1、浙江宁波市2016高考英语（二轮）短文改错能力训练（5）及答案文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。My friend Dick was seven years old, and her sister Katherine was five. One day their mother take them to their aunts to play while she went to the city buy some new clothes. They play
2、ed for a hour, and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a nicely cake and a knife and said, “Dick, cut this cake in half, and give one of the piece to your sister. But remembering to do it like a gentleman.” “How do gentlemen do it？” Dick asked. “They always give the bigger one p
3、iece to the other person,” answered his aunt. Dick thought up this for a few seconds. Then he took the cake to his sister but said to her, “Cut this cake in half, Katherine.”【参考答案】4.My friend Dick was seven years old, and her (his) sister Katherine was five. One day their mother take (took) them to
4、their aunts to play while she went to the city (加to ) buy some new clothes. They played for a (an) hour, and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a nicely (nice) cake and a knife and said, “Dick, cut this cake in half, and give one of the piece (pieces) to your sister. But rememb
5、ering (remember) to do it like a gentleman.” “How do gentlemen do it？” Dick asked. “They always give the bigger one piece to the other person,” answered his aunt. Dick thought up (about) this for a few seconds. Then he took the cake to his sister but (and) said to her, “Cut this cake in half, Kather
6、ine.”短文改错。After I finished the school this year, I began to1._look for work. Now several month later, I still hadnt 2._found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3._I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4._He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5
7、._studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6._his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7._will go through the jobhunting talk today and he would8._take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9._what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10._答案与解析：1去掉thefinish school
8、是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。2monthmonthsmonth是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。3interested后加inbe interested in是固定搭配，表示“对感兴趣”。4himhimselfcalling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。5dodid根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。67beatenbeatinga beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。8willwould这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。9surprisedsurpri
9、seto ones surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。10said后加waswhat he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。短文改错。Dear doctor,My name is Wang Lin. Im a middle school student.I havea problem and Im writing to ask you for some advices. 1._Im just 1.57 meters high, and my weight is 71 kilos.Many 2._Students often make fun me.
10、Some boys are unfriendly to me. 3._They called me “ Meat Ball”. That makes me feel unhappy. 4._Im now worry about my weight. Though I am a bit too fat, I 5._feel rather good. I enjoy my meals. I love eating meat very 6._much. And I like sweet food, either. I often have sugar with 7._tea, milk, porri
11、dge, and even hot water. In the past two months 8._I have put off 5 kilos. Im worried about this problem, 9._but I dont know what to lose weight quickly. Please help me, 10_dear doctor!I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.With best wishes, Wang Lin【参考答案】1 advices advice 2 andbut 3of 4 called
12、call 5 worryworried 6 good well 7 either too 8 right 9 off on 10 what how短文改错。下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 After our final examinations, my brother and me thought we would give ourselves a treat at restaurant. While waiti
13、ng for our food, we emptied all our small changes from our wallets on the table and counted it out. Soon, our food arrived with a note. It reads, “Your lunch has been paid for. Have a lovely meal!” It was a wonderfully surprise as nothing like that had ever been happened to us. I remembered an old m
14、an sitting nearby. He should have thought we didnt have enough money to the bill. We looked around to thank him, and he was not there. His kindness meant so many to us.【参考答案】5.After our final examinations, my brother and me thought we would give ourselves a treat I at restaurant. While waiting for o
15、ur food, we emptied all our small changes from our wallets a change on the table and counted it out. Soon, our food arrived with a note. It reads, “Your lunch has been readpaid for. Have a lovely meal!” It was a wonderfully surprise as nothing like that had ever been wonderful happened to us. I reme
16、mbered an old man sitting nearby. He should have thought we didnt have mustenough money to the bill. We looked around to thank him, and he was not there. His kindness for but meant so many to us. much假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加
17、的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Amy,I glad to discuss your present situation with you. People often miss parents for the first time they left home. However, most people have to leave home for higher educations or employment. You cannot liv
18、e with our parents forever. You should realize that the separation will help improve your person ability. You need to make new friends and share ideas with whomever has something in common with you. Maybe you will still miss your parents, and your new friends will bring joy to your new life. Also I
19、suggest you will enjoy yourself by taking the active part in different activities. You will get much pleasure.Faithfully yoursSharon【参考答案】6.1.在glad前加am 2.在parents前加their3.leftleave 4.educations-education5.our-your6.personpersonal 7.whomever-whoever8.andbut 9.will-should10.the-an短文改错Traffic jam is ve
20、ry serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers i
21、n a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.In my opinion, the government should develop public transport. It should be cheaper and more convenient and comfortable. Besides, we should use public transport
22、 as much as possibly. Its better to share cars during rush hours. In a word, we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars.参考答案：SocauseseasilywaitingistheircitiesaTraffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, peopl
23、e must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is
24、 necessary to deal with this problem.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一个横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。 Everyone can do something for our enviro
25、nment.For me, 76._I should try to save electricity in our daily life. For example, 77._if I am the last person leave the classroom in the evening, 78._I will always remember to turn on the lights. In order to 79._protect our forests, I will use paper wise. I should try 80._to use both sides of paper
26、 whenever it is possible. I would81._not use things like paper cup and disposable chopsticks 82._because they are made of wood. I believe that by doing all83._these small things will improve our environment but help84._make our world the much better place to live. 85._答案与解析76. 77.ourmy。代词的错误。这里与主语保持
27、一致，用my表示“在我的日常生活中”。78. leave 前加to。非谓语动词的错误。这里用不定式做定语修饰the last person .79. onoff。动词短语的错误。语境表示把灯关掉而不是打开，因此用turn on。80. wisewisely。副词的错误。用 而不是形容词做状语表示方式。81. wouldwill。时态的错误。这里与语境保持一致，用一般将来时而不是过去将来时。82. cupcups。名词的错误。用复数名词cups表示泛指。83.by删除。从句子结构看，这里的v.-ing结构做句子主语，应该将介词删除。84. butand连词的错误。这里表示顺接和递进关系，用连词and而不是but。85. thea。冠词的错误。这里表示“一个更好的地方”，用a better place而不是“那个更好的地方”；注意后面的place to live是正确的，可以将掉尾介词in省略。