1、浙江宁海县2016高考英语短文改错二轮初练（5）及答案短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出修改的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave up
2、studying in Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up a company and researching into the computer software. As an old saying go, “Interest is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this idea. I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl. I got extreme intereste
3、d in foreign cultures or customs. To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day. It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day. As a result, I always did very well in English exam. Interest is the key of success.【参考答案】1.1:richest- the richest 2:that which 3:researching researched /去掉and 4:gog
4、oes 5:extreme - extremely 6:orand 7:memy 8:去掉in 9: examexams 10:ofto短文改错。Last Sunday I went to the Birds Nest Stadium. At gate1._I happened to meet some young America tourists.I greeted2._to them in English and then we began to chat. From the chat3._I learned that they were college students travelin
5、g in Beijing4._but most of them were fond of Chinese culture. They were5._busy taking pictures and they seem to be much impressed by6._the changes which had been taken place in the past few years.7._After come out of the Stadium, we went to the Water Cubic(水立方)8._and had a good time there. We exchan
6、ged our email address so that9._ we could write to each other later. They thanked us again and again.10._I was very glad to have the chance to practise my oral English.答案与解析：1gate前加the此处表示特指，指的是鸟巢体育馆的大门。 2AmericaAmerican应该用形容词来修饰名词。3去掉第一个togreet是及物动词，可直接加宾语，不必加to。45butand来北京和喜欢中国文化为并列关系而非转折，应用and表示并
7、列。6seemseemed根据事情发生的时间last Sunday和全文的时态可知，此处也应用一般过去时。7去掉beentake place无被动语态。8comecoming介词after后要用动名词形式。9addressaddresses交换的是双方的邮箱地址，故此处应用复数形式。10usme是“我”帮助了他们，因此用me。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在此处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出修改的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后
8、的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。Nowadays more and more people, specially schoolboys and schoolgirls, are giving to video games. Many of them spend all their spare time the games, and some even stay at the game machines all days long. The reason is why they can enrich their lives as well
9、as knowledge by playing video games. But its a good way of relaxing after a days work and study, as video games can bring a fun to peoples life. However, on the other hand, play video games too much can waste time and money, and has a bad effect on peoples eyesight and healthy. So, video games, like
10、 coins, have two sides. The key point is that we should make properly use of the games.【参考答案】2.Nowadays more and more people, specially schoolboys and schoolgirls, are giving to video 1.especially 2.givengames. Many of them spend all their spare time the games, and some even stay at the game 3.on/pl
11、aying machines all days long. The reason is why they can enrich their lives as well as knowledge 4.day 5. that by playing video games. But its a good way of relaxing after a days work and study, as 6. And video games can bring a fun to peoples life. However, on the other hand, play video games 7. 删除
12、a 8. playingtoo much can waste time and money, and has a bad effect on peoples eyesight and healthy.9. healthSo, video games, like coins, have two sides. The key point is that we should make properly use of the games.10. proper短文改错。Dear Anish，Here are the information about Manchester University. 1._
13、It is about 200 miles far away from London, and it 2._has a very big schoolyard. You can live in the school 3._ or near the school. They have all sorts of course. 4._Im sure you will find one you like it. I know you 5._are particular interested in human rights. So I will 6._see that there is anythin
14、g on their website(网址). 7._ Ill send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport 8. _when you arrived. You met him a few years ago, but he 9._has changed a lot since then. Both your aunt or I look 10._forward to seeing you again.See you soon.Peter答案与解析：1areisinformation是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式。2去掉farfar通常不与
15、表示具体距离的数词连用。34coursecourses根据句中的all sorts of可知，这里要表示的是各种各样的课程，因此应用复数形式。5去掉it“(that) you like”是定语从句，修饰先行词one。在从句中，关系代词that作like的宾语，所以it多余。6particularparticularlyinterested是形容词，应使用副词修饰。7thatif/whether根据上一句中的内容可知这里的意思是看网络上“是否”有相关信息。8meet前加to此处是不定式表示目的。9arrivedarrive如果主句是一般将来时，时间状语从句通常用一般现在时。10orand此处是“
16、both.and.”结构，表示“两者都”。下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在下面加上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Nowadays, people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic. It has serious influenced people daily life and economic
17、 development. To solve the problem, some pieces of advice is put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads are built. By this way, the traffic density can be reduced, thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars. Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. This can decrea
18、se the traffic flow. Buton the othehand, this will effect the consumption and makes buses more crowded. In my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under the control. And at the same time, buses should have their own special routes cannot be used by other vehicles. 【参考答案】3.plainingcomplai
19、ning about 2. seriousseriously 3. peoplepeoples4.isare 5.arebe 6.By In 7.effect affect 8.makesmake9. under the control under control 10. special routes cannot bespecial routes that/which cannot be短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及每一个单词的增加、删除或或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修
20、改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 MrSmith had neither wife nor childrenHe liked nothing but drinkingHe almost spent all of his money drinksSometimes he went hungry, but he had to borrow some money to buy some foodOne evening he met a friend of him in the streetThe
21、man invited him to have dinner in a restaurantHe was very happy that he drank too muchHis friend stopped a taxi and ask the driver to take him homeSoon they reached in the door of his houseThe driver drove awayBut MrSmith couldnt insert the key into the keyholeJust then a policeman went up, offering
22、 to help him but he refused, saying the house is circled nowIf you can keep it moving, I can open the door myself”【参考答案】4、1. 4.wife前加 a2. money 后加on 或者 drinks 改为 drinking3. but改为and 或so4. him改为his5. very 改为so6. ask改为asked7. in 删掉8. went 改为came9. circled 改为 circlingkeep改为stop或者prevent，或在moving前加 from