1、返回目录 Life in the Future Module 1 返回目录 Section Writing 想象类作文想象类作文(见课堂学案P14)返回目录 写作技法指导佳作构建示例目录Contents 返回目录 写作技法指导一、写作要领想象类作文是作者根据已有的生活经验和知识，超越实际生活来勾画从未见过的或者不曾出现过的生活图景的文章。写作时应注意以下几点：1采用记叙文或说明文的形式，围绕主题来逐一列举所给要点；2可采用第一人称或第三人称来叙述；3时态以一般将来时为主。返回目录 二、增分佳句1文章开头常用句式：Sometimes I dream about life in the futur
2、e.I imagine life in the future from time to time.I am curious about future life.It is fascinating to image life in the future.返回目录 2表达预测的常用句式：Maybe in the future we canThere is a possibility that human beings willPerhaps some people willWe will be livingin the future.返回目录 3文章结尾常用句式：I believe the dre
3、am will come true some day.In my opinion,the dream will be turned into reality one day.As far as Im concerned,we will realize the dream sooner or later.返回目录 佳作构建示例【题目要求】随着科技的发展，人们的生活发生了巨大的变化，人们对自己的未来充满了期待。请展开想象，以“An Outlook on Future”为题，描述一下将来人们工作、学习、生活三个方面的情景。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。返回目录【审题谋
4、篇】第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为描写未来的_；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第_人称；3确定时态：主要以_为主。说明文三一般将来时返回目录 二、构思1第一部分：说明未来生活在各方面都会有很大提高。2第二部分：逐一列出在智能机器人、高科技、环境、教育、旅游等方面具体的变化。3第三部分：总结未来生活难以预测，但对其充满了期待。返回目录 第二步：核心词汇想周全1_ 随着的发展2_科技3_结果；因此4_有可能5_成就6_在的帮助下7_居住环境with the development ofscience and technologyas a resultbe likely toach
5、ievementwith the help ofliving environment返回目录 8_科学地9_摆脱，去除10_渴望，渴求11_总体上，总的来说12_ 过着的生活13_确保，确定14_在太空中scientificallyget rid ofbe thirsty foron the wholelead alifefor surein space返回目录 第三步：由词扩句雏形现1随着科技的发展，人们的生活发生了巨大的变化。(简单句)2在电脑、机器人和其他高科技产品的帮助下，人们做的工作将会更少。(将来进行时)With the development of science and tec
6、hnology,ourPeople will be working less with the help of computers,robots and other hitech products.life has changed a lot.返回目录 3人们的居住环境会更干净，因为人们开始科学地处理垃圾。(get rid of)4人们重视保护环境。(stress the importance of)The living environment will be cleaner,because peoplebegin to get rid of wastes more scientificall
7、y.Peoplestresstheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.返回目录 5每个渴求知识的人都可以接受高等教育，无论他们年轻还是年老。(whetheror)Everyone who is thirsty for knowledge can receive highereducation,whether they are young or old.返回目录 6总的来说，人们将过着幸福自由的生活，他们不仅可以在全世界旅游而且可以在宇宙中旅游。(and 并列句；not onlybut also)On the whole,people will lead a
8、 happy and free life andthey can travel not only all over the world but also in space.返回目录 7未来是难以预测的。(主语be形容词to do)8但是我们确切地知道先进的科技一定会给我们创造美好的未来。(advanced)The future is hard to predict.But we know for sure advanced science and technology willshape our bright future.返回目录 第四步：句式升级造亮点1用分词作定语合并句 3 和句 42用
9、让步状语从句合并句 7 和句 8The living environment will be cleaner,because people,stressing the importance of protecting the environment,begin toget rid of wastes more scientifically.Though the future is hard to predict,we know for sureadvanced science and technology will shape our bright future.返回目录 第五步：过渡衔接联成
10、篇An Outlook on FutureWith the development of science and technology,our life has changed a lot.As a result,I think there are likely to be great achievements in every area.People will be working less with the help of computers,robots and other hi-tech products.The living environment will be cleaner,b
11、ecause people,stressing the importance of protecting the environment,begin to get rid of wastes more scientifically.Everyone who is thirsty for knowledge can receive higher education,whether 返回目录 they are young or old.On the whole,people will lead a happy and free life and they can travel not only all over the world but also in space.Though the future is hard to predict,we know for sure advanced science and technology will shape our bright future if we use it properly.