1、Section_Writing_介绍某一地点的说明文一、基本结构第一段：总体简介。第二段：展开描述位置、面积、环境、交通、人口、历史、名胜古迹及特色。第三段：结合写作要求进行结尾。二、增分佳句1前门大街有600年历史，800米长，沿街有300家店铺。Qianmen Street with 800 meters long is a famous street of over 600 years old, along which there are more than 300 shops.Qianmen Street with a history of 600 years old, is 800
2、meters in length, along which there are more than 300 shops.The 800meterlong Qianmen Street with more than 300 shops along has a history of over 600 years old.2坐落在山顶的寺庙经历了这个地区的许多变化。The temple stands on the top of the mountain, and has experienced many changes in this area.Standing on the top of the
3、mountain，the temple has witnessed many changes in this area.3它坐落在天安门广场南面。It is just located to the south of Tiananmen Square.To the north of it, there is Tiananmen Square.It lies south of Tiananmen Square.4加拿大，世界第二大国，占地 997万平方公里。Canada, which is the second largest country in the world, covers an are
4、a of 9.97 million square kilometres.Canada, the second largest country in the world, covers an area of 9.97 million square kilometres.Canada, covering an area of 9.97 million square kilometres, is the second largest country in the world.5乘车到达前门大街很方便，可乘坐公共汽车17、69、59等路，以及地铁2号线。Its very convenient to g
5、et there by taking Buses No. 17, 69 or 59 besides Subway Line 2.With Buses No. 17, 69 or 59 passing there, it is very convenient to get there by bus, and you can also choose to take Subway Line 2.With Subway Line 2 another choice, you can get there easily by taking Buses No. 17, 69 or 59.6万绿湖是一个很美丽的
6、地方，湖水清澈；湖中有各种各样的鱼；你可以到那里划船、野餐、钓鱼。Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place, where the water is so clean that there are all kinds of fish in it, and you can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic.The water of Wanlu Lake, a beautiful place, is so clean that there are all kinds of fish in it, and you can go bo
7、ating, go fishing and have a picnic.题目要求假如你是李华，请根据下面提示给Mr.Smith回信，介绍适合他租用的一处房子。 1位于市中心商业区，交通便利，环境优美；2面积80平方米，宽敞明亮；3房间天然气、暖气、家具、空调等必备设施齐全；4房租价格合理，每月仅1 000元；5房子位置和户型如图所示：第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为说明文；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；3确定时态：主要使用一般现在时。二、构思第一部分：引出话题。第二部分：房屋简介。第三部分：全文总结。第二步：核心词汇想周全1lie_in/be_located_in_.
8、坐落在2the_fifth_floor 五楼3convenient 方便4contain 含有5be_equipped_with 装备6facility 设施7rent 租金8bargain 便宜第三步：由词扩句雏形现1一句多译在它的周围有超市、医院和车站。Around it, there_is_a_supermarket,_a_hospital_and_a_bus_stop. (there be句型)Around it lies_a_supermarket,_a_hospital_and_a_bus_stop. (含有lie的倒装句)房子有一个客厅，两个卧室，一个厨房和一个卫生间。There
9、_is_one_living_room,_two bedrooms, one kitchen and one toilet in the house.(there be)The_house_contains_one_living_room,_two bedrooms, one kitchen and one toilet. (contain)2按要求补全句子房子在六层建筑的五楼。The house is_on_the_fifth_floor of a sixstorey building.它位于花园路和和平路的交叉路口。It is_located_in the crossroad made b
10、y the Garden Avenue and the Peace Avenue.它们是我市最繁忙的两个街道。They_are_two_busiest_streets in our city.每月租金仅为1 000元。The rent is no more than/only 1,000 yuan per month.它真的很便宜。It is a_real_bargain.第四步：句式升级造亮点1把句改为名词短语置于句中作同位语It_is_located_in_the_crossroad_made_by_the_Garden_Avenue_and_the_Peace_Avenue,_two_b
11、usiest_streets_in_our_city.2把升级后的句1改为which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰句中的buildingThe_house_is_on_the_fifth_floor_of_a_sixstorey_building，which_is_located_in_the_crossroad_made_by_the_Garden_Avenue_and_the_Peace_Avenue,_two_busiest_streets_in_our_city.3用which引导的非限制性定语从句连接句和The_rent_is_no_more_than_1,000_yuan_per_m
12、onth,_which_is_a_real_bargain.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear_Smith，As_for_the_problem_you_put_forward_in_you_last_letter,_Id_like_to_recommend_the_following_house_to_you.It_is_on_the_fifth_floor_of_a_sixstorey_building_which_is_located_in_the_crossroad_made_by_the_Garden_Avenue_and_the_Peace_Avenue,_two_busiest_st
13、reets_in_our_city._Around_it_lies_a_supermarket,_a_hospital_and_a_bus_stop,_so_it_is_convenient_for_you_to_do_shopping,_see_a_doctor_or_travel._Whats_more,_the_house_contains_one_living_room,_two_bedrooms,_one_kitchen_and_one_toilet._Besides,_it_is_equipped_with_all_the_households_and_living_facilities_such_as_natural_gas,_heating_system,_furniture,_airconditioners_and_so_on._The_rent_is_no_more_than_1,000_yuan_per_month,_which_is_a_real_bargain.I_think_the_house_is_quite_suitable_for_you.Yours，Li_Hua