1、Unit 1 Women of achievement Period 4 Writing人物介绍类记叙文的写作写人的记叙文要求我们抓住人物的典型事例、典型行为来刻画人物的特征。行文中要把握好时间、地点、人物事件等记叙文的要素，写作过程中要注意以下几个方面：1人物的基本要素要全面立体地反映出来，对所描述的情节要突出重点，详略得当，不能记“流水账”；2写作时要根据需要采用顺叙、倒叙、插叙等不同的叙述方式，以突出重点信息；3写作过程中要注意人称的变化和时态的正确运用。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹等常用一般过去时。常用表达1年龄He was bor
2、n in 1996 and is 20 years old now.Born in 1986，he is now a thirtyyearold student，studying in a university.He began to make a living at the age of 14/at an early age.In his fifties，he began to feel his age.2外貌特征She is a lovely girl，with a round face，big eyes，white teeth and long wavy hair.He is a goo
3、dlooking man，with a thick moustache.He is a tall man，with blue eyes/deepset eyes/bright eyes and blond hair/brown curly hair/broad shoulders.3家庭背景、教育状况He was born in a poor/rich family and lived a hard/happy life.He started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later.He went to study in Peking Uni
4、versity in 2004 and 4 years later he graduated.He got his bachelors(masters，doctors)degree in mathematics from.4生平事迹He devoted his lifetime to.He received/obtained a prize in.He made up his mind to do.He made great progress in.5对人物的评价He is one of the most important/outstanding persons.He is honored/
5、regarded/considered as.He makes great contributions to./sets an example to.你接受了一项写作任务，即为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物。姓名：Allan Stewart国籍：澳大利亚出生日期：1915年3月7日世界纪录：2006年以最高龄获得硕士学位学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。第一个学位：1936年获得第二个学位：医学博士第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学位。第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。参考词汇：硕士学位 masters
6、degree博士 doctor思路点拨这是一篇人物传记，属于记叙文的范畴。在描述过去的经历时，用一般过去时。对于其学习态度的描述，可以用一般现在时。在介绍其多个学位时，要注意时间的先后顺序，可以尝试用不同的句式表达。在写作过程中，要使用一些复杂的句型和过渡词，以使行文流畅。写作时要注意要点的整合。佳作展示Version 1：Allan Stewart，of Australian nationality，was born on March 7th,1915.He got his first degree in 1936，and then his second degreeDoctor of Me
7、dicine.He believes that one is never too old to challenge himself.Therefore，in his eighties，he decided to study law，and in 2006 he set a world record for becoming the oldest person to get a masters degree.Because he was good at arranging his study time，he got praise from his teacher，and in 2012 he m
8、anaged to get his fourth degree by online learning.Version 2：Born on March 7th,1915，Allan Stewart，of Australian nationality，became the oldest person to obtain a masters degree in the world in 2006.He believes that one is never too old to challenge himself.He got his first degree in 1936 and then his
9、 doctors degree in medicine.In his eighties，he decided to study law，after which he obtained his third degree in 2006.In 2012，he managed to get his fourth degree by online learning and won praise from his teacher for his good time management in study.请根据所给信息写一篇关于海伦凯勒(Helen Keller)的短文，要求包括以下三部分内容：1对该人
10、物的简单介绍；2喜欢该人物的理由；3从该人物身上得到的启示。词数：100个左右。Helen KellerAn ordinary but great woman；Disabled；Optimistic(乐观的)；Eager to learn“.if I had the power of sight for three days.”妙笔成篇One possible version：Every time I read“.if I had the power of sight for three days.”，I cannot help being moved by its author Helen
11、Keller，an ordinary but great American woman.I admire Helen because she is optimistic about life.She became deaf and blind when she was 19 months old.From then on she lived in a world of darkness and silence，and communication seemed only a dream for her.But she never gave up and struggled to lead an
12、active life.Under the guidance of her teacher，Ms Sulliven，Helen learned to read and write，and became a famous writer.For a disabled person like her，this was really a wonder.Helen has set an excellent example to all of us.Her story tells us that we should value what we have and try our best to get over any difficulty in life.点击进入WORD链接Unit 1 Exercise 4谢谢观看！