1、专 题 微 练考前6周 提分组合练第3练 规范写作组合练 短文改错书面表达(邀请信)限时30分钟短文改错My father,who had been away on a business trip,would come back.I missed him too much that I couldnt wait to seeing him at once.My fathers trains would arrive at 5：30.To my surprised,Father gave me the call at 5：00.He told me not to meet him at the
2、train station because the heavy rain.Therefore,I didnt listen to him.Though it was raining cats and dogs,but I went to the train station.The moment we caught sight of each other,all of us were very excited and I hug my father warmly and tightly.答案与解析 tooso 考查 so.that 句式。根据后面的“that I couldnt wait”及句意
3、“我如此思念他以至于我迫不及待地想立刻见到他”可知此处为 so.that.“如此以至于”句式。故 too 改为 so。seeingsee 考查非谓语动词。cant wait to do sth.“迫不及待做某事”，wait 后用不定式作宾语。故 seeing 改为 see。trainstrain 考查名词的数。父亲坐的火车只有一辆，故 train 用单数形式。故 trains 改为 train。surprisedsurprise 考查名词。to ones surprise“令某人吃惊的是”，故surprised 改为 surprise。thea 考查冠词。give sb.a call“给某人打
4、电话”，故 the 改为 a。because 后加 of 考查介词。because 是连词，后接原因状语从句；because of 是介词短语，后接 n./pron./v.-ing/宾语从句。根据后面的名词短语“the heavy rain”可知，此处用 because of 短语。故 because 后加 of。ThereforeHowever 考查副词。句意：因为大雨他告诉我不要去火车站接他。然而，我没有听他的话。前后句并非因果而是转折关系，故用 however“然而；可是”。故 Therefore 改为 However。去掉 but 考查连词。though“虽然”引导让步状语从句，主句前
5、无需并列连词 but。but 多余故去掉。allboth 考查代词。all 指“三者或三者以上都”，both 指“两者都”。根据上文可知此处指父亲和“我”两个人，故用 both。故 all 改为 both。hughugged 考查动词的时态。全文整体时态为一般过去时，讲述过去的经历。此处也用一般过去时表过去发生的事情。故 hug 改为 hugged。注意：hug 拥抱huggedhuggedhugging。书面表达(邀请信)假如你是学校国际部的学生李华，为捐助贫困儿童，你们要举办校园义卖活动。请你给外教 Kevin 写封邮件，邀请他参加，内容包括：1.活动的时间地点；2.活动的内容；3.邀请的
6、理由。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：charity sale 义卖范文 Dear Kevin，I am writing to invite you to participate in the big campus charity sale,which will take place in the stadium this Sunday morning,the 21st of April.The charity sale will be hosted by our monitor,where we will sell stationery,used
7、books,sports suits,lovely toys,handcrafts and so on,and all proceeds will benefit needy children in the countryside.I know you have showed great interest and promise in our activity,so I hope you can come to take part in it.I think it will be a meaningful experience,and let us see it together.I would greatly appreciate your being there.Yours sincerely，Li Hua