1、返回目录 Traffic Jam Module 2 返回目录 Section Writing问题与现象类作文(见课堂学案P28)返回目录 写作技法指导佳作构建示例目录Contents 返回目录 写作技法指导一、基本结构问题与现象类作文属于议论文，常见的考查形式有：根据图片描述问题或现象；根据所给材料进行描述；写一封信陈述某种问题或现象。写作时应注意以下几点：1首先提出问题或现象。如果想要更加引起读者的兴趣，还可以多费一些笔墨写出这个问题或现象给我们带来的不良影响，激起读者想方设法解决这个问题的决心。返回目录 2分析产生这种问题或现象的原因。可用 First Then Finally进行分层次介
2、绍。要注意，如果原因很明显或简单的话，也可省略这一步骤。3提出解决方法。在这一层次中，又可分为两个子层次：第一个子层次是介绍别人已采用或提出的方法并分析其效果；第二个子层次提出自己的解决方法，并用有力的证据支持。返回目录 4预测在今后的发展中情况可能会怎样。5由于所写的一般是现在存在的社会现象，所以时态以一般现在时为主。6在写作过程中，要注意表达简练、清晰、生动。返回目录 二、增分佳句1提出某一社会现象或问题：As we all knowhas become more and more serious.Nowadays,there exists an increasingly serious
3、social/economic/environmental problem(has increasingly become a common concern of the public.)返回目录 According to a surveyhas been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life.According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the chart,it can be seen that2表述该现象产生的原因：There are a coup
4、le of reasons for this problem/phenomenon.FirstSecondBesides/Whats more返回目录 3陈述自己的看法及建议：Its time we did something toSome measures are supposed to be taken to preventfrom bringing us more harm.返回目录 佳作构建示例【题目要求】最近，你班同学围绕“How to solve the problem of heavy traffic”这一话题进行了激烈的讨论，请将讨论结果写成一篇英语短文。要点如下：交通拥堵的原
5、因：人多、车多、人们遵守交通规则的意识淡薄。建议：1.建设更多宽阔的道路，开辟更多的公交线路；返回目录 2减少使用私家车，多乘坐公共交通工具，提倡步行或骑自行车；3遵守交通规则，不乱穿马路。注意：1.词数 100 左右(首段已给出，不计入总词数)；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。返回目录【审题谋篇】第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为_；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第_人称；3确定时态：主要以_为主。议论文三一般现在时返回目录 二、构思第一部分：简要提出目前多数城市出现交通拥挤这一现象，并展开讨论。第二部分：分析出现交通拥堵的原因。第三部分：针对这一现象提出合理化建议。返回目录
6、第二步：核心词汇想周全1_ 就展开讨论2_交通阻塞3_首先4_导致5_最后同样重要的是6_遵守交通规则7_ 处理，对付have a debate abouttraffic jamto start withlead torespect/obey traffic rulesdeal withthe last but not least返回目录 8_ 建议9_行人；步行者insist on pedestrian返回目录 第三步：由词扩句雏形现1首先，人多导致了交通拥堵。(简单句)2最后一个原因是一些人没有意识到遵守交通规则的重要性。(that 引导表语从句)To start with,a vast
7、population leads to heavy traffic.The last but not least reason is that some people dont realizethe importance of respecting traffic rules.返回目录 3为了解决这个问题，一些学生建议建设更多宽阔的道路。(不定式作目的状语；suggest)4有人认为我们应该多步行或多骑自行车。(宾语从句)To deal with this problem,some students suggest that we(should)build more wide roads.So
8、meone else thinks we should walk and ride the bike more.返回目录 5减少私家车的使用。(private cars)6行人应该遵守交通规则。(obey)Pedestrians should obey traffic rules.7行人在红灯时不要乱穿马路。(at a red light)We should drive private cars less.Pedestrians should obey traffic rules.Pedestrians shouldnt cross the road at a red light.返回目录 第
9、四步：句式升级造亮点1用 instead of 合并句 4 和句 52用 and 并列句合并句 6 和句 7Someone else thinks we should walk or ride the bike moreinstead of driving private cars.Pedestrians should obey traffic rules and not cross the roadat a red light.返回目录 第五步：过渡衔接联成篇How to solve the problem of heavy trafficAlmost every city has a bi
10、g traffic problem.Today,our class have a debate about how to solve it.There are many reasons for traffic jams.To start with,a vast population leads to heavy traffic.The second reason is the increasing number of vehicles,especially private cars.The last but not least reason is that some people dont r
11、ealize the importance of respecting traffic rules.返回目录 To deal with this problem,some students suggest that we(should)build more wide roads.Others insist on offering many more bus routes to improve transport.Someone else thinks we should walk or ride the bike more instead of driving private cars.And pedestrians should obey traffic rules and not cross the road at a red light.