1、Section_Writing_描述未来生活一、写作技巧对未来生活的描述属于记叙文，以描写为主。未来生活的变化是方方面面的，在叙述过程中，我们可以从多个方面着手，把未来生活发生的变化有序地写下来；或者只选择某一个领域，着重介绍一下该领域的变化；也可以根据表达的需要截取某一个片段或想象的生活场景，通过生动细致的描绘，反映未来生活的变化。二、增分佳句1What life will be like in the future?2With the development of ., our life .3My life in the future will be .4I think my life w
2、ill be very different in . years.5Its possible to predict .6People in the future will be able to .7I hope Ill work in .8Ill be able to work from home.9In my free time/On my holidays, Ill .10It will be more comfortable, more computerized and more convenient .11As . is/are invented, it is possible to
3、.12In a word, life in the future will be .题目要求10年后我们的生活将会是什么样的？根据以下内容，通过合理想象，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文来展望未来的生活。要点：1有些人到月球上度假。2某些科学家在海底生活。3孩子可以在家通过因特网接受教育。4机器人为你做家务。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为想象类作文；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；3确定时态：主要使用一般将来时。二、构思第一部分，以对未来生活的向往引入话题。第二部分，从到月球上度假，在海底生活，通过因特网接受教育，机器人做家务等四个方面详细介绍未来生活模式。第三部分，对
4、未来生活的期盼和向往。第二步：核心词汇想周全1dream_about/of梦想2go_to_the_moon_for_a_holiday去月球度假3live_under_the_sea在海底生活4neednt_go_to_school没有必要去学校5study_at_home在家中学习6come_true变成现实第三步：由词扩句雏形现1或许有些人会去月球上度假。(主谓结构)Perhaps_some_people_will_go_to_the_moon_for_a_holiday.2某些科学家将在海底生活。(主谓结构)Some_scientists_will_live_under_the_sea
5、.3网上有充足的教育资源。 (There be句型；将来时)Therell_be_plenty_of_educational_programmes_on_the_Internet.4孩子没有必要天天去学校。(主谓结构)Children_neednt_go_to_school_every_day.5他们可以在家中学习。(主谓结构)They_can_study_at_home.6或许将来每个家庭会有机器人。(主谓宾结构)Maybe_in_the_future_each_family_will_have_a_robot.7它们可以做它们被告诉的一切，如购物、做家务等。(主谓宾结构；whatever引
6、导的宾语从句；such as举例说明)They_can_do_whatever_they_are_told_to,_such_as_shopping,_housework.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用连词and连接句1、2Perhaps_some_people_will_go_to_the_moon_for_a_holiday,_and_some_scientists_will_live_under_the_sea.2用with的复合结构改写句3，然后和句4合并成一个简单句With_plenty_of_educational_programmes_on_the_Internet，children
7、_neednt_go_to_school_every_day.3用as a result连接升级后的3、4句和句5With_plenty_of_educational_programmes_on_the_Internet，children_neednt_go_to_school_every_day;_as_a_result,_they_can_study_at_home.4以句6为主句，然后用which引导的定语从句改写句7Maybe_in_the_future_each_family_will_have_a_robot,_which_can_do_whatever_they_are_told
8、_to,_such_as_shopping，housework._第五步：过渡衔接联成篇I_am_always_dreaming_about_life_in_the_future._What_on_earth_will_it_be_like?Perhaps_some_people_will_go_to_the_moon_for_a_holiday,_and_some_scientists_will_live_under_the_sea._With_plenty_of_educational_programmes_on_the_Internet,_children_neednt_go_to_school_every_day;_as_a_result,_they_can_study_at_home._Maybe_in_the_future_each_family_will_have_a_robot,_which_can_do_whatever_they_are_told_to,_such_as_shopping，housework._I_do_believe_the_dream_will_come_true_some_day.
