1、第三节读写任务在各种体裁中的运用读写任务是有材料作文,要求考生在阅读的基础上写一篇相关主题的作文,主要考查考生的篇章概括和语言表达能力。记叙文(2013揭阳一模) 阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Once upon a time in a land far away, there was a wonderful old man who loved everything. Animals, spiders, insects. One day while walking through the woods the nice old man found a cocoon(茧)
2、 of a butterfly. He took it home. A few days later, a small opening appeared; he sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body through that little hole. Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could and it could go
3、no farther. Then the man decided to help the butterfly, so he took a pair of scissors and cut off the remaining bit of the cocoon. The butterfly then came out easily. But it had a swollen body and small, shriveled(萎缩的) wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, at any
4、moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body. Neither happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life crawling around with a swollen body and shriveled wings. It never was able to fly. What the man in his kindness and haste did not understand was that the res
5、tricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly to get through the tiny opening were Natures way of forcing fluid from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon. Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need
6、in our life. If we were allowed to go through our life without any obstacles, it would cripple us. We would not be as strong as what we could have been. And we could never fly.写作内容 1. 以约30个词概括短文内容要点。2. 以约120个词就“个人成长需要艰难生活的磨砺”这一话题发表你的看法,并包含以下要点:(1) 你读了这个故事后的感受;(2) 叙述当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果;(3) 假如你是父母一方,你
7、会如何磨砺自己的孩子?写作要求 1. 可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准 概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。_【写作思路】根据写作内容的三个提纲:(1) 你读了这个故事后的感受;(2) 叙述当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果;(3) 假如你是父母一方,你会如何磨砺自己的孩子?写作时,应注意以下几个方面:1. 概括应包含以下要点:(1) A kind old man saw a butterfly struggling out of the cocoon.(2) The old
8、man cut the cocoon open in order to lessen its pain.(3) The old man found that the butterfly could never fly because of his help.2. 写作的内容应该包括:(1) 正确表达 “感受”, 如 “发人深省”。(2) 能描述当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果,如“过度依赖父母, 缺乏独立能力”。(3) 就“假如你是父母一方,你会如何磨砺自己的孩子?”发表自己的看法。【参考范文】A kind man cut a cocoon open in order to lessen
9、 the pain of a butterfly when he saw it struggling out of the cocoon, only to find that it could never fly because of his help.The story sets me thinking. Our life is more or less like this. Sometimes, struggles or obstacles in our life are a must for our growth. It is these struggles or obstacles t
10、hat increase our willpower and contribute to our success. Without these trials, we could never achieve our life goal just as the butterfly did in the story.Nowadays, with only one child in most families, parents do whatever they can to satisfy the childs needs and even do for him what should be done
11、 by himself. Consequently, the child is unable to look after himself without his parents presence. Too much care from parents deprives children of chances to grow strong by conquering obstacles. Just as a saying goes, “Flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm.”If I were a parent, I would first keep him well informed that life is never easy and that he should be ready to face any difficulties. Besides, I would expose him to the hardships in life instead of protecting him from difficulties, providing them with chances to fight for his bright future by conquering challenges.