1、Section_ (自修课)Writing_描述事件描述事件属于记叙文范畴。该话题涉及范围较广，即可描述文化节日、宗教节日，也可描述个人的庆祝，如生日、周年纪念等。一、基本结构第一段：事件情况简介，如事件发生的原因、地点、时间、人物等。第二段：开头。简述为这一事件做的准备、发生的确切时间和一些相关活动等。第三段：发展。描述事件当天所发生的事情。第四段：结尾。事件最后发生的事情、结束的时间、当事人的感受。二、增分佳句1People used to believe firecrackers and red clothing could frighten away the monster. 以前人们
2、认为鞭炮和红色的衣服能吓走怪兽。2Before the Spring Festival, all the Chinese people will get ready to celebrate it.在春节前，所有的中国人民准备庆祝它。3People are busy cleaning the house, buying some delicious food, and so on.人们忙着打扫房子，买一些美味的食物等等。4Some people are so excited that they often stay up on the Eve of the Spring Festival.有些
3、人非常兴奋，他们经常在春节前夕熬夜。5Its the happiest thing for children to get much money.得到很多钱是孩子们最快乐的事情。6All the family members go home to have a big dinner together.所有的家庭成员都回家聚餐。7When I got here, they were getting ready for tonights party.当我到这时，他们正在为今晚的聚会做准备8On this day, the moon is said to be its biggest and bri
4、ghtest.据说那天的月亮是一年中最大最亮的。题目要求假设你是李华，你远在美国的笔友Jack对中国的春节很感兴趣，他来信向你询问有关情况。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件，简单介绍春节以及中国人是如何过春节的。 要点：1.春节在中国的地位；2春节持续的时间；3春节来临之前人们的活动；4除夕人们的活动；5春节期间人们的活动；6你对春节的态度。 注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为记叙文；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；3确定时态：介绍节日的时态应为一般现在时。二、构思第一部分：简要介绍一下中国的春节。第二部分：介绍
5、中国人是如何过春节的(春节期间及春节前后人们的活动等)。第三部分：你对春节的态度。第二步：核心词汇想周全1fall_on落在上2get_together 相聚一起3watch_the_Spring_Festival_Gala 观看春节晚会4go_from_house_to_house 挨家挨户串门5pay_a_New_Year_visit 拜年6set_off_firecrackers 燃放鞭炮7get_pocket_money 得到压岁钱8eating_delicious_food 吃美味可口的食物9do_some_cleaning 大扫除10look_forward_to 期盼11deco
6、rate 装饰，装修第三步：由词扩句雏形现1我很高兴告诉你一些有关中国春节的事情。Im_glad_to_tell_you_something_about_the_Spring_Festival_of_China.2春节是中国最重要的节日，就像西方的圣诞节。The_Spring_Festival_is_the_most_important_festival_in_China,_just_like_Christmas_in_the_west.3在中国，春节也被叫做农历新年。It_is_also_called_Chinese_Lunar_New_Year.4春节发生在农历年的最后一天，一直持续到元宵
7、节。(并列句)It_falls_on_the_last_day_of_the_lunar_year_and_lasts_until_the_Lantern_Festival.5春节前，人们打扫并装饰屋子来迎接新年。(主动语态)Before_the_festival,_people_clean_and_decorate_their_houses_to_welcome_the_New_Year.6除夕之夜，人们通常会聚在一起吃美味的食物、在电视上看春节联欢晚会。(while引导的时间状语从句)On_New_Years_Eve,_people_usually_get_together_to_watc
8、h_the_Spring_Festival_Gala_on_TV_while_they_are_eating_delicious_food.7在节日期间，人们去挨家挨户拜访他们的亲戚和朋友。During_the_festival,_people_go_from_house_to_house_to_pay_a_New_Year_visit_to_their_relatives_and_friends.8我非常喜欢春节，因为我可以放鞭炮，并且还可以从我的父母和亲戚那里得到压岁钱。(because引导的原因状语从句)I_like_the_Spring_Festival_very_much_becau
9、se_I_can_set_off_firecrackers_and_get_pocket_money_from_my_parents_and_relatives_as_well.9你觉得中国的春节怎么样？How_do_you_like_the_Chinese_Spring_Festival?第四步：句式升级造亮点1用定语从句连接句2和句3The_Spring_Festival,_which_is_also_called_Chinese_Lunar_New_Year,_is_the_most_important_festival_in_China,_just_like_Christmas_in_
10、the_west.2把句4改成简单句Falling_on_the_last_day_of_the_lunar_year,_it_lasts_until_the_Lantern_Festival.3把句5改成被动句Before_the_festival,_peoples_houses_are_cleaned_and_decorated_to_welcome_the_New_Year.4用省略句式改写句6On_New_Years_Eve,_people_usually_get_together_to_watch_the_Spring_Festival_Gala_on_TV_while_eating
11、_delicious_food.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear_Jack，Thanks_for_your_email._Im_glad_to_tell_you_something_about_the_Spring_Festival_of_China.The_Spring_Festival,_which_is_also_called_Chinese_Lunar_New_Year,_is_the_most_important_festival_in_China,_just_like_Christmas_in_the_west._Falling_on_the_last_day_of_the_luna
12、r_year,_it_lasts_until_the_Lantern_Festival.Before_the_festival,_peoples_houses_are_cleaned_and_decorated_to_welcome_the_New_Year.On_New_Years_Eve，people_usually_get_together_to_watch_the_Spring_Festival_Gala_on_TV_while_eating_delicious_food._During_the_festival，people_go_from_house_to_house_to_pay_a_New_Year_visit_to_their_relatives_and_friends._I_like_the_Spring_Festival_very_much_because_I_can_set_off_firecrackers_and_get_pocket_money_from_my_parents_and_relatives_as_well.How_do_you_like_the_Chinese_Spring_Festival？I_am_looking_forward_to_hearing_from_you._Yours，Li_Hua
