1、专 题 微 练考前6周 提分组合练第3周第3练 规范写作组合练 短文改错书面表达(祝贺信)限时30分钟短文改错 I went to buy some traditional Chinese medicine on last Sunday.Just before leaving the drugstore,I noticed that some foreigners seems to have difficulty communicate with the assistant.I went over to ask if I needed.The assistant told me that sh
2、e couldnt make herself understand about how to boil the mixture correctly.Learning that I could give them the hand,they were relieved.Without some trouble,I translated that the assistant wanted to say.Both sides expressed thanks to me.I was delighted to help other.More importantly,as a Chinese,I fel
3、t proudly to see foreigners try traditional Chinese medicine.答案与解析 去掉on 考查固定用法。表时间的名词前有last、next、this、every、each等词修饰时不用介词直接在句中作时间状语。last Sunday“上周日”，next week“下周”。on多余故去掉。seemsseemed 考查动词的时态。根据第一句中的时间状语“last Sunday”可知，本文讲述的是上周日发生的事，全文整体时态为一般过去时，此处也用一般过去时表过去的动作。故seems改为seemed。communicatecommunicating
4、 考查固定搭配。have difficulty(in)doing sth.“做某事有困难”，固定搭配。故communicate改为communicating。I后加was 考查动词的语态。句意：我走过去问是否需要我帮忙。if从句的主语I和need是被动关系，应用被动语态，表“我被需要”。故I后加was。understandunderstood 考查非谓语动词。make oneself understood“使自己被理解”，在“make宾语v.-ed作宾补”结构中，宾语v.-ed为被动关系。此处表“店员无法使自己被(外国人)理解”，故用understood作宾补。故understand改为und
5、erstood。thea 考查冠词。give sb.a hand“帮某人忙”，固定搭配，故the改为a。someany 考查形容词。some用于肯定句中修饰名词表“一些”；any用于疑问句或否定句中表“任何一个/一些”。否定词without后修饰名词trouble用any表“没有任何麻烦；不费吹灰之力”。故some改为any。thatwhat 考查宾语从句。句意：我不费吹灰之力就把店员想说的话翻译出来了。translated后的宾语从句中缺say的宾语，表“说的内容”，that引导宾语从句只起连接作用不做任何成份，故用what引导宾语从句。otherothers 考查代词。other作形容词表
6、“其他的”其后跟复数名词，作代词前加the表两者中的另一个；others单独使用表“其他的人/物”相当于“other复数名词”。此处other后无名词，故用others表“我乐于助人”。故other改为others。proudlyproud 考查形容词。felt为系动词，其后接形容词作表语。故proudly改为proud。书面表达(祝贺信)假如你是李华，你的美国网友 Peter参加了“中国首届外国留学生软笔书法竞赛”并获得了一等奖，请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.祝贺获奖；2.肯定成绩和努力；3.约时间在网上交流学习中国软笔书法的心得。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
7、；3.信件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：中国首届外国留学生软笔书法竞赛 the First Chinese Calligraphy Contest for Foreign Students答案与解析 Dear Peter，I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your taking first place in the First Chinese Calligraphy Contest for Foreign Students.As your friend,I just want you to know
8、 I am more than glad at your success.“Everything comes to him who waits.”For these years,youve shown great interest in Chinese calligraphy and kept on practicing it every day.Not only have you referred to many calligraphy books,but you have consulted some calligraphy masters.Hard work pays off.Eventually,it was through your hard work and talent that you succeeded in winning the championship!I hope to exchange with you our experience in learning calligraphy so that we can make progress together.Please tell me when you have time.Congratulations again.Yours，Li Hua