1、Module 6 Old and New写作专项突破应用文：描述变化【题目要求】假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，用英语给你的朋友王飞写一封电子邮件，描述你所参观的一个地方自从你上次去后所发生的变化。1简要介绍你参观的具体地点；2对比所参观地点的前后变化；3你的感受。注意：词数 100 左右。_一、构思谋篇二、关键词语被覆盖be covered with.对感到吃惊be surprised at.在某人的记忆中in ones mind搬进move into过着的生活live/lead a.life变得越来越好get/become better and better三、连词成句1我记得村里有很多小路
2、，每当下雨的时候路上全是污泥和垃圾。I remember that through the whole village there were many narrow roads,which were covered with mud and waste on rainy days.2我印象中那些破旧的小屋和又脏又窄的小路已经消失了。The small old houses and the narrow dirty roads that were in my mind have disappeared.3我相信农民的生活将会越来越好。I believe that the life of the
3、peasants will get better and better.四、连句成篇Dear Wang Fei，My grandparents live with my parents in Jinan now,but they were born in a small village in Zhucheng Country.I went there once when I was seven years old.I remember that through the whole village there were many narrow roads,which were covered w
4、ith mud and waste on rainy days.Last weekend I visited the village again.On arriving at the village,I was surprised at what I saw.The small old houses and the narrow dirty roads that were in my mind have disappeared.Before my eyes were beautiful high buildings with wide and clean streets.The people
5、who live in the old houses have moved into their new flats.They are now living a new and happy life.I have been appreciating our governments great policy of helping the peasants since I came back.I believe that the life of the peasants will get better and better.Yours，Li Hua【亮点点评】亮点一：文章先简要介绍了参观的地方，然后对比这一地方的前后变化，最后发表感想，思路清晰，结构完整。亮点二：文章准确运用了that 引导的宾语从句、which 引导的定语从句、what 引导的宾语从句、who 引导的定语从句等，大大提升了文章的档次。亮点三：为介词 on动词的-ing 形式，表示“一就”，运用恰当。