1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家Section Writing有关健康生活习惯的说明文技法指导写有关健康生活习惯的说明文时，一般要写明什么样的做法会对健康有利或有害，人们应该怎样做才能保持健康等。该类文章一般采用以下写作策略：1开门见山提出主题，说明自己所发现的关于健康问题的现象。2分析所给内容，然后进行详细说明。说明所给内容时可以先说现象，也可以先说结果，再说引起这种结果的原因。3最后归纳总结或发表意见。这一部分的内容主要是提出解决办法及给出自己的保持健康的建议。增分佳句As far as I am concerned, health is more important than wealt
2、h.依我看，健康远比财富重要。Taking exercise is closely related to health.运动和健康息息相关。Early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起会使人健康、富有和聪明。It is widely believed that plenty of fresh air contributes to good health.人们普遍认为足够的新鲜空气有助于健康。Nowadays people are beginning to pay more attenti
3、on to their health than ever before.目前人们开始比以前更关注健康。We should reject junk food, such as instant noodles and hamburgers.我们应该拒绝垃圾食品，例如方便面和汉堡。Doctors advise us teenagers to sleep at least 8 hours each day.医生建议我们青少年每天至少要睡8个小时。People come to realize that good health is the most valuable thing a person can
4、 have.人们开始意识到健康是人所能拥有的最有价值的东西。精品展示假设你是王林。过去，由于一些不健康的生活习惯，你的健康出现了问题。之后，你改变了生活方式，现在又恢复了健康。请你根据此经历写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1之前不健康的生活习惯：不吃早饭，经常熬夜，很少锻炼；2导致的问题：肥胖，易生病；3解决的办法：保持均衡饮食，积极锻炼，早睡早起；4给其他同学的建议：尽快改掉不健康的生活习惯，以保持身体健康。注意：1词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题谋篇第一步：明确要求该写作属于健康话题的应用文写作，主要介绍过去不良健康习惯及导致的问题，应该用一般过去时；解决办法及给同学们的建议
5、用一般现在时。第二步：确定段落第一段介绍：过去不健康的生活习惯以及造成的危害第二段阐述：介绍摆脱不良习惯的几种方式第三段总结：给其他学生提出建议第三步：提炼要点1unhealthy_living_habits/unhealthy_lifestyle 不健康的生活习惯2skip_breakfast/no_breakfast 不吃早餐3junk_food/rubbish_food 垃圾食品4stay_up_late 熬夜5take_exercise/have_physical_training/do_physical_exercise 锻炼6as_a_result/therefore/thus 结
6、果；因此7become_aware_of 意识到8keep_fit/healthy 保持健康9break_oneself_of/get_out_of_bad_habits 摆脱坏习惯10a_balanced_diet 均衡饮食第四步：句式升级1我经常熬夜，并且很少进行体育锻炼。我肥胖，易生病。(一般表达)I often stayed up late and took little physical exercise. I became too fat and often fell ill.(高级表达)I often stayed up late and took little physical
7、 exercise so_that_I_became_too_fat_and_often_fell_ill. (so that 引导结果状语从句)2我意识到了不健康的生活习惯引起的危害。(一般表达)I became aware of the harm. It was caused by unhealthy living habits. (高级表达)I became aware of the harm which_was_caused_by_unhealthy_living_habits. (which引导定语从句)3为了保持健康，我决心改掉这些坏习惯。(一般表达)I determined to
8、 get rid of these bad habits so that I could keep fit.(高级表达)To_keep_fit,_I_determined_to_get_rid_of_these_bad_habits. (不定式作目的状语)4我建议其他学生尽快改掉他们不健康的生活习惯。健康比任何其他事情都重要。(一般表达)I suggest other students get out of their unhealthy living habits as soon as possible. Health is more valuable than anything else.
9、(高级表达)I suggest other students get out of their unhealthy living habits as soon as possible because_health_is_more_valuable_than_anything_else. (because合并升级为原因状语从句)连句成篇_参考范文：Dear Tom，In the past, I formed some unhealthy living habits. For example, I often skipped breakfast and liked eating junk food
10、；besides, I often stayed up late and took little physical exercise so that I became too fat and often fell ill.Luckily, I became aware of the harm which was caused by unhealthy living habits. To keep fit, I determined to get rid of these bad habits. Firstly, I began to have a balanced diet. Secondly
11、, I took exercise actively every day. Lastly, I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early. With two months passing, I recovered.I suggest other students get out of their unhealthy living habits as soon as possible, because health is more valuable than anything else.- 4 - 版权所有高考资源网
