专题08 书面表达-2022中考英语逆袭冲刺 好题特快专递（浙江专用）.docx

1、2022中考英语逆袭冲刺 好题特快专递（浙江专用）专题08 书面表达1（2022广东深圳中学一模）北京 2022 年冬奥会吉祥物“冰墩墩”圈粉无数，国内外很多人都想买“冰墩墩”的周边产品，可谓“一墩难求”。假如你是李华，来自冰岛的好友 Luka 给你发邮件， 抱怨买不到“冰墩墩”，询问原因并请求你的帮助。请你根据以下要点回复邮件。要点：1. 表示理解她的心情2. 原因：随着中国文化影响力增大，含中国元素的产品受国内外人的青睐；冰墩墩的设计是中国文化和现代科技的的完美结合；3. 推荐一个可以自己制作冰墩墩的小妙招参考词汇： combination 结合要求:1. 80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，

2、不计入总词数内；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚，行文连贯；4. 标点正确，书面整洁。Dear Luka,Im happy to hear from you. Bing Dwen Dwen is the mascot of Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics. _Your, Lihua2（2022吉林长春一模）2022 年北京冬奥会已经结束，北京冬奥宣讲团将要来我校做有关冬奥会的演讲，假如你是育才学校的一名小记者，请根据提示写一份参加会议的通知。 要求：语法正确，要点齐全，40 词左右，不少于 5 句话。1.时间：2022 年 4 月

3、15 日下午 2.地点：学校礼堂 3.参加人员：全体初三学生 4.宣讲内容：分享奥运故事；宣传奥运精神 _3（2022浙江温州二模）请根据下图中Li Hua的周末安排, 以The Weekend Plan为题, 写一篇约110词的短文谈谈你的看法, 希望同学们通过阅读你的文章有所启发。注意：文中不能出现真实的人名或任何学校名称。The Weekend Plan_4（2022浙江温州一模）赛龙舟是端午节的重要习俗之一。杭州2022年亚运会“赛龙舟”项目在温州举行，将有亚洲各国的运动员到访。假如你是林涛，你学校将举办“龙舟节”接待运动员，让他们体验中国文化。学校国际宜传部征集“龙舟节”活动方案，评

4、选最佳方案。活动方案必须包括活动内容及设计理由等。要求：(1)活动方案须包含图片中至少三项内容，可适当发挥。(2)方案中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息。(3)词数约110词。开头和结尾己给出。不计入总词数。Dear Sir.I am writing to share my plan of Dragon Boat Day for the foreign players._Yours,Lin Tao5（2022浙江温州一模）龙舟赛是端午节重要的活动之一，且2022年亚运会的龙舟比赛项目将在瓯海举行。为了让外国友人更好地了解中国文化，请你根据以下要点以Dragon Boat Racing为题，写一

5、篇约110词的短文，介绍这一传统活动。Dragon boat racingHistoryfor around 2000 years, Qu YuanPopularityan event in Asian GamesRulesa dragon boat team, 20 paddlers(浆手),1 drummer, and 1 steerer(舵手)Spirit1.文章须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.词数约110词（标题已给出，不计入总数。）Dragon Boat Racing_6（2022浙江浙江一模）假如你是李明，你的英国朋友Mike最近收到了三位中国朋友的邀请函（如下图所示），他决定

6、携礼应邀，但不知道中国的送礼习俗，现向你咨询。请根据其中一张邀请函，写一封邮件告诉他你的建议及理由。要求：1.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；2.字数：110词左右，邮件开头已给出，不计入词数。Dear Mike,_Yours,Li Ming7（2022浙江湖州市南浔区南浔锦绣实验学校一模）假如你是李华，你是英语报（成长不烦恼）栏目的主编，近期收到一封来自读者Sarah的信件。请你根据该邮件内容给Sarah回复一封信。Dear Li Hua, I have been staying home for months. I havent studied really hard at hom

7、e these days. Now I find I have too many things to go over but I even dont know how to plan time well. And I am especially weak in science. I am afraid I cant enter my dream high school. Can you give me some advice?Sarah注意：1. 不得出现真实姓名和校名：2. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；3. 词数80100，信件开头已给出，不计入总数。Dear Sarah, Im s

8、orry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. _Yours, Li Hua8（2022浙江温州一模）方言（dialect）有悠久的历史和独特的文化魅力。假如你是王磊，你的外国朋友Tony对你家乡的方言很感兴趣，来信询问相关信息。请你结合自己的生活经历，写一封回信。Dear Wang Lei, Long time no see. Im now learning about Putonghua, but I hear that in China the people of each city, each town and

9、 each village have their special dialect. Whats your dialect? Do you speak it in daily life? Do you think it necessary for young people to learn the dialect? Please tell me more. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Tony注意：1.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；2.词数：110词左右。Dear Tony,I am glad to receive your email a

10、sking something about my hometown dialect._Yours,Wang Lei9（2022浙江金华一模）即将到来的英语学习总结会上，大家畅谈英语学习给我们带来的影响和变化。它拓展了我们的技能，丰富了我们的知识，更练就了我们勇敢开口的胆量。请根据下图内容，结合自己的学习实际，准备一篇英语发言稿。要求：1.内容覆盖图中要点，适当拓展：2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名：3.词数80-100。文章开头供选用，不计入总词数。Learning English has changed meHello, everyone! Im proud to tell you that

11、 learning English has changed me greatly. _10（2022浙江温州一模）中国话是日常交流的工具，也是外国朋友了解和学习中国文化的桥梁。某国际学校的Chinese Club为吸引本校国际生加入社团，举行了宣讲活动。假如你是宣讲员Li Yan，请结合下图写一篇110词的英语演讲稿，宣传学中国话的意义，并发动同学加入Chinese Club。(参考：cross talk相声) 注意：文中不可出现人名或校名。首句已给出，不计入总词数。Hello, everyone. Im Li Yan from Chinese Club. _11（2022浙江嘉兴一中一模）自

12、从我国“全面放开二孩”政策以来，我们身边越来越多的人拥有了兄弟姐妹。有人喜欢有个兄弟姐妹在身边陪伴成长，有人觉得兄弟姐妹让自己不能独得父母的宠爱。假设你是李华，最近，你班将在英语课堂上开展一个主题为“独生子女好，还是有兄弟姐妹好？”的小组讨论，请你根据以下表格内容，结合你自己的亲身感受，选择其中一方观点发言。No brothers or sistersWith brothers or sistersbe freeget more attentiongrow independently.help each othernot feel lonelyget on better with others

13、.注意：1.词数：80-100；2.短文必须包括所选一方的全部信息；3.至少增加1-2条观点以及你个人的亲身感受；4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear classmates,Its really a great honor for me to stand here and have such a good chance to share my idea with you. _Thanks for listening!参考答案：1例文：Dear Luka,Im happy to hear from you. Bing Dwen Dwen is the mascot of Beijing 2

14、022 Winter Olympics.I understand very well that you cant buy Bing Dwen Dwen. I think there are several reasons why it is so popular. First, with the increasing influence of Chinese culture, products with Chinese elements are popular with people at home and abroad. Second, the design of Bing Dwen Dwe

15、n is the perfect combination of Chinas culture and modern technology. Third, the meaning of Bing Dwen Dwen is honest, healthy, lively and cute.Although you cant buy Bing Dwen Dwen, I can teach you to make a Bing Dwen Dwen. First, take a piece of white clay and group it into an egg shape. Then, stick

16、 a little mouth. Next, use black clay to make eye shadow. Stick on the eyes, nose and mouth. Fourth, surround the facial features with colorful mud. Fifth, stick the legs and arms. Last, draw the logo.You can make a Bing Dwen Dwen according to what I said. Wish you success.Your,Lihua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该

17、题目是写一封电子邮件，根据表格内容向好友Luka解释“一墩难求”的原因，并给予帮助，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称叙述；时态上以一般现在时为主。写作时要适当使用一些副词和连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，结构清晰，表达具有条理性。2例文：The Education Tour for 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics will come to our school and make an exciting speech to the students. On the afternoon of April 15, all the Grade 9 stu

18、dents will get together in the school hall. Some famous athletes will share their interesting stories with us. And they will also publicize the spirit of Olympics to us. Meanwhile, you will know more about the Winter Olympics.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇通知。向同学们介绍“北京冬奥宣讲”的有关内容。2.写作指导：本文采用一般将来时，人称以第三人称为主。通知中要

19、涵盖时间，地点，参加人员以及宣讲内容等信息。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。3例文：The Weekend PlanHow do you spend your weekends? I read Li Huas plan. His plan is to spend very little time sleeping and studying. Even eating time is longer than sleeping. He often fell ill because he slept too little. He also spends little time to get

20、 together with friends. So he has few friends. He plans to spend a lot of time playing mobile games. There is no doubt that his plan is unhealthy. We should get enough sleep and eat healthy. We should spend proper time with our friends. We should also spend more time studying instead of playing mobi

21、le phone games. Whats your weekend plan? Would you spend that much time playing mobile games?【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于结合图片展开的话题作文。标题为The Weekend Plan，认真读图可知，Li Hua的周末安排不是很合理，他花费了太多时间玩手机游戏。根据Li Hua的周末安排，谈一谈他哪些方面安排的不合理，然后谈谈自己认为周末应该如何安排，最后提出问题，引发大家的思考。2.写作指导：本文应该使用一般现在时态。可以采用提问的方式开头，吸引读者的注意。第一段分析图中Li Hua的安排

22、，可以采用比较级句型，spend.doing sth“花费做某事”等来写；第二段可以采用There is no doubt that.“毫无疑问”句型开头，然后谈谈应该如何安排周末的时间，可以采用we should.“我们应该”句型；最后，提出问题，引发读者的思考。成文后要进行审核，修改错误。4例文Dear Sir.I am writing to share my plan of Dragon Boat Day for the foreign players. We need to introduce the festival to them. The festival has a histo

23、ry of more than 2,000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, we can invite them to watch exciting dragon-boat races and make delicious zongzi. These two are both done in memory of Qu Yuan, a great poet in history.In a word, we should

24、 let them know that we celebrate the festival because its a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with our family. I hope that you can agree with my plan.Yours,Lin Tao【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。学校征集“龙舟节”活动方案，要求根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时主要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作

25、文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段详细介绍活动安排；第三段介绍设计理由；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。5例文Dragon Boat RacingDragon boat racing is one of the most important activities during the Dragon Boat Festival. It is so popular that it is included as an event in the Asian Games, and at the 2022 Asian Games, the event will be held in Ouh

26、ai District, Wenzhou.Dragon boat racing, with a history of around 2,000 years, is held in honor of the great Chinese poet Qu Yuan, who committed suicide by drowning himself with a stone in a river. Generally speaking, a dragon boat team usually consists of a drummer, a steerer and 20 paddlers. It is

27、 believed that the race is not only a kind of sports and recreation activities, but also embodies the spirit of patriotism and collectivism spirit. If you are interested in the race, welcome to China and take a part in it.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，写作时根据题干中的表格内容进行写作，写作时可适当增加细节，使文章更加流畅。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三

28、人称来介绍龙舟赛的内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，讲述屈原生平事迹应用一般过去时；第一段说明并强调龙舟赛的重要性以及受欢迎程度；第二段介绍龙舟赛以及历史由来、赛事规则和比赛的精神所在。介绍龙舟赛的相关内容时，保证条理清晰。6例文：Dear Mike,I am very willing to give you some advice about how to send birthday gifts in China. On the one hand, if you know the person very well, you can bring one of his or her favorite

29、 things such as toys, books or CDs. But if you have no idea what he or she likes best, you can just bring some cake or flowers. On the other hand, if you want to bring something special, you can make a photo album to memorize the happy moment you have spent together. All in all, there are no strict

30、rules about sending gifts in China. Just send something that stands for your friendship.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件，以“中国送礼”为话题选定一张图片的场景进行分析。写作时需选三张图片中的一张进行分析，围绕选定的场合提出送礼的建议。2.写作指导：本文以第二人称为主，时态为一般现在时；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，引入话题；第二段介绍送礼的建议和原因；保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。7例文：Dear Sarah, Im sorry to know that your

31、e having such a bad time at the moment. Here are my suggestions for you. First, you should ask your parents to help you plan time and to monitor you when you study. Second, its a great idea to study in a room that is quiet. Third, you should spend more time on science. You can take some online cours

32、es about science and also do more science exercises on your own. Dont worry too much. Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. If you study hard in the next period, I think you can enter your dream school. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求给Sarah回信，针对她的烦恼给出适当的建议。2.写作指导：写作时要以第二人称为主，时态采用一般现在

33、时。信件正文可分为两段：第一段点题；第二段给出具体的建议。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。8例文Dear Tony,I am glad to receive your email asking something about my hometown dialect.Of course, I also have special dialect in my hometown. I live in Shenzhen, so my dialect is Cantonese. We seldom speak it at work, because my colleagues prefer to speak

34、Putonghua. However, we usually use it to talk to my families and friends. I think its necessary to learn the dialect. Because it shows local culture and tradition. Many young people like to study Cantonese, especially Cantonese songs. I suggest that you can study it through two ways. First, you can

35、watch Cantonese TVs or listen to Cantonese songs. Second, you can try to communicate with local people in Guangdong.I think my suggestions can help you.Yours,Wang Lei【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。围绕“方言”向对方写一封回信。2.写作指导：本文采用三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段介绍自己家乡的方言，是否有必要学习方言以及如何学习；最后一段表达希望自己的建议可以帮到对方。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误

36、。9例文Learning English has changed meHello, everyone! Im proud to tell you that learning English has changed me greatly.Since I started to take up English, I have been interested in it. Now I am fond of watching English movies and listening to English songs, which improves my listening and pronunciati

37、on all the time. Moreover, I spend much time reading English magazines and newspapers, which expands my English vocabulary and opens up my eyes and mind. I have learnt more information about the world. Besides, I keep English diaries every day, which is really helpful for writing. Apart from this, I

38、 have become brave and active enough to talk to my foreign teacher, so I am not the shy girl anymore. Although sometimes English seems difficult, I will never give up.In short, English has turned me into a better student. Thanks for listening!【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容写一篇发言稿，谈谈英语学习对自己带来的影响和变化，写作需结合思维

39、导图的提示点从性格、知识、英语技能等方面展开叙述，必须要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时应注意以下几点：第一点：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态采用一般现在时为主，适当结合其他时态。第二点：文章开头已经给出，接下来写性格、知识、英语技能方面的改变和提高，最后总结。第三点：写作中可使用亮点词汇、短语和句型为文章增添色彩。第四点：文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。10例文：Hello, everyone. Im Li Yan from Chinese Club. With the development of China, more

40、 and more people learn to speak Chinese. It is not only a language to communicate with each other, but also a bridge for foreigners like you to learn about Chinese culture.There is no doubt that Chinese club is a good choice for you. Firstly, its easy for you to go round China if you can speak Chine

41、se. Besides, You can know about our history and culture through great works like Tang Poetry, Song lyrics and Beijing Opera. To learn more traditions, you can even try cross talk, a kind of humorous traditional Chinese art. Im sure you will enjoy a lot here. Dont wait. Come and join us!【解析】【详解】1.题干解

42、读：题目要求写一篇演讲稿，宣传学中国话的意义，并发动同学加入Chinese Club，结合图片列举理由，包括可以和其他人练习说中文，学习唐诗宋词、京剧和相声。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主。开头已给出，首先写学习中国话的意义，接着发动同学加入Chinese Club并列举加入Chinese Club可以学习到东西，最后呼吁同学们加入Chinese Club。保证语言连贯，条理清晰，无语法和拼写错误。11例文Dear classmates,Its really a great honor for me to stand here and have such a good chance t

43、o share my idea with you. I think its quite good to have brothers or sisters in the process of my growth.First of all, we can help each other when we have problems we cant solve by ourselves. Besides, with the company of our brothers or sisters, we may not feel lonely in our daily life. Whats more,

44、having brothers or sisters can help us get on better with others. Last but not least, we can develop a sense of responsibility in a big family. In a word, I do enjoy the life with my sister.Thanks for listening!【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作。要求学生以书面形式完成一篇主题为“独生子女好，还是有兄弟姐妹好？”的发言稿。学生必须选择一方观点进行发言，观点论据清晰，根据所选观点适当加入自己的亲身经历或感受，注意需包含所给提示的全部信息。2.写作指导：本文应以一般现在时为主，首先表明自己的观点。通过提纲信息，先组短语，再完成句子。使用“first of all, whatmore, besides, last but not least.”等逻辑词让观点之间的联系更紧密、更清晰。借助条件状语从句、时间状语从句等复合句使文章的结构更严谨、更高端。