通知。要求结合给出的开头和结尾，根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态以一般将来时为主。作文要分别介绍活动的时间、内容和志愿者会分别来帮忙做什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
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