1、广东罗定县2016高考英语书面表达二轮基础选练（3）及答案记叙文型基础写作1-1 专题导读记叙文是以叙述为主要表达方式，以写人物的经历和事物发展变化为主要内容的一种文体，包括记人记事方面的故事、日记、游记、新闻、通讯等。记叙文通常要将时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果六个要素交代清楚。通常使用第一人称或第三人称来写，第一人称主要是用于写自传或本人的经历，第三人称是用于写他人的经历或事迹。写作时要注意以下几点：1注意不要漏掉信息点，但也不要为了生动而随意添加信息。2信息点的表述不一定完全按照题目所给的顺序，可能要适当重组。要特别注意故事发展的线索和时间顺序等。3记叙文写作的时态多数是用一般
2、过去时，但也要注意灵活运用其他时态。4高考中记叙文的话题通常是与中学生的生活阅历有关，如校园生活、旅游、交通、交友等，平时要注意积累这些方面的词汇和短语。典例导练【2011湖北卷改编】请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就“与人合作”这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork.Teamwork shows us how other peoples roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches us
3、to be patient and how to respond to different people.【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。One possible version：Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important for me.In fact, I didnt realize its importance until I was chosen monitor of my class
4、 in my senior middle school.At first, I did most of the duties myself while other students cared little about class activities.As a result, I was tired out and depressed so I turned to my teacher, who advised me to cooperate with others.It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me o
5、f trouble and made my work more efficient.新题预测【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 One possible version：Yesterday my classmates and I went to West Mountain and had a picnic.All of us set off at seven oclock from our school gate and rode to the foot of the mountain. After an hours climbi
6、ng, we reached the top of the mountain and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. Running, singing, dancing, playing chess and taking photos, we had a wonderful time there.After the picnic lunch at three oclock, we felt very tired, so we went down the mountain and came home.请根据以下说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述所给的全部内容。【写作内
7、容】假如你叫孙军，是某市一所中学的学生。老师要求同学们写一篇英文短文，反映学校门前交通拥挤的现象，短文须包括以下要点：【写作要求】必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。One possible version：Beside my school there is a primary school and the gates of the two schools both face the main road.In rush hours, there are so many cars, buses and bikes on the main road
8、 that the students have to cross it to school.Crowds of people often thread their way through the moving cars and buses.Whats worse, some pupils are too young to go to school by themselves, so many parents have to go along with them to make sure that their children are safe.I think the government sh
9、ould build an overpass over the road so that we can pass through it safely; otherwise accidents are sure to happen from time to time.【陕西省西安市长安一中2014第二次模拟】书面表达（满分30分）假定你是中学生李华。在国外中学生贴吧上看到一位名叫Slowstudent的中学生的帖子，你看到如下内容。请你根据帖子内容、写作要点和要求跟帖。写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法； 2. 陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；3. 提出至少两条建议。要求：1. 短文须写在答题卡的指定
10、区域。2. 短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。3. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 4. 书写需清晰、工整。【参考范文】书面表达（满分30分）(One possible version)Slowstudent, This is really a tough nut to crack. In my opinion, you should not be afraid of a parents meeting; instead, youd better take a proper attitude to it. In fact, a parents meeting is for the mo
11、st part a communication meeting, where teachers and parents exchange information and opinions about students situations at school and home, which is beneficial to improve teaching quality. As for your problem, I think you can have a good talk with your parents and teachers. While talking with your p
12、arents, you can focus on how hard you study (if it is the case) and why you failed this time or even ask them to help analyze your failure. When talking with your teachers, better ask them for the law of each subject and effective methods of learning them. Anyhow, improving your grades is the key to
13、 solving the problem. Yours,Li Hua(Another possible version)Slowstudent, This is really a tough nut to crack. In my opinion, if you use your head a little bit, it is easy to deal with. Let me put it clearer. Now that parents meetings bring troubles and unhappiness to you, that would be okay if there
14、 were no such kind of meeting. It is impossible for you to forbid your school or your class to hold a parents meeting, but you can “forbid” your parents to attend the meeting. How? One way is not telling your parents there will be a parents meeting. Another is trying to say something bad about the meeting (say, the meeting is intended for nothing but to collect money) so that your parents hate to go to it. These approaches prove effective, for I am as slow a student as you.Yours,Li Hua