1、建议信本单元的写作任务是写建议信。建议信是常用的书信形式之一,主要用来针对收信人存在的某一问题提出自己的合理化建议,从而达到帮助对方解决问题的目的。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。基本框架1开头开门见山,向对方陈述自己的观点(state your idea);2主体对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由,接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence);3结尾呼应开头,重申观点(restate your opinion)。注意事项:1开门见山,直入主题。在书信正文的开头找准话题的切入点,自然而然地引出自己想要谈的主题。写信时要充分了解情况,有的放矢,以提高书信的针对
2、性。2给出希望对方采取或者终止某种行为的理由。在陈述理由的过程中要换位思考,尽量为对方考虑。要用事实说话,以增强说服力。3语气要和缓,让对方考虑你的想法或者建议,以理服人是关键,不能把自己的想法强加于人。4给出合理建议,通过提建议让对方明确行动的方向,从而达到写信的最终目的。常用词块1I think it would be a good idea if.如果我认为这是个好主意2In my opinion it would be wise to.依我看,做是明智的3I suggest that you should.我建议你应该4In my opinion,youd better.我认为你最好5
3、I advise you to.我建议你6If I were you,I would.如果我是你的话,我会7Why not.?/Why dont you.? 为什么不?8How about.?/What about.? 怎么样?常用语句 精彩开头1I know you are now having trouble communicating with others,and you may often feel lonely.我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦,你也可能经常感到孤独。2Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on.很
4、高兴收到你就征求建议的来信。3Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.这里有帮助你的一些建议。 正文佳句1First(ly),why not join a club? If you do this,you can make friends.首先,为什么不参加一个俱乐部呢?如果你这样做的话,就会交到朋友。2Second(ly),you should/can try to talk with others.Then/That way,you will feel better.其次,你应该尽可能与人交谈。这样,你会感觉好点。3Third(ly
5、),it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this,you will calm yourself down.第三,如果你看书或听音乐,这会是个不错的主意。通过这样做,你会使自己平静下来。4Last but not least,you should talk with her first.最后但同等重要的是,你应该先和她谈一谈。5As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,you should help each other.就我而言/在我看来,你们应该互相帮
6、助。 余味结尾1I hope you will find these ideas useful.我希望你会发现这些办法有用。2As time goes on,people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above advice.如果你遵从以上建议,随着时间的推移,人们会更加了解你,会愿意和你交朋友的。3I believe that if you follow my advice,youll get along well with your classmates.
7、我相信,如果你听从我的建议,你会和同学们相处很好的。假如你是李华,你的好朋友苏珊最近和妈妈发生了争吵,好几天不说话了。为此她非常烦恼,想让你给出一些主意。请你根据下面的提示写一封建议信。1认真考虑自己的行为;2尽量理解妈妈,明白她所做的都是为自己好;3找个机会主动和妈妈聊天,了解妈妈的真实想法;4适当赞美妈妈并道歉。注意:1.词数:80左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Susan,Im sorry to hear that you have argued with your mother and youre feeling sad now. You
8、rs,Li Hua【学生习作】Dear Susan,Im sorry to hear that you have argued with your mother and youre feeling sad now.I understand your feelings.Here is some advice helpful to you.Firstly,if you think it over,youll find that youre likely to have done something wrong.For example,you shouldnt have argued with yo
9、ur mother.Secondly,you should learn to understand your mother.After all,shes willing to do anything that will make you happy.Thirdly,find a chance to have a talk with your mother and it will help you understand each other better.Lastly,try to do something for your mother and it will make her happy.I
10、 wish you all the best.Yours,Li Hua点评:1.文章结构安排合理;2.个别句式还有升格的空间;3.过渡衔接比较单调;4.句式结构还可以更丰富。【升格作文】Dear Susan,Im sorry to hear that you have argued with your mother and youre feeling sad now.I understand your feelings.Here is some advice which I think will help you.First of all,think it over,and youll fin
11、d youre likely to have done something wrong.For example,you shouldnt have argued with your mother.Secondly,you should learn to understand your mother.After all,shes willing to do anything that will make you happy.Thirdly,find a chance to have a talk with your mother,which will help you understand ea
12、ch other better.Last but not least,try to do something for your mother,which will make her happy.I wish you all the best.Yours,Li Hua假如你是高中一年级新生李华。开学之初,你的英语老师Ms.Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。1你对英语学习的认识;2目前的英语水平;3英语学习存在的主要问题;4对英语教学的两点建议。注意:1词数80左右;2信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Ms.Li,Im very hap
13、py to have you as our English teacher. Thank you!Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Ms.Li,Im very happy to have you as our English teacher.As the world is becoming a global village,English is getting more and more important,so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.My English is just
14、OK and the two main problems in my study are that I find it difficult to learn words by heart,and that I often feel nervous when speaking English.I really hope that you can give me some advice on how to memorize new words.Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.Thank you!Yours,Li Hua