1、读后续写13：三个的万能情感句Part1：第一个情感万能句- 1 -Part2：第二个情感万能句 - 2 -Part3：第三个情感万能句- 3 -Part 4：素材日积月累- 4 -Part1：第一个情感万能句To ones +情绪名词，主句这个句式，非常简单。属于入门级的情感描述句。主句是用来描述情绪产生的原因。首先我们来看例句：To my surprise,Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.令我惊讶的是Tom 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。要想这个句子学好，必须积累情绪名词，比如：【正态度】amazement惊奇,
2、 delight高兴, joy高兴, satisfaction满足，excitement兴奋, 【负态度】annoyance烦恼, disappointment失望, horror恐怖, shame,羞耻 sorrow悲伤, 【中性态度】puzzlement迷惑, regret后悔, relief欣慰, surprise/ amazement惊讶下面我们把这个简单句型，进行升级。【升级1】加强情绪的语气比如我想要表达的是：非常令我吃惊的是，汤姆在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。你可以这样写：Much / Greatly to my surprise, Tom won the first prize
3、 in the English Speech Contest.也就是在to前面加上much, greatly，或者在名词前面添加great这个形容词：To my great surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.【升级2】to the +情绪名词+ of sb（名词或者代词），比如我想要表达的是：令他的父母感到吃惊的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。To the surprise f his parents, he won the first prize in the English Speech Co
4、ntest.这里把To my surprise改成了To the surprise f his parents ，本质上，是两种所有格的变换。【升级3】情绪名词叠加使用。比如我要表达：令他惊讶和高兴的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖To his surprise and joy, he won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.【升级4】：“to ones +情绪名词”位置可变换这个短语的位置可以句首，句中，句末。请看下面例句：I，to my surprise, found that Tom won the first prize i
5、n the English Speech ContestPart2：第二个情感万能句What+情绪动词+sb+was +that从句What 主语从句描述情绪，that表语从句描述情绪产生的原因，在续写里通常可以表达故事发展情节。【举例】让我惊讶的是Tom 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。Whatsurprisedme wasthat Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.【归纳整理】【高兴类】delight, please, excite, cheer, amuse, satisfy,【生气类】annoy, upset【惊
6、讶类】surprise, astonish, shock, amaze,【害怕类】frighten, scare, terrify,【失望类】depress, disappoint, discourage, bore【忧虑类】worry, concern，【其他类】puzzle, confuse, interest, relax, touch, move, embarrass, impressPart3：第三个情感万能句sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪名词+ welling up in sbs heart and surging through sb.这句话表示：“
7、某人感到一股强烈的.在内心升腾、奔涌。”这个万能句也可以用来描写情绪和心理，比句式结构比前两个句子要复杂，表现力也要更丰富。well up表示“涌出”，我们可以这样记忆：well表示“好”以外，还可以表示“井”。“涌出”是用到了“井”这个含义。surge表示“汹涌”。这个句子的亮点是后半句welling up in sbs heart and surging through sb.，把情绪的描写形象化，具体化了。我们先来看两个例句：举例：Jane感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。Jane felt a great sense of horror welling up in her hea
8、rt and surging through her.举例2：Jane感到一股强烈的嫉妒，在她心中升腾，奔涌。Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.（jealous嫉妒的，jealousy是“嫉妒”的名词形式。）我们再来看看，这个句型还可以如何拓展升级。非常简单，就是加上非谓语动词，在不同的位置，发挥的作用不同。升级一：句首可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生的原因。举例：看到丈夫再跟一个漂亮的女孩聊天 ，Sunny感到一股强烈的恐惧在内心升腾，奔涌Seei
9、ng his husband chatting with a beautiful girl , Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.升级二：句尾可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生后的结果。请看下面的例句：简感到一种强烈的嫉妒感在她心中涌出来，把书扔向女孩。Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her ,throwing the boo
10、k at the girl.Part4：素材日积月累人物情绪描写之一：开心（通过心理、表情、动作来表达）平庸版：He was happy.进阶版:1. Her eyes shone/glittered/sparkled /twinkled with joy.2. Her face lit up with pleasure.（容光焕发）3. Her heart was pounding with excitement. （砰砰直跳）4. Happiness/joy/pleasure/delight took hold of him.(极度开心)5. She was overflowing wit
11、h happiness/joy/pleasure/delight.(幸福洋溢)6. He shed tears of joy.（流下开心的泪水）例句：1. His eyes twinkled with pleasure when he saw the news.当他看到新闻，他的眼里闪耀着快乐。2. He grinned with delight when he saw us.当他看到我们，咧开嘴开心地笑了。3. The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪耀。4. I couldnt restrain my joy and j
12、umped into the house.我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。5. He cast us a look/glance,with his face wearing a broad/wide/radiant/warm smile.她看向我们，面带灿烂/温暖的笑容。6. When his mother kissed him on the cheek,it seemed as if the baby were on the top of the world.当妈妈亲吻他的脸颊时，小婴儿开心极了。人物情绪描写之二：伤心（心理、表情、动作）平庸版：He was sad.进阶表达：不同
13、的哭：cry 哭（泛指，哭出声） sob 呜咽，啜泣 wail 嚎啕大哭 weep 小声/无声流泪burst into tears 放声大哭 fight back tears 抑制住泪水be close to tears / be on the verge of tears 快要哭了 be in tears 含泪 Her eyes were wet with tears 例句：1. He sighed with disappointment.他失望地叹了口气。2. He struggled to fight back his tears.他试图控制住自己的泪水。3. His eyes brim
14、med with tears of sorrow.他的眼里噙满了悲伤的泪水。4. He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪流下他的脸颊。5. I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. 我感觉自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。6. I saw an old lady wailing with fist beating her chest in the street corner. 我看到一个老奶奶在街角捶胸痛哭。7. When he embraced me with his arms open wide, I felt my throat choke with sob. 当他张开双臂拥抱我时，我觉得自己喉头哽咽。8. Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldnt help crying bitterly. 一听到这个坏消息，她就被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣。