1、第三部分 高考题型突破题型五短文改错习思用过关检测Correction 12020全国主题考点分布词数建议时间动非谓语形/副名介连代冠母亲为家人制作健康饮食212102111028分钟My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to ha
2、ve the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad dont like the soup and I dont enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if were forced eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with apprec
3、iation.Correction 22019全国主题考点分布词数建议时间动非谓语形/副名介连代冠喜欢足球的缘由01320211957分钟I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident.One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground.Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me.I stopped the ball
4、 and kicked it hardly back to the playground.To everyones surprising, the ball went into the net.All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football.From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school.I am a good player now.Correction 32
5、018全国主题考点分布词数建议时间动非谓语形/副名介连代冠玩纸牌游戏310211111087分钟When I was little, Fridays night was our family game night. After supper,we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid,I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let
6、me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didnt realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.Correct
7、ion 42017丙卷(全国)主题考点分布词数建议时间动非谓语形/副名介连代冠回忆往事302012111108分钟When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a
8、new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings
9、 back to me many happy memories of your high school days.Correction 52016甲卷(全国)主题考点分布词数建议时间动非谓语形/副名介连代冠暑假计划310101311068分钟The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is c
10、omfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It d
11、oes not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.答 案题型五短文改错Correction 11.concerningconcerned考查形容词。此处表示主语的状态,应使用-ed形容词,表示关心的,关切的。2.familiesfamily考查名词单复数。family表示整体时,多作单数看待;指多个家庭成员时,多作复数看待。此处指我们家,故看作一个整体。3.surelysure考查固定搭配。make sure为固定搭配,表示确保。4.删除and考查连词。逗号前为状语,逗号后为句子主干,两者之间不能用and连接。5.thea考查冠词。这里泛指一碗鸡蛋
12、汤,故用不定冠词。bowl的发音以辅音音素开头,故用冠词a。6.hadhave考查时态。全文中心时态为一般现在时。7.第一个dontdoesnt考查主谓一致。主语为第三人称单数,故此处应用doesnt。8.eat前加to考查非谓语动词。be forced to do sth.被迫做某事。9.heshe考查代词。此处指代my mom,应用she。10.whatthat考查定语从句。what不能引导定语从句。先行词被all, any, much, little(少), few, no等修饰时,关系代词用that。Correction 21.interestinginterested考查形容词。be
13、come interested in 意为对感兴趣。2.wherewhen考查定语从句。本句含有一个定语从句,先行词为One afternoon,且引导词在从句中作时间状语,应用关系副词when。 3.在football前加a考查冠词。football足球是可数名词,且其发音以辅音音素开头,故应加不定冠词a表示泛指。 4.butand考查连词。but表示转折,而此处表示两个动作的顺承,故用并列连词and。5.hardlyhard考查副词。副词hardly意为几乎不,而hard作副词时,意为用力地。此处表示我用力把球踢回操场,故用hard。6.surprisingsurprise考查习惯用语。t
14、o ones surprise意为使某人惊讶的是。【知识积累】常见的此类习惯用语还有:to ones amazement(使某人惊奇的是), to ones astonishment(使某人惊讶的是),to ones disappointment(使某人失望的是),to ones delight(使某人开心的是)等。7.playerplayers考查名词单复数。句中的player运动员为可数名词,且all之后应用可数名词复数。8.saysaying考查非谓语动词。句中已有谓语动词cheered,say与句子主语在逻辑上是主谓关系,且说这个动作与谓语动作同时发生,应用动词-ing作状语,表示伴随
15、状况。9.nowthen考查副词。此处表示从那时起,应用from then on。10.删除my考查代词。动词play与球类名词连用时,名词前不加冠词或代词,故删除代词my。【知识积累】play与球类、棋类名词连用时,名词前不加限定词,如:play basketball(打篮球),play tennis(打网球),play chess(下棋) 等。Correction 31.FridaysFriday考查名词作定语。星期五晚上习惯上说Friday night。2.sortsorts考查名词单复数。由前面的all所有的可知,sort应用复数形式,all sorts意为各种各样。3.thea考查冠
16、词。此处表示作为一个孩子,kid表泛指,且kid的发音以辅音音素开头,故用不定冠词a。4.watchingwatch考查非谓语动词。ask to do sth.表示要求做某事,为固定用法。5.删除not后的to考查情态动词。would是情态动词,后要跟动词原形,故to多余。6.usme考查代词。根据语境可知,此处表示他们会对我(me)说。7.在unwilling前加was考查谓语动词。此句缺谓语动词,be unwilling to do sth.是固定用法,表示不愿做某事, unwilling为形容词。结合语境和时态可知,应用一般过去时,故在unwilling前加was。8.forwith考查
17、介词。表示和某人玩用play.with sb.。9.arewere考查时态。全文时态基调是过去时,此处也在描述过去发生的事,故应用一般过去时。10.wherewhen考查连词。此处表示当我还是个孩子的时候,故将where改为when(引导时间状语从句)。Correction 41.删除realize后的of考查介词。realize后直接接宾语从句,介词of多余。2.hadhave考查时态。由时间状语in the past few years可知,应用现在完成时。3.andbut考查连词。not only.but also.不仅而且是固定搭配。 4.tooktaken考查语态。photo与tak
18、e为被动关系,故应用被动语态。take的过去分词是taken。took为take的过去式。5.becomebecame考查动词时态。我成为学校音乐俱乐部的新成员,这件事发生在过去,所以谓语动词应用became,前面由and连接的并列谓语entered也有所暗示。6.picture前面加this或者the考查限定词或冠词。picture作照片讲时是可数名词,因为上文已提到过这张照片,因此要用定冠词the表特指,也可用this来限定。7.theythat或which考查定语从句。首先分析句子结构可知,things后面是一个定语从句,修饰先行词things,关系词指物,且在从句中作主语,故用that
19、或which引导定语从句。 8.differencedifferent考查形容词。名词kinds要用形容词来修饰,因此把difference改为different。9.latelatest考查形近词辨析。结合句意,这里表示收集最新的音乐专辑,故将late改为latest。latest意为最近的,最新的。10.yourmy考查人称代词。全文介绍的是我的故事,因此这里应该是我高中时期的回忆。Correction 51.howwhat考查疑问代词。分析句子结构可知,are talking about 后为宾语,且do缺少宾语,故将how改为what。2.chosechoose考查情态动词。情态动词后
20、接动词原形。3.taketaking考查非谓语动词。and连接两个并列成分,且介词between后接动词时应用其-ing形式,所以将take改为taking。4.butand考查连词。前后两部分之间为平行关系,故将but改为and。5.在world前加the考查冠词。world意为世界,天下,其前常与定冠词the连用。6.yourour考查代词。因为此处主语为we,故应用our。7.knowledgesknowledge考查名词的数。knowledge为不可数名词,没有复数形式。8.删除can或canshould考查虚拟语气。suggest 意为建议时,其后的宾语从句要使用虚拟语气,谓语用should+动词原形,should可以省略。9.thoughtthink考查动词的时态。全文的时态以一般现在时为主,再结合语境可知,此处也应用一般现在时。10.manymuch考查代词。表示钱的多少时要用much,而不用many。