1、Day 15A假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Once there was an old woman. She had a lot of money. She was kind and generously. She always did s
2、omething help the poor. At Christmas, she handed out food, that was made by herself, to the poor. She handed out a turkey leg but a potato to every homeless person he saw. The homeless people love her very much. One homeless men took out a penny that he wanted to give to her as for a gift. She felt
3、good. She was determined to doing more, so she gave $ 50 with every homeless person she saw.B假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。-修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Health is o
4、f greatly importance for us. We need some common knowledges to stay healthy.Firstly, pay attention to the diet. We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, and they are rich in fiber and low in fat. Dont have a lol of food what contains loo much fat, such as like butler. Dont drink too much coffee,
5、too.Secondly, exercise was necessary. Regular exercise can help stop us get fat. People who do running every day usually have strong hearts than those who dont.Finally, form good living habits. We should sleep about 8 hours at night, and never work too late. Besides, stay away cigarettes.答案A【答案解析】 1
6、.generously generous 2.something后加to 3.that which 4.butand 5.heshe 6.loveloved 7.menman 8.for去掉 9.doing do 10. with to【分析】本文是记叙文，讲述了一个老太太慷慨地帮助穷人的故事。【详解】1.考查形容词。and是并列连词，连接并列的形容词kind和generous作表语，故generously改为generous。2.考查非谓语动词。此处是动词不定式作目的状语，to help the poor “为了帮助穷人”，故something后加to。 3.考查定语从句。that was
7、made by herself是非限制性定语从句，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，故that改为which。4.考查并列连词。句意：她把火鸡腿和土豆分给每一个无家可归的人。句中a turkey leg 和 a potato是并列关系，不是转折关系，故 but改为and。 5.考查代词。句意：她把火鸡腿和土豆分给每一个她看到的无家可归的人。句子主语是she , 这里也是指“老太太”，故he改为she。 6.考查时态。全文是讲述过去发生的事情，用一般过去时，故love改为loved。 7.考查名词单复数。前面是one，意为“一个无家可归的人”，men应用单数，故men改为man。 8.考查介词。
8、as意为：作为；as a gift “作为一个礼物”，不需介词for , 故for去掉 。 9.考查固定短语。短语be determined to do “下决心做”, 后接动词原形，故doing改为do。 10. 考查固定短语。短语 give sth. to sb. “把给某人”，用介词to , 故with改为to。B【答案解析】 1. greatly - great2. knowledges - knowledge 3. and - because/ as / for 4. what - that/ which；5. 删去 like 6. too - either 7. was - is
9、8. get - getting 9. strong - stronger 10. away后加 from【分析】这是一篇说明文。文章主要讲述了健康对我们很重要，我们应该通过什么方法来保持健康。【详解】1. 考查形容词。此处应用形容词修饰名词importance，故将greatly改为great。2. 考查名词的数。knowledge是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故将knowledges改为knowledge。3. 考查连词。句意：我们应该吃大量的水果和蔬菜，因为它们富含纤维且脂肪含量低。结合句意可知前后部分是因果关系，故将and改为because/for/ as。4. 考查定语从句。分析句子结
10、构可知，此处是定语从句关系词，先行词food在从句中充当主语，故应用关系代词which/that，故将what该为that/which。5. 考查介词。句中such as和like都是“例如”之意，故删除like。6. 考查副词。Dont drink too much coffee是否定句，应用either表示“也”，故将too改为either。7. 考查时态。本篇讲述一般事实，应用一般现在时，故将was改为is。8. 考查短语。此处考查短语stop sb (from) doing sth阻止某人做某事，故将get改为getting。9. 考查比较级。根据than判断此处用比较级，故将strong改为stronger。10. 考查副词。此处考查短语stay away from远离，故在away后加from。【点睛】第4小题考查定语从句关系词。确定定语从句关系词一般分为三步：找出先行词；分析先行词在从句中充当什么成分；考虑特殊情况。以本题为例：找出先行词：food (指物)分析先行词在从句中充当什么成分：先行词food在从句contains loo much fat中充当主语，故用关系代词which/that考虑特殊情况：无故将what改为which/that。
