1、Module 2 Developing and Developed Countries写作专项突破说明文：两地比较【题目要求】请根据下面表格中提供的信息写一篇英语短文，比较一下澳大利亚的两座著名城市墨尔本(Melbourne)和悉尼。墨尔本悉尼地理位置澳大利亚东南部澳大利亚东南部地位维多利亚州首府，澳大利亚第二大和人口第二密集的城市，建成时间晚于悉尼新南威尔士州首府，澳大利亚最古老、最大、人口最密集的城市旅游最受外国游客的欢迎，以浓厚的艺术气息著称最受本地游客的欢迎，以商业和娱乐闻名注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：populous 人口稠密的_一、构思
2、谋篇二、关键词语位于(be)in the.position of.人口第二密集城市the second most populous city最受外国游客欢迎the favourite of foreign tourists最受本地游客欢迎the preferred city of local tourists以著称 be known for.三、连词成句1墨尔本是维多利亚州首府，澳大利亚第二大和人口第二密集的城市，建成时间晚于悉尼。Melbourne is the capital of Victoria,the second most populous and largest city,and
3、 was founded later compared to Sydney.2墨尔本最受外国游客的欢迎，而悉尼最受本地游客欢迎。Melbourne is the favourite of foreign tourists,while Sydney is the preferred city of local tourists.3墨尔本以浓厚的艺术气息著称，而悉尼以商业和娱乐闻名。Melbourne is known for its artistic attractions,while Sydney is famous for the business and entertainment.四、连
4、句成篇Melbourne and Sydney both have a long history and share many characteristics.They are in the same southeastern position of Australia,sharing a history of being named after British politicians.Melbourne is the capital of Victoria,the second most populous and largest city,and was founded later comp
5、ared to Sydney.Speaking of Sydney,it is the oldest,largest and most populous city in the continent.In addition,it is the capital city of New South Wales.Different kinds of tourists travel to each city.Melbourne is the favourite of foreign tourists,while Sydney is the preferred city of local tourists
6、.Both cities are also different in their tourist attractions.Melbourne is known for its artistic attractions,while Sydney is famous for the business and entertainment.【亮点点评】亮点一：文章从地理位置、行政区划、人口、旅游等方面简要比较了澳大利亚的墨尔本和悉尼两个城市，条理清晰、层次分明。亮点二：文章使用了动名词短语作状语、过去分词短语作状语等结构，提升了文章的档次。亮点三：文章灵活使用了speaking of、in addition、while、be known for 和be famous for 等短语和连词，使文章结构紧密，为文章增色。