1、Section_(自修课)Writing_调查报告一、基本结构一般来说，写调查报告主要包括以下四个部分：1简介调查报告具有针对性，因此在首段就应明确报告的主题和目的；2方法调查报告具有客观性，因此客观的数据来源必不可少；3结果调查报告具有写实性，因此要描述调查结果；4总结总结全文的主要观点，进一步深化主题。二、注意事项1语言应简明扼要，语气和态度保持客观。2结论应与正文照应，归纳、总结要有理可依。3提出建议时，应考虑调查报告与读者之间的关系及与建议接收部门的关系，用词方面要符合交际原则。三、增分佳句1A survey was carried out by an evening post in
2、our city among the citizens on how they spent their last national holidays.上周，我市的一家晚报对国庆长假期间市民的休闲方式进行了一项调查。2It is suggested that we students not overuse their eyes and its of great help to our eye health to participate in more outdoor activities.人们建议我们学生不应过度用眼，多参与课外活动对我们的眼睛健康有帮助。3The number of peopl
3、e who are opposed to this idea is over 5,000.反对该观点的人超过5 000。4From the result of the survey we can conclude that English is so important in our society that everyone should try to learn it well.从调查结果可以得出结论：英语在社会中如此重要所以每个人都应该学好。5After the discussion, we all realize the importance of learning English.
4、Thus, we make up our minds to learn English well.讨论结束后，我们都意识到学习英语的重要性。因此，我们下定决心学好英语。 题目要求 昨天，你们对800名中学生的未来理想职业进行了一次调查，请根据以下表格，写一篇英语短文：职业百分比原因老师或医生40%能帮助人演员或歌手20%能出名，受人崇拜做生意30%能挣大钱你想从事什么职业及原因注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文是一篇调查报告；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一和三人称；3确定时态：主要以一般现在时为主。二、构思第一部分：点
5、明调查的时间和对象。第二部分：指出调查结果和原因。第三部分：表达自己的想法。第二步：核心词汇想周全1do_a_survey做调查2career职业3according_to根据4admire羡慕5make_much_money挣大钱6as_for至于7be_good_at擅长8take_part_in参加第三步：由词扩句雏形现1昨天，我们对800名中学生的未来理想职业进行了一次 调查。Yesterday we_did_a_survey_about_the_future_career among 800 middle school students.2他们中40%的人想当老师或医生。40%_of
6、_them_want to be teachers or doctors.3他们认为老师和医生能帮助别人。They think teachers_and_doctors_can_help_people.4他们中20%想成为明星像演员或歌手。20% of them want to be stars like_actors_and_singers.5他们认为明星会受人崇拜。They think stars will_be_admired by others.6他们中30%想自己做生意。30% of them want_to_do_business by themselves.7他们能挣大钱。The
7、y can make_much_money.8对于我，我想成为一名运动员。As_for_me，I want to be an athlete.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用because把句2和句3连成复合句_40%_of_them_want_to_be_teachers_or_doctors,_because_they_think_teachers_and_doctors_can_help_people.2把句4和句5改写为含有who的定语从句20%_of_them_want_to_be_stars_like_actors_and_singers_who_they_think_will_be_a
8、dmired_by_others.3用for把句6和句7连成复合句30%_of_them_want_to_do_business_by_themselves,_for_they_think_they_can_make_much_money.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Yesterday we did a survey about the future career among 800 middle school students. According to the result, 40% of them want to be teachers or doctors, because they thi
9、nk teachers and doctors can help people. 20% of them want to be stars like actors and singers who they think will be admired by others. 30% of them want to do business by themselves, for they think they can make much money.As for me, I want to be an athlete. I am one of the members of our schools basketball team. I am good at it and I hope one day I can get a chance to take part in the Olympic Games.