1、Unit 22 Environmental ProtectionSection Writing报告写 作 技 法 指 导 文体指导报告是就一个问题展开调查后做出的分析与总结。报告是一种应用文体。调查者在对特定对象深入考察了解的基础上,经过归纳整理,分析研究,进而揭示事物的本质,得出符合实际的结论,用文字形式表现出来。写作时要注意知识的科学性,行文的条理性和语言的准确性。报告一般分为四部分:1标题(Heading):标题一般分为话题(Subject)与报告日期(Date)2报告的目的(Aim of the Report)3陈述(Comments):陈述有负面陈述(Negative Comment
2、s)和积极陈述(Positive Comments)4结论和建议(Conclusion and Suggestions)亮点句式1列举事项There are also problems caused by.Furthermore,there are the problems caused by.In addition,there are the problems caused by.Moreover,there are the problems caused by.2对比事项However,things have improved recently.On the other hand,thin
3、gs have improved recently.Although these figures are depressing,things have improved recently.Despite these depressing figures,things have improved recently.3列举例子For example,the Chinese government has recently decided to.In this way,they hope to.They have introduced things such as.This is bad,partic
4、ularly/especially in the area of.4表明影响As a result of this,people now expect.What this means is that people now expect.5结论To sum up,the situation is.All things considered,there seems to be.满 分 佳 作 构 建 写作任务随着哥本哈根世界气候大会的召开,越来越多的人开始关注气候变化。请写一篇 100 词左右的报告,简要描述二氧化碳(carbon dioxide)过量排放的危害(严重的风暴、干旱、全球变暖等),并
5、提出具体建议,号召人们选择低碳生活(low-carbon life)方式。审题谋篇体裁报告时态 一般现在时为主话题气候变化人称第三人称为主结构第一段:二氧化碳过量排放的危害;第二段:具体建议。遣词造句.对接单元词汇1_ 导致2_ 集中(精力/注意力)于上3_条件4_起作用/发生影响5_环保的6_灾难result in/lead tofocus/concentrate oncircumstance/conditionmake a differenceenvironmentalfriendlycatastrophe.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子The rise of temperature w
6、ill _,more severe storms,floods,droughts,and even the extinction of species.气温的上升会导致海平面更高、更多暴风雨、洪水、干旱甚至物种灭绝。result in a higher sea level(二)句式升级1The levels of carbon dioxide in the air increase rapidly.The global temperature continues going up.(用 with 复合结构改写句子)_With the levels of carbon dioxide in th
7、e air increasing rapidly,the global temperature continues going up.2The UN conference in Copenhagen focused on future actions on climate changes.It has attracted more and more peoples attention.(用定语从句改写句子)_The UN conference in Copenhagen focused on future actions on climate changes,which has attract
8、ed more and more peoples attention.妙笔成篇_【参考范文】With the levels of carbon dioxide in the air increasing rapidly,the global temperature continues going up.It would be a catastrophe.The rise of temperature will result in a higher sea level,more severe storms,floods,droughts,and even the extinction of sp
9、ecies.The UN conference in Copenhagen focused on future actions on climate changes,which has attracted more and more peoples attention.We must take action immediately.Turn off the lights,the TV,the computers and so on if we are not using them.Recycle cans,bottles,plastic bags and newspapers if circumstances allow us to.Walk or ride bikes if we can.Lets lead a low-carbon life.英 美 文 化 欣 赏 点击右图进入 单 元 整 合 训 练 点击右图进入 Thank you for watching!