1、专题07 短文改错1. （2024届四川绵阳一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改 10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Every day, 15-year-old Martha writes in the Internet about the food she eats at s
2、chool. She takes photo of the food, too. She not only describes the food, but also judge the taste and healthy of the food. Besides, Martha uses her blog for important reason: to raise money for poor school children. Martha encourages his readers to send money to help build a kitchen. She hoped to r
3、aise about 10,000 dollars, but the total has so far reached 100,000 dollars unexpected, and the figure still keeps grow. No one knows what will happen on to Marthas blog in the future, so this little girl has already made a big difference.2 （2024届四川成都一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误
4、，每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅设计一个单词的增加、删除或者修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Learning you are interested in a waste-sorting program in China, I am writing to give for you a brief introduction. As far as I know, Shanghai had bec
5、ome the pioneer of waste sorting in our country. Residents in Shanghai are allowed to simply dump their waste bags in dustbin. Instead, domestic waste is required to be classifying into four categories: dry refuse, wet trash, recyclable waste or dangerous waste. Face with the new rule and for every
6、waste item under careful supervision (监督), many citizens in Shanghai find it a little too complicated and difficult. However, the majority of the people firm support the policy because it helps us live a greener life and makes our country most beautiful.3（2024届四川宜宾一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下
7、作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Our class visited the City Folk Museum last week. To begin with, we searched for as more information as possible on the Internet. Feeling
8、 excitedly, we gathered at the entrance in Friday morning.Then a guide was showed us the exhibition of paper cuts designing for different uses. After that, we watched a digital film, what made us know our folk culture better. Finally, we go to the do-it-yourself area. We learned to make some paper c
9、uts or painted a couple of fantastic mask there. We all felt it was unforgettable experience and the museum was certainly worth a visit.4（2024届四川攀枝花一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
10、注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Good evening, Class! I often help with my parents do housework, such as doing the dish after dinner. I also water the flowers in a garden and wash my clothes whenever possibly. I think, students can benefit a lot from do some housework. Firstly, it is bene
11、ficial for us become a responsible person. Also, it gave our parents more time to do what they like but it improves the family atmosphere. Besides, doing housework can be a form of mental relaxation from study. Thats our view on housework. I hope better ideas on the topic can be inspiring by my word
12、s!5（2024届四川眉山一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。We were considering making an incredibly English magazine, and without hands-on experience w
13、e didnt know how to start it. To get professional instructions, we left for Beijing to visiting a chief editor of Beijing Review, the famous English journal. Although he was busy, he showed me around, explaining us the amazing history of the journal and its production process. Besides, he offered us
14、 lots of practical and valuable informations. What make us especially happy was that when he promised to give us continuous guidance. Filling with confidence, we are now beginning to handle our magazine.6（2024届四川南充一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词
15、处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Should the listening test in an English test be kept and canceled? Some students think that the listening test should not canceled. They insist listening is one of the four basic skill in
16、language learning. Therefore, we cannot ignore it. Besides, listening is an important channel for us to getting information. It should be strengthened today as an international cooperation is becoming more frequently. But the others disagree. They think the listening test is fair to the students in
17、the areas that radio signals cannot be picked up effectively. And for certain reasons, there was a big difference in teachers and equipment among the countryside and the city.7（2024届四川泸州一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多
18、余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改 10处， 多者(从第11 处起)不计分。One day, a poor farmer was gave a young apple tree by his friend. The farmer was pleased, so when getting home, he didnt know where plant it. Finally he planted the tree in his woods that no one could see it. Unlu
19、ckily, the tree soon died with sunlight and good soil. Later, the friend asked the farmer why he has planted the tree in that way. “Whats the difference?” the farmer said angry. “If I had planted the tree near the road or in one of my field, strangers would have stolen the fruit.” “Yes,” said the ot
20、her friend, “but at least someone could have enjoyed the fruit. Now you not only have robbed every one of the fruit, but also destroying a good apple tree!”8（2024届四川宜宾一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下
21、划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。As we all know, most people, especially students, use to go to the library or borrow books, such as reference books and novels. Therefore, with the rapid development of the Internet, nowadays fewer or fewer people will go to the library. T
22、hats because they can easy get the information when they need from the Internet. Whats the more, mobile phones and computer have played major roles.Personally, even though we can do reading from the phones or computers, we are not supposed to spend too much time fix our eyes on the electronic screen
23、s, which is not beneficial to his eyes. I strongly suggest we should make full use of our spare time go to the library.9（2024届四川宜宾一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的的增加、删除、或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每次错误以及修改仅限
24、一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。When I was in primary school, I often went to the wetland of my hometown, there I could see many different kinds of animals, including wild birds, fish, snakes, insets and so on. That was an interesting place for I and my friends to watch the birds and study them. And th
25、ings have begin to change in recent years. Small birds are being caught up with nets. Wild ducks are being sold at food markets. And even bad, the wetland is being destroyed. Some parts are being covered with new house. You can see rubbish everywhere. The wetland is being polluted serious every day.
26、 I am very worried it. How can we do?10（2024届四川泸州一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Im quite health. I very rarely get colds, although, u
27、nusually for me, I had a badly cold and a bit of a fever last week. But thats because I was stupid enough to playing football in the rain. I dont often get things like flu, neither. Last winter almost all my classmates get flu, but I didnt. I think I dont get these things because of I take a lot of
28、exercise and is very fit. Two years before I broke my arm playing football. An injury was quite painful and I couldnt move my arm a month. I hated that.11（2024届四川宜宾一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横
29、线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。When I was a little kid, I dreamed of keeping on a dog. My parents disagreed, saying that I was too young that I couldnt take care of myself, let alone a dog. I didnt give up. Instead, I tried to be independence and often helped with hous
30、ework. A few month later, my parents found that I had become considerate than before. They finally approve of my request. On my eight birthday, they bought me a lovely dog as the gift. Followed my parents directions, Ive learned how to raise the dog. I still miss those days that we accompanied each
31、other.12（2024届陕西渭南一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。I like running. Ever since I am in third grade, I have been trained as a long-dista
32、nce runner. Last year I decided run in a ten-kilometer race, for which I practiced hard. At the day of the race, I ran fast than I ever had in the past. When I approached to the last kilometer, I was one of the rst runner to nish. I picked up the pace and quick reached second place. With all my strength, I went dashing to the nish line, and I wasnt fast enough. As the result, I got a silver medal, that I thought was the same as the one that the guy who came in rst place had.
