1、2021-2022七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作 Unit 3：How do you get to school？单元话题：talk about how to get to places “交通方式”范文11（2021全国七年级课时练习）不同的地方，学生上学的方式有很多。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇短文，介绍以下你的上学方式。词数60左右，可适当发挥想象。提示：你家住得离学校有多远；你上学时的交通方式；你上学时需要花费多长时间。要求：条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确。_【答案】参考范文I live far from my school. Its about ten kilometers.
2、 I need to take the subway and take the us to get to school. First I take the subway to Nanjing Street. It takes me about fifteen minutes to Nanjing Street. Then I take the bus to get to school and it takes me about half an hour. So I must get up early to go to school every day.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写
3、作。要求介绍上学方式，注意先围绕提示的三点来写，再可添加相关内容。2. 写作指导：文章应该用第一人称I来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；叙述时要注意条理，首先介绍从学校到家的距离，然后再介绍自己上学的方式以及所需时间。范文22（2021全国七年级单元测试）下面是对你们班同学上学采用的交通方式以及他们采用这种交通方式的原因的调查结果。请根据下面表格写一篇英语短文。60词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。上学方式学生人数原因乘公共汽车16离校远步行11离校近，有益健康骑自行车24离校近，喜欢骑车乘小汽车0There are fifty-one students in my class. _【答案】参考范
4、文：There are fifty-one students in my class. We go to school in different ways. Sixteen students take buses because they live far from our school. Eleven students walk to school. They think walking is good for their health and they live near the school. Twenty-four students ride their bikes to school
5、 because they like riding bikes very much and their homes are not very far from the school. No one goes to school by car. Because its bad for our environment.【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据表格提示的内容，写一篇短文，介绍同学的交通方式以及他们采用这种交通方式的原因，属于给材料作文。2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第三人称和一般现在时为主展开陈述。写作中需承接开头，紧扣表格提示的要点，从“乘公共汽车”“步行”“骑自行车”
6、和“乘小汽车”四个方面，分别介绍班级同学所采用的人数，解释清楚他们采用该交通方式的原因。行文注意主谓一致和上下文的过渡，符合逻辑关系，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。范文33（2021广东阳西县教育局教学研究室七年级单元测试）请你根据下面的表格内容，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下约翰及其家人的情况。要求不少于60词，可适当发挥。家庭成员年龄职业出行方式及原因约翰13中学生通常步行上学, 学校离家近约翰的爸爸40医生总是开车上班, 医院离家远约翰的妈妈36教师每天骑自行车上班, 喜欢骑自行车提示词: near在附近；doctor医生；hospital医院_【答案】例文：There are three peo
7、ple in Johns family. John is 13. He is a middle school student. He usually walks to school because the school is near his home. Johns father is 40. He is a doctor. The hospital is far from his home, so he always drives his car to work. Johns mother is 36. She is a teacher. She likes riding her bike,
8、 so she goes to work by bike every day. They all like their ways of going out.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作要根据表格中汉语提示的内容，介绍每个家庭成员的年龄、职业和出行方式等。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整、行文连贯，保证条理清晰。范文44（2020全国七年级单元测试）假如Dave是你的朋友，他是一名学生，他父母在同一家店上班。根据下面表格中的内容用英语写一篇短文描述他一家人上学及上班的情况。WhoDaveDaves pare
9、ntsWhereFrom home to schoolFrom home to the storeHowBy bikeBy busHow far2 kilometers10 kilometersHow long10 minutes30 minutes要求：1.必须包括表格内所有信息；2. 60词左右，可适当发挥。_【答案】例文Hello, my friend is Dave. Hes a student of Grade Seven. His parents work in the same store. Dave goes to school by bike. His school is a
10、bout two kilometers from his home. It takes him about ten minutes to get to school. His parents go to work by bus. The store is about 10 kilometers from his home. It takes his parents about 30 minutes to get to the store. What about your family?【详解】1.题干解读：此篇作文主要介绍朋友Dave的家庭成员，描述他一家人上学及上班的情况。2.例文点评：例文
11、用第三人称进行叙述，时态采用一般现在时为主。在叙述时，避免汉语式英语，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致等，句意叙述完整且条理清晰，语句通顺，语义连贯。3.高分亮点： 短语：Grade Seven；in the same store；go to school；by bike；get to school；go to work。句型：It takes sb. some time to do sth.（做某事花费某人一些时间）；What about?（怎么样？）。范文55 根据汉语提示及要求,用英语写一篇短文。提示:王慧是我的好朋友,她在上海上学。她的家距离学校约两公里,她通常骑自行车去上
12、学,大约用15分钟。但下雨天她乘出租车,大约4分钟;她的父母在离家5公里的一家医院工作,每天开小汽车上班,大约要用15分钟。要求:1.条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确;2.词数不少于70。_【答案】Wang Hui is my good friend. She studies in a school in Shanghai. The school is about two kilometers from her home. She usually goes to school by bike. It takes her about fifteen minutes to get to sc
13、hool by bike. But when it rains, she takes a taxi. The taxi ride takes four minutes. Her parents work in a hospital. The hospital is five kilometers away, so they go to work by car. It takes them about fifteen minutes to get there. The family are busy but they are happy.【详解】本题要求根据汉语提示，用英语写一篇短文。人称为第三
14、人称，时态为一般现在时，注意主谓一致关系。所提供的汉语提示非常具体，注意写作时必须包含所有要点提示，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。范文66（2021山东菏泽市定陶区教育局教研室七年级期中）假如你是七年级一班的Lisa，上一节英语课老师让你们课后做一个关于你们班同学上学方式的小调查。请你根据下面图表信息，以“How do we get to school”为题，用英语写一篇60词左右的调查报告。 要求：1.必须包含
15、图表中提到的所有内容，可适当发挥；2. 词数60词左右。_【答案】例文：Im Lisa in Class 1, Grade 7. Our English teacher asked the students to do a survey about how we got to school. Two boys get to school on foot. Seven boys and seven girls get to school by motorcycle. Four boys and three girls get to school by bike. Three boys and two girls take the bus to school. And six boys and ten girls get to school by subway.【详解】1.題干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。文章开头要阐述老师让同学们做一个上学方式的调查；正文应该介绍图表中的交通方式和人数。2.写作指导：文章应以第一人称Lisa开头，介绍图表时用第三人称；时态以一般现在时为主，描述老师让做调查应该用一般过去时；描述调查图表时要注意句子结构，保证条理清晰。
