1、介绍类文章本单元的写作任务是描述一下好的朋友应具备的品质。写此类文章时，我们可以分三个部分来写作。写作要求是说明真正的朋友应具备的品质，写作时应注意下面几点：1文章应以一般现在时为主。2由于是就对方的问题表达自己的看法，所以人称应该以第二人称和第三人称为主。基本框架1开头先总体介绍一个好的朋友应该是怎样的；2主体然后再分别介绍一个好的朋友必须具备的几种品质；3结尾最后进行总结。常用词块1a boy with great ability 一个能干的男孩2a promising writer 一位有前途的作家3spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力地去做某事4have a w
2、ide range of interests 兴趣广泛5get on well with 与相处融洽6a considerate person 体贴别人的人7be willing to help others乐于助人8be expert in/at 善于9be in good health/shape/condition身体健康10gain scholarship 获得奖学金11gain/win the first prize/place 获得一等奖/第一名12be awarded with the title of 获得的称号/头衔13make great contributions to
3、对作出巨大贡献14set a good example to sb.为某人树立好榜样15to ones credit 值得赞扬的是16care about sb.关心某人17show respect for sb.尊重某人18be rude/kind to sb.对某人无礼/和蔼可亲常用语句精彩开头1As the old saying goes，“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”常言道：“患难见真情。”2As far as Im concerned，to build a good relationship，we should trust each ot
4、her first.就我个人而言，要建立良好的关系，我们首先应该彼此信任。3In my opinion，a good friend should be.在我看来，一个好朋友应该是4From my point of view，a good friend is likely to.从我的观点来看，一个好朋友很可能正文佳句1She is Li Hua，an 18yearold girl student in Class One，Grade Three.She is openminded，easygoing and enthusiastic.她叫李华，18岁，是三年级一班的一位女学生。她心胸开阔，性格
5、随和，热情好客。2Last but not least，he is warmhearted and willing to help others in need.最后但同等重要的是，他是热心的，愿意帮助有需要的人。3His great personality has gained their respect.他伟大的品质赢得了他们的尊重。4She makes a promise that she will behave herself and set a good example to schoolmates.她承诺，她会表现好的，并为同学们树立好榜样。5My mother，a housewi
6、fe of 45 years old，is my favorite person.She is always dressed very neatly with a smile of contentment on her face.我最喜爱的人是我的妈妈，一个45岁的家庭主妇。她总是穿着整齐，脸上带着满足的微笑。6As for my personality，I think Im very honest and have a strong sense of responsibility.性格方面，我觉得自己是一个坦诚和富有责任心的人。7She is tall and slim with big b
7、right eyes and black hair.她个子高挑，身材苗条，有一双大而明亮的眼睛和一头黑发。8Being honest is the first factor that a good friend.诚实是一个好朋友的首要因素9Secondly，being generous is.第二，慷慨是10Lastly，being helpful is as important as.最后，帮助别人和一样重要。余味结尾1Generally speaking，a good friend should have.通常来说，好朋友应该具有。2In a word，a good friend shou
8、ld.总之，好朋友应该。假如你是李华，你的同学Lucy发现被好朋友欺骗了，很是苦恼，不知道还该不该继续她们的友谊。于是她向你询问“什么是真正的朋友？”请你根据下面的提示给她写一封电子邮件。1真正朋友的特点是：2学着去了解别人，找到真正的好朋友；3表达祝愿。注意：1词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear John，Im sorry to hear that your best friend has tricked you. Yours，Li Hua【学生习作】Dear Lucy，Im sorry to hear that your best f
9、riend has tricked you.Id like to offer you some advice.Before you make a decision，youd better think the whole thing through.Your friend really tricked you on purpose.Its time for you to let go of your friendship.First of all，a good friend is a person you can trust.Secondly，when you will get into tro
10、uble，your friend will try to help you out.That is，a good friend should be helpful.Thirdly，a good friend should be understanding.Whenever you feel sad or lone，he/she is willing to spare some time to keep you company.I hope that you will find a truly good friend and he/she will also value you very muc
11、h.Yours，Li Hua点评：1.左栏的文章中运用了含状语从句、宾语从句、定语从句等的复合句。2.offer，think through，trick，on purpose，letgo of，get into trouble，help.out，helpful，understanding，be willing to do，spare some time to do sth，keep pany，truly，value等的应用也恰到好处。3.文中含有时态错误(如when you will get into trouble)和词语误用(lone应为lonely)。4.分段不合理，如将第二、三段合并为
12、一段，全文采用三段式就好了。【升格作文】Dear Lucy，Im sorry to hear that your best friend has tricked you.Id like to offer you some advice.Before making a decision，youd better think the whole thing through.If your friend really tricked you on purpose，its time for you to let go of your friendship.Firstly，a good friend is
13、 a person you can trust.Secondly，when you get into trouble，your friend will try to help you out.Thirdly，a good friend should be understanding.Whenever you feel sad or lonely，he/she is willing to spare some time to keep you company.I hope that you will find a truly good friend who will also value you
14、 very much.Yours，Li Hua假定你是李华，希望通过外籍老师John找一位英语笔友。请写一封信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：1年龄；2性别；3爱好(旅游、运动、养宠物等)。注意：1.词数80左右；2开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；3可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear John，Im writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favour. Yours sincerely，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear John，Im writing to ask whether you ar
15、e able to do me a favour.I want to have a penfriend，hopefully a girl in her early twenties.She should be interested in travelling，swimming，and playing table tennis.Besides，it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home.With such a penfriend，I hope we can share with her our experiences in travelling，taking care of pets and so on.I hope I will improve my English by doing so.Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely，Li Hua
