1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（13）短文改错Dear Sir,I am university student. I once thought life at the1_university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind.2_I have three roommates, and I was the last one tomove3_into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and4_happy. But I fi
2、nd they are not willing to be with me now.5_They dont talk with me, theyve become cold toward6_me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about what7_I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving8_alone, I am always recall this sadness. Why cant I win true 9_friendship? Im lonely, a
3、nd look forward to get your advice soon.10_Yours, Peter 书面表达假如你叫李华，寒假期间要去英国Embassy English Language School (EELS) 进行短期学习。以下是英方学校寄给你的课程安排选择表。请你仔细阅读，按要求给校方回一封信。Schedule for EELS Winter English CoursesEnglish CoursesTotal Hours of StudyTotal Hours of Part-time JobDatesix-week course12048Feb 1Mar 12Four
4、-week course60No Job but Tour InsteadFeb1Feb 27Please include the following:1. Your choice and possible reasons; 2. Your present English level;3. Specific language skill you want to improve;4. Other personal requirements.注意：1信的开头已为你写好； 2词数：100左右。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir,Thank you for your offer of i
5、nviting me to the winter English course in your school. 1. am后加上a; 2. changed 前加上have或改为change; 3. 正确； 4. I 改为we; 5. happy改为happily; 6. 第二个they 前面加上and; 7. time改为times; 8. leaving改为left; 9. 去掉am; 10. get改为getting; One possible version:Dear Sir,Thank you for your offer of inviting me to the winter En
6、glish course in your school. As for my choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course for 60 hours of study. Because this would allow me more time to do some traveling and make a few new friends too.Of all the subjects Im learning at school, I like English best. I have been learning E
7、nglish for 6 years but my spoken English remains poor. So I hope to take this chance to improve it. If possible, Id like to stay with a family for a couple of days so that I can know some customs in England. I believe I will have a wonderful time this winter.Yours truly, Li Hua 高考资源网独家精品资源，欢迎下载！高考资源网Ks5uK&S%5#UKs5uKs%U高考资源网高考资源网高考资源网 高考资源网版权所有，侵权必究！