1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家2016高考英语短二轮：书面表达训练（3）及答案书面表达练习假如你是李华。你有一位美国笔友Tom，他想了解石家庄近几年的变化。请根据下面表格中的内容，用英语给他写一封信，介绍石家庄的情况。过去现在路少且窄，堵车；公园少；空气污染严重。路多而宽，畅通；新建许多公园；空气质量提高。注意：1短文应包括所有内容要点，但不可逐字翻译；2可适当增加细节，使短文连贯；3词数100左右；4开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。Dear Tom，I am happy to share my opinion about my hometown, Shijiazhuang._ _Your
2、s，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Tom，I am happy to share my opinion about my hometown, Shijiazhuang.Great changes have taken place here in recent years.In the past, Shijiazhuang was not as beautiful as it is. The traffic was very heavy and roads were narrow. There used to be few parks.The air was polluted serious
3、ly. But now, everything has changed! Shijiazhuang takes on a new look. The old streets have been broadened and more roads have been constructed. Many new parks have been built, where people can take exercise, sing songs and play games. The air is fresher than before. We can enjoy the blue sky and wh
4、ite clouds all the year round.Shijiazhuang has become a modern city, whose tomorrow will be better!Yours，Li Hua书面表达练习【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学三模试题】读写任务 (共25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。As we all know, life is full of dreams and having a good dream is of great importance in our daily life. Without a good
5、 dream, people cant make progress; without a good dream, countries cant develop; without a good dream, the world cant become so beautiful! And I hold the strong belief that everyone, whether he is old or young, poor or rich, junior or senior, does have a good dream! After all, dreaming is certainly
6、a positive part of our life, and wishing for good things, however, costs nothing!Whats more, it is important to fly our dreams, especially for those who are Senior 3 students. It is high time for them to fly their dreams. If they cant let their dreams fly, the dream would just die!Therefore, it is n
7、o wonder that so many people have a dream since their childhood. With a nice dream, China succeeded to host the 29th Olympic Games in 2008; with a nice dream, Hong Kong returned to the motherland peacefully in 1997; with a nice dream, Yuan Longping rids the world of hunger; with a nice dream, Michae
8、l Jordon becomes the most popular basketball star; with a nice dream I can stand on this stage to compete in the final English speech contest. And with an aim of achieving success, I must do the best!So my good friends, if you want to realize your dream, please do not be afraid in face of difficulti
9、es or give up in face of failure nor lose your dream in face of pains. You must keep going forward bravely! Just fly your dream highly above the sky!【写作内容】 1. 阅读短文后用30词左右概括短文的要点。2. 就“放飞梦想”为主题，以120词左右发表自己的看法，并包括以下内容要点：（1）列举自己或身边现实生活中中学生梦想成真的一件事例；（2）结合自己的实际，谈谈你现在的梦想，并说明打算如何实现。【写作要求】 1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历
10、或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】One possible version:Dreams play an important role in our daily life and a good dream is the motivation to success. To realize a dream, one should learn to defeat difficulties through constant struggles as well a
11、s persistence.It is a dream that enables one to do better in life. Like most classmates, there was a time when I dreamed of being an excellent student in English after entering junior middle school, though my English was very poor then. To catch up with my classmates, I made up my mind to learn Engl
12、ish well and made pen-friends with some foreign students so as to practise my spoken English and improve my written English. Although some of my classmates often went to the movies in the evening, seldom did I take part in such activities. Instead, I set aside to concentrate on my English and won th
13、e Final English Speech Contest around the city this term, realizing my dream.At present, I also have another dream. As a Senior 3 student, I hope that I can be admitted to a key university after graduation from middle school. Of course, whether my dream will come true depends largely on my personal
14、efforts. Although life is full of ups and downs, I choose to go forward bravely. I strongly believe that where there is a dream, there is hope and there is a way.书面表达练习高中英语书面表达中的高级结构英语书面表达在高考中日益显得重要，高考书面表达已不只局限于把话说清楚，把意思表达完整，而是要给我们的句子润色，让我们的句子靓起来。如何让我们的英语句子靓起来呢？很多人都强调用连词、介词等词汇手段迅速提高语言水平。但这种方法需要一定的积累
15、，也 需要一定的基础。而我觉得通过对低级句型的改造，可以迅速达到这一目的。强调句：可以将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句。It was not until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag on the shop counter. It was then that I realized the importance of English. 倒装句：只要句中有介词短语或状语从句，便可将其提前，变成倒装句。Only when I turned right at the crossing did that car c
16、rack towards me. Only by this means can he escape from the big fire. with引导的伴随结构：可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with结构。With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spirits He always likes to sleep with the windows open. 巧妙地使用非谓语动词：可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词。Hearing that, t
17、he drivers wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking. (=When he heard that, ) 恰到好处的被动句：适合应用于较简短的句子，这样显得语言简洁生动，宾语一般是 nothing、anything、everything等不定代词。I searched all my pockets, but nothing was found.感叹句：通常用于开头结尾活跃文章气氛，凡是“I feel ”之类表达感情的句子皆可 如此改造。How terrible I felt toda
18、y! I failed again in the math exam. 高级定语从句：若定语从句中的动词带有介词，只需将介词移至先行词后。We came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before. 进行时态：有时会含有一定情绪，尤其要使用always这样的富含感情色彩的副词。I am always feeling terrible when I take a bus. 婉转表达：需要使用幽默的技巧，主要用于漫画型作文题。I could find nothing but bad luck when I returned to t
19、he shop after learning that my handbag had been left on the counter. what引导的名词性从句：将动宾结构转化为此结构。What he gave me, which I knew, were not only a Christmas present but also a heart full of love and a mind of my existence in it. “数词+名词”变为“as many as+数词+名词”。As many as ten years ago, my hometown used to be
20、covered by forests 适当加一些插入语：一些连词、副词可以放到句子中间充当语气较弱的插入语，如I guess、however、in a way、certainly、in my opinion、probably、briefly, generally speaking, believe it or not, besides, whats more等，有时可以考虑几个插入语连用，就更像英美人士 的文章了。独立主格：将主从句去掉连词，前句动词变为分词即可。 Weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the We
21、stern Hills. 把简单句改成复合句：适当的时候把两个简单句改成“tooto”或者“sothat”等高级一点的复合句。例如：I was very tired. I couldnt keep up with them.我们可以改成：I was so tired that I couldnt keep up with them.或：I was too tired to keep up with them. 这样一来，英语基础不是很好的学生只要能够写出最基本的句子，然后再对这些句子进行加工、改造、润色，慢慢的，就会让句子靓起来，在高考中就可以得到比较满意的成绩。书面表达练习【2014高考英语
22、吉林省实验中学一模试题】书面表达（满分 25分）作文：最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论.讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况.60%的同学认为40%的同学认为1.不应收门票1.应收门票，但票价不宜高2.公园是公众休闲的地方2.支付园林工人工资3.如收票,需建大门,围墙,会影响城市形象3.购新花木注意: 1. 信的开头已为你写好. 2. 词数: 100 左右. 3. 参考词汇: 门票- entrance fees【参考范文】Dear editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussi
23、on weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions are divided on the question. 60 of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance f
24、ees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.On the other hand, 40 think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young tree
25、s. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. Yours truly Li Hua书面表达练习为了解高三学生高中阶段最后一个寒假的打算或安排，某英文报社拟开展一次关于高三学生今年寒假最想做的三件事的调查活动。请以光明中学学生王浩的名义给该报社写一封电子邮件，告知你的真实想法。注意：1邮件中不得透露本人及所在学校的真实信息；2词数120左右；3电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir or Madam，_Best wishes.Yours faithfully，Wang Hao【参考范文】Dear Sir or Ma
26、dam，It will be a great relief to take a long holiday. You cannot imagine how stressful the school life is to us Senior 3 students. So I have a big plan for this coming winter holiday.Taking a good sleep, without doubt, will be my first choice. The second thing I would like to do is to have a gettoge
27、ther with my friends who I have not been in touch for quite a long time. Of course, the biggest thing on my agenda is to plan a romantic festival. This Spring Festival is a combination of the traditional Chinese New Year and Valentines Day. I will make my parents a card in the shape of a heart and arrange a sweet night for the three of us.Best wishes，Yours faithfully，Wang Hao- 8 - 版权所有高考资源网