Unit 2 I’ll help to clean up the city parks.-2021-2022学年八年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作（人教版）.docx

1、2021-2022八年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作 Unit 2：Ill help to clean up the city parks.单元话题：offer help “提供帮助和志愿活动”范文11如今，越来越多的人加入了周末的志愿者队伍，学生是否应该做志愿者工作呢？为此，上周五我对我们班的学生进行了调查，结果如下，请你代写一篇80词左右的调查报告。Pros 60% (1)一种很好的体验，帮助得到梦想的工作 (2)消磨空余时间的好方法，以便于不会花时间做一些无聊的事，如玩电脑游戏 (3)更好地去了解社会(society)，学会关心别人 Cons 40% (1)浪费时间，影响学习 (2)家长担

2、心结交一些不良朋友 (3)年龄小，容易累 我 _【答案】例文Should students do volunteer work on weekends? We did a survey in our class meeting last Friday. Here are the results. 60% of the students think students should do volunteer work on weekends. It is a good experience and it can help students get their dream jobs. Doing v

3、olunteer work is a good way for students to spend their free time so that they wont spend their time doing some boring things, such as playing computer games.However, others disagree. They think it wastes their time and influences their study. Some parents also worry that students will make some bad

4、 friends. Whats more, students are too young, so they may get tired easily. I think its a good idea for students to do volunteer work. We can open up our eyes to the outside world. We can also improve our living skills. Its good for our future.【详解】1.题干解读：文章是一篇材料作文。主要是通过对学生的一项调查展开讨论，主要是以“是否应该做志愿者工作”为

5、中心展开，把表格中表达的两种不同的资料表述清楚，同时还要自行发挥写出自己的观点意见，把这些写清楚即可。2.例文点评：文章主要采取两段描写。第一段主要写表格中支持的观点，阐述清楚为什么支持做志愿者；第二段主要写表格中不支持做志愿者的观点以及自己的观点。整个文章思路清晰结构比较完整。语言层次感鲜明，表达准确，用词很恰当。范文22在日常生活中，我们应学会帮助别人。假如你是Paul，准备和几个好朋友做一些志愿者活动。请你根据表格中的内容，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文，描述你们的计划。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。可适当发挥，以使行文流畅、通顺。姓名计划理由Jack看望医院里的孩子们让他们高兴并尽快康

6、复Mike看望敬老院里的老人不让老人感到孤独Susan在社区做志愿者给予残疾人更多的帮助Paul提示词：community社区In life, we need help when we have problems. At the same time, we should try to help others in need. My friends and I decide to do some volunteer work. _【答案】例文In life, we need help when we have problems. At the same time, we should try t

7、o help others in need. My friends and I decide to do some volunteer work. Jack wants to visit sick kids in hospital to cheer them up and make them get better soon. Mike plans to visit the old people in the old peoples home. He wants to help them do something useful and make them not feel lonely. Sus

8、an will volunteer in a community. She hopes to give disabled people more help. As for me, I decide to help give out food at a food bank because I know there are many poor people. They dont have enough food and they are always hungry. In fact, helping others is helping ourselves. Lets take action to

9、help others.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，内容是根据表格中的内容，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文，描述你们做一些志愿者活动的计划；书写时应承接短文开头。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；以一般将来时为辅；第一段承接短文内容；第二段具体介绍此次志愿者活动的计划和理由；最后是自己的感想。范文33 书面表达帮助别人是高尚的，被别人帮助是幸福的。你曾经帮助过别人吗？请你根据自己的经历，自拟题目，描述一件你帮助别人做过的事情。_【答案】Helping a Blind WomanYesterday morning I was on my wa

10、y to school when it began to rain. I started to run so that I couldnt get wet. Just then I saw a blind woman walking across the road. I thought it was dangerous because the road was crowded. I ran to her and helped her walk on. As we were walking past an uncovered drain, I told her to watch her step

11、. So she walked past it safely. There was a smile on her face. I was very happy to see that. I think we should take more care of the disabled people.【详解】根据要求帮助别人是高尚的，被别人帮助是幸福的。你曾经帮助过别人吗？请你根据自己的经历，自拟题目，描述一件你帮助别人做过的事情。这是一篇给材料作文。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用

12、过去时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】这篇短文多次使用连接词so、as以及一些固定句型，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.范文44假如你是Helen，你在某个图书馆的网站上看到了招收志愿者的公告，想申请成为其中一员。请你根据下面的要点提示并结合自己的实际情况，写一封申请邮件。提示：1. What kind of volunteer work do you want to do?2. Can you do the work well?3. Why do y

13、ou want to do the volunteer work?4. When are you free to do the work?要求：1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文通顺、连贯；2. 词数：80左右（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。Dear Sir or Madam,_ Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Helen【答案】参考范文Dear Sir or Madam,Id like to volunteer as a student helper in the library. In my free time, I lo

14、ve reading all kinds of books. Im also good at Chinese and English. I think I can do the work well. I want to help students learn about the importance of reading because it makes people smart. I can also do what I love to do and help others at the same time. Im always free on weekends, so Ill be abl

15、e to volunteer there on time.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Helen【详解】1. 题干解读：这是一篇电子邮件写作。主要是表达自己想要参加志愿者项目的愿望，题干中给出了写作要点，写作时不要遗漏，可适当增加细节。2. 写作指导：要求是一封申请邮件，应用书信格式。时态：一般现在时；人称：第一人称。首先描述自己想要做的志愿者工作以及自己做这份工作的优势；然后描述自己对于志愿者工作的理解；最后告知可以做志愿者工作的时间。写作时要围绕主题灵活运用不同的短语和句式使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚。范文55上周六，英语老师带领同学们到儿童医

16、院做志愿活动，并要求大家写一篇日记描述此次志愿活动的过程。假如你是张娟，请你根据下面的提示，完成日记。写作提示：1.为儿童医院的儿童送礼物；2.帮助那里的儿童洗衣服，打扫房间；3.做一些有趣的活动，给那里的儿童带去欢乐。写作要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；2.100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。March13thSaturday Sunny_.【答案】One possible version:March 13thSaturday SunnyLast Saturday,our English teacher took our class to Childrens Hospi

17、tal to visit the sick kids. When we arrived there,we gave those sick kids the gifts that we prepared for them. They were very excited and liked the gifts very much. Then,we helped to wash clothes and clean the rooms. We also did some interesting activities with them,such as singing,dancing and telli

18、ng stories.Im glad to take part in such a volunteer activity. Seeing the look of joy on the sick kids faces,we felt very happy.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇日记作文。假定你是张娟，根据提示写志愿者活动，记录过程。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据志愿活动的过程，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言

19、的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。范文6十月四日是世界动物日，你校组织以“I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals”为题的英语演讲比赛。假如李明参加比赛，请你以“李明”的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己，词数60个左右。内容如下：1. 善待动物，勤劳，做额外事。2. 组织慈善义演，为Save Chinas Tigers筹款；3. 动物是人类的朋友，保护动物就是保护我们自己。I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals.Hello, everyone. Im

20、Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. Im glad to make a speech here. _If I can be a volunteer, _Thank you for listening!【答案】I want to be a volunteer of protecting animalsHello, everyone. Im Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals Im glad to make a speech here. I am

21、 kind to others. I am good with animals. I like playing football and the guitar. I have ever organized raising money for Save Chinas Tigers. And I keep some homeless little animals.Animals are our friends. We should love each other. I am always thinking protecting animals is protecting ourselves. If

22、 I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. I will announce more people love animals like me. I must try my best to make the world more united. Thanks for listening!【详解】试题分析：这是一篇演讲稿，表达自己想成为一名保护动物的志愿者，时态用一般现在时态为主，穿插使用一般将来时态等，人称是第一人称。写作要点包括：1简单叙述自己的品质与爱好2写出过去做过的有关动物保护的事情。3最后谈谈自己的感悟和打算。抓住以上几点内容，运用所给出的信息，分层次组织好句子。此类作文，一般用一般现在时态为主要时态进行写作。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。