1、第5讲 规避常见的五种错误 语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中,尤其语法错误,是较为严重的错误,是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”。因此,认清各种各样的语法错误,尽可能地少犯,对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。技法探究素养提升错误1.句子成分残缺不全(1)We always working till late at night before taking exams.改:We always work till late at night before taking exams.(2)We should read books may be useful to us.改:We shoul
2、d read books which may be useful to us.错误2.句子成分多余(1)This test is end,but there is another test is waiting for you.改:One test ends,but another is waiting for you.(2)The driver of the red car was died on the spot.改:The driver of the red car died on the spot.错误3.主谓不一致(1)Someone/Somebody think that read
3、ing should be selective.改:Some think that reading should be selective.(2)My sister go to the cinema at least once a week.改:My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week.错误4.动词时态、语态的误用(1)I was walking along the road,and there are not so many cars on the street.改:I was walking along the road and t
4、here were not so many vehicles on the street.(2)We have little time to read some books which we interest.改:We have little time to read some books in which we are interested.(3)I am a student who has studying in the college for two years.改:I have been studying in the college for two years.错误5.词类混淆(1)
5、Honest is so important for everyone.改:Honesty is so important for everyone.(2)The old man was hit by a car when he across the street.改:The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street.写出下列经常写错的单词1.成功;成功的 _2.大学_3.语言_4.选择_5.责任_6.目前,现在_7.方便的,便利的_8.志愿者_9.社会_success(n.),succeed(v.),successful
6、(adj.)collegelanguagechoose(v.);choice(n.)responsibilitynowadaysconvenientvolunteersociety【过关检测】10.耐心;病人 _11.当代的_12.观点,看法_13.外国的_14.政府_15.环境_patience(n.);patient(adj.)modernopinionforeigngovernmentenvironment16.促进,提升_17.困难的_18.不同的_19.有必要的_20.交流_promotedifficultdifferentnecessarycommunicate.写出下列经常写错的
7、短语1.在周末_2.对感兴趣_3.在网上_4.养成的习惯_5.总而言之_6.重视_7.在我看来_8.为树立好的榜样_on weekendsbe interested inon the Internetform/develop the habit ofto sum up/in conclusionattach importance toin my opinion/as far as I am concernedset a good example to sb.9.和某人交流_10.我乐意做某事_11.不遗余力做某事_12.在我业余时间_13.做一名志愿者_14.文明和谐的社会_15.高考_com
8、municate with sb.I am willing to do sth.spare no efforts to do sth.in my spare timework as a volunteera civilized and harmonious societythe College Entrance Examination16.长处和短处_17.容易得多_18.对有好处_19.克服各种困难_20.盼望您的早日回复_advantages and disadvantagesmuch easierdo good to/be beneficial toovercome all kinds
9、of difficultiesLooking forward to your early reply.常用句型需牢记1.我有很多爱好,比如看小说,跳舞等等。(such as)_2.如果你能帮助我,我将不胜感激。(appreciate)_3.我想知道你是否能帮助我解决这些困难。(help.with.)_4.在我看来,和你的父母经常交流是解决问题的关键所在。(the key to)_I have many hobbies,such as reading novels,dancing and so on.I would appreciate it if you could help me.I won
10、der if you can help me with these difficulties.As far as I am concerned,communicating with your parents regularly is thekey to solving the problem.5.我写信是给你一些建议。(suggestion)_6.对于你的帮助,我谨表示万分感谢。(gratitude)_7.我对这个职位很感兴趣,想申请这份工作。(apply for)_8.踢足球和读故事是我的最爱,它们让我受益颇多。(which,do good to)_I am writing to give
11、you some suggestions.I show my heartfelt gratitude to your help/I am greatly grateful for your help.I am interested in the position and want to apply for the job.Playing football and reading stories are my favorites,which do good to me alot.9.我相信,在老师和学生的共同努力下,我们的校园一定会在不久的将来变成一个更舒心的地方。(with the joint
12、 efforts of)_10.如果你有其他任何问题,请让我知道。(any other)_11.我急切地想得到您的帮助。(anxious)_12.我非常喜欢它,主要有以下两个原因。(mainly)_I believe that with the joint efforts of both the teachers and students,ourcampus will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.If you have any other problem,please let me know.I am anxious to
13、get help from you.I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.13.你现在学习和生活怎么样?(how)_14.到了我们应该采取一些有效的措施来解决这个问题的时候了。(Its high time that)_15.很高兴能做一下自我介绍。(pleasure)_How is everything going on with your life and study now?Its high time that we should take/took some effective measures to solve theproblem.It is my pleasure to introduce myself.