1、专 题 微 练考前6周 提分组合练第4周第3练 规范写作组合练 短文改错书面表达(回复信)限时30分钟短文改错(2019龙岩二模)On the first day during the winter vacation,my classmates and I went to the Nursing Home and did some voluntary works.On our arrive,we visited the elderly in their rooms,presented them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respe
2、ct and love.Then we did some cleaning or washing for them under the help of the nurses.Having been done all these,we sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.We talked about our old days,changes of our city,and anything they were interested.When it was time for us to leave,the elderly people
3、 thank us for our kindness.They said it was so a beautiful day that theywould remember it forever.答案与解析 workswork 考查名词的数。voluntary work“志愿；工作”，work 表“工作”为不可数名词，无复数形式，故works改为work。arrivearrival/arriving 考查固定搭配。on/upon ones arrival/arriving“某人一到达”，固定搭配。故arrive改为arrival/arriving。presentedpresenting 考查非
4、谓语动词。句中已有谓语visited且无并列连词连接，此处present为非谓语动词作状语且与逻辑主语we为主动关系，故用现在分词形式。故presented改为presenting。orand 考查连词。“did some cleaning”与“washing”之间为并列关系，肯定句中表并列用连词and。故or改为and。underwith 考查固定搭配。with the help of“在的帮助下”，固定搭配。故under改为with。去掉been 考查非谓语动词。主语we与do之间为主动关系，且表先于谓语动作之前发生的动作，故用现在分词的完成式的主动语态即having done作状语。故去
5、掉been。ourtheir 考查代词。句意：我们谈论起他们的往昔、城市的变迁和任何他们会感兴趣的事。根据句意可知，此处指“他们的”往昔并非“我们的”，故用形容词性物主代词their。故our改为their。interested后加in 考查介词。anything后为省略关系代词that的定语从句。be interested in“对感兴趣”，固定搭配，关系代词that作in的宾语。故interested后加in。thankthanked 考查动词的时态。本文整体时态为一般过去时，讲述的是寒假第一天去敬老院的经历。此处也用一般过去时表过去发生的事情。故thank改为thanked。sosuch
6、 考查固定句式。soadj.a/an名词单数that.“如此以至于”；sucha/anadj.单数名词that.“如此以至于”。由后面的“a beautiful day”可知，此处so改为such。书面表达(回复信)假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Harry写信向你了解网络对中国学生学习方式的影响。请根据以下提示，给他写封回信。1.网络的发展给中国学生带来了很多新的学习方式；2.学习方式的变化表现在课程选择方式、教学方式、作业布置等方面；3.你的感想。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。答案与解析 Dear Harry，As for your last letter ask
7、ing about new learning ways of our Chinese students,let me introduce them to you.First of all,students are able to choose subjects on the Internet according to their levels,interests and needs.Then,they can just stay at home and study in a virtual-reality school.When they put on their 3D image glasses,they will feel as though they were actually in a classroom having lessons.Besides,after class,students can get their homework sent to them by the teacher according to their different performances.In short,the Internet plays an important role in the new ways of learning.Yours sincerely，Li Hua