1、专题10 旅游观光. 应用文写作给报刊投稿(2021天津卷3月)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了最美中华栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等); (2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19, 2021By Li Jin A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19, 2021By Li JinSic
2、huan Province is located in the southwestern part of China. It enjoys many worldfamous places of interest, such as Jiuzhai Valley and Dujiangyan Irrigation System.Jiuzhai Valley National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multilevel wat
3、erfalls and colourful lakes. Whats more, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas and golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected there. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation System. It dates from over 2，000 years a
4、go. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today. Sichuan is a wonderful place. Im sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiuzhai Valley as well as the construction of Dujiangyan Irrigation System.1. 词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如be located in, worldfamous, places of i
5、nterest, a nature reserve, impressive, multilevel waterfalls, have a chance to do sth., rare animals, scenic spot, date from, play an important part in, be amazed by 等。2. 句式美：句What is the most impressive是What引导的主语从句。句walking in the nature reserve是动词ing形式短语作状语，to see rare animals是不定式作后置定语。句中的However表
6、示转折关系。此外，文中多处巧妙运用适当的衔接词语，比如Whats more表示递进关系；such as, like表示列举等。 (2021浙江杭州二中模拟)假定你是李华。上周你校组织了嘉兴南湖一日游学活动。请你给校报英文版投稿，介绍该活动。内容包括：1. 活动时间、参加人员；2. 游学活动安排(坐游船、参观纪念馆等)；3. 活动反响。 注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：Memorial Hall纪念馆 【参考范文】Last week, our school organised a oneday study tour in Nanhu, Jiaxing. A
7、ll the teachers and students of our school took part in the activity. On Wednesday, we gathered at the school gate at 7 oclock in the morning, and then went there by bus.In order to review the history of the founding of the Party and appreciate the spirit of the Red Boat, we took a cruise ship and v
8、isited the Memorial Hall. We listened carefully to the teachers explanation of the history of the Party Building.One hundred years ago, the older generation made continuous efforts to revitalise China, which made us very moved. We will work harder for the happiness of mankind in the future. 读后续写阅读下面
9、材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A Vacation with My MotherI had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother loving, sweet, yet absentminded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells us a lot about her.悬念1My two sets of g
10、randparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eightyearold brother, and I unwillingly said goodbye to all of our friends. Who knew if wed
11、ever see them again! Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and travellers checks Mum had forgotten.悬念2D
12、avid and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mum was driving while Dad slept. “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I will stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids？
13、” “What？！ Oh, I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we werent about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy (空房间). After driving in vain for some time, Mum suddenly got a great idea:
14、 Why didnt we find a house with a likelylooking backyard and asked if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous.悬念3 To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mum never could understand our objections (反对). If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mum would have been del
15、ighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意：续写词数应为150左右。The next day we remembered the brand new (崭新) tent we brought with us. We drove through several states and saw lots of sights along the way. 一、理清文章大意关键：Who: the authors familyWhe
16、re: on the journeyWhen: when the author was elevenWhat: They drove to Colorado and North Dakota.How: The author experienced many strange and interesting things.大意：本文叙述了作者的母亲很健忘，一家四口自驾旅游去祖父母和外祖父母所居住的地方，途中发生了很多有趣的事情。二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1思考：为什么作者说他们的家庭旅游是奇怪的？悬念2思考：为什么作者说他们勇敢地开车离开？悬念3思考：作者和大卫为什么紧张？三、分析段落开头语段首句1思
17、考：他们带帐篷了吗？ 妈妈是健忘的，途中会不会有什么麻烦？假如爸爸不在场，孩子们会怎样？段首句2思考：他们带的帐篷会发挥作用吗？ 野营时，妈妈会怎么做？作者对这次旅行的感悟是什么？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：Paragraph 1：没有忘记带帐篷妈妈健忘把爸爸丢了妈妈决定路边露营等他孩子们害怕母爱Paragraph 2：露营母爱的力量见到了爸爸作者的感悟The next day we remembered the brand new(崭新) tent we brought with us. We were happy to see it all still packed, and hope
18、d it would be packed forever. However, things came to its turning point. Mum lost Dad in the gas station when we were sleeping. Whats more, as the dark approached, we met the same trouble again. Fearful as Mum was, she decided to camp near the road waiting for Dad. The wind blew wildly like a monste
19、r. Tears took control of us. Mum embraced us tightly singing a soft song, which really relaxed us. We didnt meet Dad in the last few days, but we felt comfortable staying with Mum. We drove through several states and saw lots of sights along the way. The tent became a close friend then. Every time w
20、e camped, Mum would read a book or sing a soft song. The warmth of her arms never faded away in my memory. Though she was forgetful, laughter accompanied us along the way. We finally met poor Dad in our destination. This trip made me realise that love may have many ways, but it can always warm peopl
21、e in the dark. 1. 使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。forever暗示作者不喜欢露营。the same表明途中爸爸走散了，他们不得不黑夜路边露营。blew wildly like a monster烘托了让作者害怕的自然环境。poor一词照应Mum lost Dad，在孩子的眼里，妈妈因为健忘把爸爸弄丢了，爸爸好可怜。2. 词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。still, things come to its turning point, approach, take control of, embrace, fade away, accompany等堪称经典。Fearful as Mu
22、m was是as引导的让步状语从句的倒装结构。which really relaxed us为which引导的非限制性定语从句。staying with Mum为动词ing形式作状语。(2021广东华南师大附中模拟)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A boulder (巨石), as big as a house. Thats how the guidebook described Giant Rock. Dad said it arrived here millions of years ago. I was finally going to see
23、 it, in snowshoes, with my two older cousins, my dad, and my uncle Don. Id been snowshoeing before, and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow.At the parking area, after putting on our snowshoes, we studied the map. Due to the geographical location, electrical devices are inaccessible her
24、e. The map is our only guide. “We start here，” Dad said, “on the red trail (小路). Then we turn left onto the purple road. Thats where Giant Rock is.” “Remember to stick together and dont wander off, guys，” Uncle Don said. The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall. It was easy to follow because red
25、markers were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikers. At the top of the hill, we turned onto the purple trail. We settled into a pattern, with Dad and everyone else in front and me in the back，crunching (嘎吱嘎吱地行进) through the snow. I saw lots of animal tracks mostly deer
26、, squirrel, and rabbit prints. As the trail wound down, my cousin Andrew said what Id been thinking：“Will we ever reach Giant Rock？” My cousin Aiden smiled and turned to me, “Luke, do you think your dad invented this idea just to get us away from the TV for a while？” I laughed. “You never know.”Fina
27、lly, we climbed a hill and saw the massive boulder sitting alone in the forest. It really is as big as a house! My cousins and I highfived each other and jogged until we stood at the base, breathless. Standing in the boulders broad shadow, I noticed the sun had sunk lower. “Lets head back，” Dad said
28、 after a few minutes. “There will be several crossroads on the way back. Guys, keep up with the team.” Soon we were crunchcrunchcrunching our way home. I was a little behind the group when we approached a crossroads. And I noticed a set of animal tracks I didnt recognise, so I followed them for a cl
29、oser look.注意：续写词数应为150左右。I looked up when I suddenly realised how quiet it had gotten. As going worriedly, I heard voices, someone calling far away. 【参考范文】I looked up when I suddenly realised how quiet it had gotten. “Where is everyone？” I shouted. Nothing. “They couldnt have gone far. Ill catch up
30、if I hurry，” I comforted myself. After a short walk, I came to the crossroads where I could turn left or go straight, but both trails had red markers. I turned to the left which looked familiar. Unfortunately, it got quieter and quieter. Soon it might be too dark to tell what colour the markers were
31、. What if I couldnt find my way back?As going worriedly, I heard voices, someone calling far away. Following the voices, I noticed the stone wall, the trail running alongside it. It must be the right way back! I rushed downhill with big steps. Then, I saw the parking area, and my family! I shouted as I ran towards them. “Luke? Are you OK？” The voice of Dad was urgent. Id only been lost for minutes, but it seemed like forever. Now all I wanted was a bear hug from Dad and to make tracks for home.