Unit 3 Could you please clean your room？-2021-2022学年八年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作（人教版）.docx

1、2021-2022八年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作 Unit 3：Could you please clean your room?单元话题：家务劳动范文11（2021广东阳西县教育局教学研究室八年级单元测试）请你根据提示及要求，以Lets help our parents do chores为题，写一篇英文倡议书。要点提示： （1）父母工作繁忙，我们应该分担家务；（2）我们可以做的家务有：整理床铺、打扫房间，洗衣服，洗餐具、倒垃圾等。写作要求： （1）包括所有要点提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（2）80词左右 (开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。Lets help our parents

2、 do choresDear students,Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them. _Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot. From now on, lets help our parents do chores.【答案】例文Lets help our parents do choresDear students,Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways

3、to care about them. Our parents are always busy with work. They are tired after work, but they still have to do chores. If we help them do some chores, they will have more time to rest. And sharing housework can help us understand our parents better. So we should help them do housework as much as we

4、 can. In fact, we can do lots of housework at home. For example, we could make the bed, clean up the room, wash clothes, do the dishes and take out the trash.Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot. From now on, lets help our parents do chores.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“Lets help our parents do chor

5、es”为题，根据写作要点写一篇倡议书，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：首先第一部分，指明要帮助父母做家务的原因以及做家务的好处，此处人称主要为第三人称；其次第二部分，谈谈我们日常生活中可以做的家务有哪些，此处人称主要为第一人称；最后总结感受，此处文章已给出结尾。全文时态主要为一般现在时，行文时要涵盖要点提示，表达准确，思路清晰，层次分明。范文22（2021全国八年级单元测试）李梅的父母都是医生。由于疫情的暴发，他们去了武汉做志愿工作，所以李梅和爷爷奶奶在家。懂事的李梅经常帮助爷爷奶奶做家务。假如你是李梅，一天父母打电话说要从武汉回家，你决定把家打扫得干干净净。请你根据下面的提示写一篇短文，可适当

6、发挥，80词左右。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。提示：1. Why did you do the housework?2. What housework did you do?3. How did your parents feel?My parents went to Wuhan as volunteers as medical staff. One day, _【答案】例文My parents went to Wuhan as volunteers as medical staff. One day, they called me they would come back, so I d

7、ecided to clean up the house to make them happy. After having breakfast, I did the dishes. After that, I began to clean the living room. I swept the floor, cleaned the windows and took out the rubbish.After having a break, I began to do some washing. At about half past eleven, I finished all the cho

8、res. I was tired but happy.When my parents got home, they were surprised to find I did so many chores and made the house so clean. They said “Dear, you really did a good job! Thank you.” Hearing this, I was really proud of myself.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据英文提示写一篇英语短文，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般过去时，人称采用第一人称

9、和第三人称相结合。描写做了什么家务时，场景要连贯细致；重点描写父母回家后看到自己做了这些事情的感受，要生动形象。写作时要有逻辑性，无语法和标点错误。范文33（2021全国八年级课时练习）假设你是Mary，请根据以下提示内容写一篇80词左右的英语短文，向大家介绍你和你的家人是如何分担家务的。可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅、通顺。提示：1. What housework do your family do?2. What do you think of doing housework?_【答案】One possible version:Im Mary. In my family, everyone

10、does housework. Although my father is busy with his work in the daytime, he cleans up the room after work. My mother sweeps the floor and does the dishes every day. She also does some washing on the weekend. My grandparents water the flowers every day and do some shopping. As for me, I make the bed,

11、 fold clothes and take out the rubbish.I think its necessary for us to help our parents with housework. Doing housework not only teaches me how to take care of myself but develops my independence.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕家人是如何分担家务来写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。分为两段式：第一段介绍家人是如何分担家务的；第二段发表自己对此的观点。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到

12、无语法和标点错误。范文44（2021全国八年级课时练习）假如某报社正在以“We should do chores at home”为题进行征文比赛，请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文参加比赛，可适当发挥。提示：1.许多学生不愿意做家务，他们认为做家务是父母的工作，而且做家务浪费他们的时间；2.列举你常做的家务；3.你自己的内心体会。_【答案】范文We should do chores at homeNow many students dont like doing chores at home. Some students think its the parents job to

13、 do chores at home and that doing chores is a waste of their time. But I think we should help do chores at home because our parents are busy with their work and often tired after work. I often do chores at home, like making the bed, watering flowers, cleaning the rooms, taking out the rubbish and so

14、 on.In my opinion, doing chores is relaxing. And it feels great to help my parents.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据“We should do chores at home”为题进行写作，需要根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文来参加比赛。2.写作指导：本文应采用一般现在时，人称采用第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，文章开篇需先点明主题：许多学生不愿意做家务；接着阐述理由；然后表达自己的观点，并说明自己的具体行动；最后陈述自己的心得体会。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧

15、扣主题，连句成篇，要层次分明，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表达符合语法的结构，词汇拼写准确，词汇、句式要丰富多样。最后要细心检查，确保正确无误。范文55（2021全国八年级单元测试）假设你是丽莎(Lisa)，某英文报刊正在就Should Teenagers Help Their Parents with Housework?开展征文活动。请你根据自己的体会，写一篇短文向该报社投稿。写作要点：1. Whats your opinion (观点) about it?2. Why should teenagers help their parents with housework?3. Wh

16、at are the advantages (好处) of doing housework?写作要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥。2. 不少于70词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。_【答案】例文：Dear Sir or Madam,I think that teenagers like me should help our parents with housework.First, doing housework makes us independent. We cant depend on our parents all the time. So we should learn

17、how to take care of ourselves now.Second, doing housework is a kind of physical exercise. It helps us stay healthy and strong. Third, since we live in a house with our parents, its fair for us to work together and make the house clean and comfortable. All in all, doing housework helps us to learn li

18、fe skills and understand the idea of fairness. So I think teenagers should learn to enjoy doing it with our parents.Yours truly,Lisa【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“青少年应该帮助父母做家务吗？”为主题介绍青少年是否应该帮助父母做家务；文章要求从三方面阐述：一是阐述自己的观点；二是介绍青少年为什么应该帮助父母做家务；三是介绍青少年做家务的好处。2.写作指导：本文以第一人称、一般现在时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意按要点分段叙述，第一段开门见山，表明自己的观点；中间

19、段落介绍青少年做家务的原因，可使用First、Second等分层描写；最后一段介绍做家务的好处。范文66（2021全国八年级课时练习）假设你是李华，近期你们班里将举行一次英文班会，主题为“Do you do the housework?”。请你根据下列提示，写一篇80词左右的发言稿。提示：1. Do you do the housework?2. What housework do you like and dislike doing? Why?3. What do you think of doing the housework? _【答案】One possible version:Hell

20、o, everyone! Im Li Hua. As a member of the family, I think its my job to do the housework. I often help my parents with the housework in my free time.I like sweeping the floor and I help sweep the floor every Saturday. When I see the clean floor, I always feel happy. Whats more, I take out the rubbi

21、sh every day because its easy. However, I dont like doing the dishes. Its so boring.In a word, I think we students should help do chores. Its a good way for us to exercise and we can learn many things from it.【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据提示的问题要点，写一篇发言稿介绍自己对做家务的看法，属于讲稿作文。2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般现在时为主，以第三人称为辅进行叙述。写作中紧扣所给的问题提示，先明确自己对做家务的态度，再介绍自己喜欢做的家务，最后谈一谈对做家务的看法。行文注意主谓一致和上下文的过渡，符合逻辑关系，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。