1、2014高考英语书面表达系列系列（73）及参考范文第一节 基础写作 （共1小题；满分15分）H7N9禽流感是一种极其危险的病毒，正在国内流行，请用英语写一篇短文介绍“如何预防禽流感”。写作内容1. 现状：截至2013年5月3日，全国128人感染H7N9病毒，27人死亡。2. 目的：预防禽流感3. 措施：1. 保持良好的个人卫生习惯，如勤洗手、保持室内通风。2. 多进行体育锻炼，加强营养，增强个人体质，提高抵抗力。3. 避免接触和食用病死禽、畜。4. 注意：一旦出现发热，尤其是高热，要及时就医。参考词汇禽流感：bird flu营养：nutrition抵抗力：resistance写作要求只能用5个
2、句子表达全部内容评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【参考范文】基础写作 （共1小题；满分15分）A possible version:By May 3, 2013, 128 people in our country had been affected with the virus H7N9 and 27 had died from it. In order to keep away from the dangerous bird flu, you should keep a healthy habit, like frequently washing your hands and
3、 keeping your rooms open to the wind. You should also take more exercise and increase your nutrition to build up your body and strengthen your resistance. Moreover, dont touch or eat birds or animals that have died of disease.Once you have a fever especially a high fever, go to see the doctor right
4、away.书面表达假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60。_范文借鉴Green Action in Our ClassApril 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to pl
5、ant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some
6、photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.We feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment.书面表达你作为你校的课外活动小组的成员，搜集了中国历年在奥运会期间取得的金牌数。请根据下表写一篇英语短文，描述一下中国体育的发展与进步，并陈述自己的想法。TimePlacesNumber of gold medalsIn 1984In Los Angeles, USA12In 1988
7、In Seoul, South Korea5In 1992In Barcelona, Spain16In 1996In Atlanta, USA16In 2000In Sydney, Australia28In 2004In Athens, Greece32In 2008In Beijing, China 51要求：1.所写短文必须根据表格中所列要点；2可适当增删细节以使行文连贯；3词数在150词左右，已经写好的开头不记入在内。In the history of the Olympic Games, Chinese athletes had never received a gold meda
8、l until 1984._思路点拨该短文介绍中国历年在奥运会期间的金牌数时，要避免句式单一；同时要发表自己感想。范文借鉴In_the_history_of_the_Olympic_Games,_Chinese_athletes_had_never_received_a_gold_medal_until_1984,_which was the turning point for China. At the 23rd Olympics, China won 12 gold medals for the first time. The gold medals won by China increa
9、sed from 5 in 1988 to 16 in 1992 and 1996 and to 28 in 2000. In 2004, China won as many as 32 gold medals which were more than 6 times the number in 1988. More and more people took part in the Olympic Games and in 2008, we successfully hosted the 29th Olympics and won as many as 51 gold medals, rank
10、ing first in the world for the first time.I feel proud of these changes for they show the rapid development and progress in sports in China. China shows the world what a wonderful nation she is.亮点回放1介绍取得的金牌数时，重点突出，毫不拖泥带水。2非限制性定语从句、v.ing形式作结果状语等高级句式为本文增色不少。书面表达 “地球一小时”，是为应对全球气候变化所发起的一项活动，号召每年3月份最后一个周
11、六的20302130，统一熄灯一小时。然而，随着越来越多国家和城市的加入，其弊端也逐步显现。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，请根据以下要点用英语给某英文报社写一封信：1指出活动的目的(宣传环保)；2指出活动的必要性(环境恶化)；3指出活动的弊端(事故和费电)；4表达出你的观点。注意：1.词数120150；2可适当增加细节。Dear_editor，I_am_glad_to_write_to_you_to_express_my_idea_about_the_activity_Earth_Hour._I really hope our environment becomes better and bet
12、ter.Yours faithfully，Li Hua范文借鉴Dear_editor，I_am_glad_to_write_to_you_to_express_my_idea_about_the_activity_Earth_Hour. Its an activity to call on the world to face the challenge of the global warming and take action to protect our environment. Because of human activities, the globe is becoming warme
13、r and warmer, the enviornment is being damaged and the Earth is bleeding. So, its necessary to have Earth Hour to attract peoples sense of protecting our enviornment.However, as more and more countries and cities attend the activities, it also gives rise to many problems. Some traffic accidents are
14、caused. Some people have to use candles for light and thus it leads to another form of damaging the enviornment. And in fact, when people switch off or on the lights, instead it will waste more electricity.Therefore, in my opinion, we should change the form of holding Earth Hour or make good prepara
15、tion before Earth Hour comes. And above all, we should have the sense of saving energy and protecting our environment in our daily life.I really hope our environment becomes better and better.Yours faithfully，Li Hua书面表达I Believe I Can FlyI used to think that I could not go onAnd life was nothing but
16、 an awful songBut now I knowIf I can see it, then I can do itIf I just believe it, theres nothing to itI believe I can flyI believe I can touch the skyThere are miracles in life I must achieveBut first I know it starts inside of meIf I just spread my wings这是电影太空大灌篮的主题曲(部分歌词)，是一首催人奋进的励志歌曲。请你根据以下提示以“I
17、 Believe I Can Fly”为题，用英语写一篇短文，参加某英语杂志社举办的写作比赛。提示：1.这首歌给你的启示：只要相信自己，就会2以自己(或他人)的一次经历说明主题。注意：1.词数120左右。短文开头已写好，不计入总词数； 2.短文须包括以上提示，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 4.可适当引用歌词中的部分词语，但不得照抄原文歌词。I Believe I Can FlyI Believe I Can Fly is a nice song which tells us that范文借鉴I Believe I Can FlyI Believ
18、e I Can Fly is a nice song which tells us that confidence is very important. Whenever we have confidence, we believe in ourselves. Dreams and confidence are what keep us going on in face of difficulties.Three years ago when I became a senior student, I was not used to the highspeed life so that I be
19、gan to lose my confidence. As a result I did quite badly in exams. However, my teachers and friends kept cheering me up and I was greatly convinced that if I just spread my wings, I could still fly. So today I am sitting here, believing I will surely achieve my dream only if I try.Never give up when
20、ever we meet with any difficulties. Remember confidence is the key to achieving success.第二节 读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）阅读下面的新闻，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。From security guard to top college studentIn Shandong Normal University, one student in particular has drawn much attention as he used to be a security guard at Qi
21、nghua University. During his spare time, he went to different classes at the top university as his goal was to get into college one day. Jia is from a poor rural family in Shandong province. Although he never finished high school, his college ambitions never stopped. He became a security guard at Qi
22、nghua University.Guarding the school and taking free classes at Qinghua during his spare time, self-taught Jia took the college entrance exam in June last year and he made the grade. His family is very proud of his achievement. They didnt know about his college dream. All they wanted from him was a
23、decent marriage and grandchildren. Jia says he has made plans for his new college life and up to now everything has been fine. He wants to finish his degree in three years and then go to an even better graduate school. He says everyone should strive to improve their life and is confident about his f
24、uture.写作内容假设你看完上面这则新闻故事后深有感触，决定在班上英语课前活动中做一个英语演讲。演讲的开头和结尾已为你写好，内容包括以下几点。1以约30词概括上面新闻故事的主要内容。2以约120词发表你的看法，内容包括：(1) 这则新闻故事带给你的感受。(2) 你认为主人公的成功最重要的原因是什么？为什么？(3) 受到的启发并进行呼吁。写作要求1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 写作中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）A possible ve
25、rsion:Fly Your DreamLadies and gentlemen,Today I would like to begin my speech with Jias story.Born poor and previously a safety guard at Qinghua University, Jia never gave up on his college dream. By taking advantage of the academic resources at Qinghua, he finally made his way to college last year
26、.Reading this piece of news, I am both shocked and moved. Jia pursued his dream and made achievements despite his disadvantaged financial and occupational background. Among the many reasons why he succeeded, I would point out the role of having a dream as the most critical one. As we can see around
27、us, many would have dropped their dream and thought of themselves as doomed to be underprivileged the whole life, should they be in Jias shoes. Yet thats far from the worst case. Take a look around us, and it is not unusual to find students with better family background than Jia but without a dream,
28、 spending their youth playing games and surfing the net. In my opinion, they are simply not making their life as worthwhile as a security guard did.Therefore, I would appeal that we all follow the example of Jia, find a dream and fight for it. After all, only if we do have a dream can we fly it and
29、finally realize it!Thats the end of my speech. Thank you.Keys words and sentences in the summary:1. Jia; 2. poor rural family; 3. his college ambitions never stopped;4. Guarding the school and taking free classes at Qinghua University during his spare time, self-taught Jia took the college entrance exam last year and he made it.