1、【写作任务】你接受了一项写作任务，要为校英语报写一篇有关节日庆祝的英语文章。请根据以下信息，介绍你去年庆祝中秋节的经历。【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部信息。*赛马Horse Race；*高潮 climax一、写作分析1.写作思路：这是一篇记叙文，要求描述自己去年过中秋节的经历。记叙文通常以记叙和描写为主，是以记人叙事为主要内容的一种文体。写记叙文时，应注意交待清楚时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)，然后再进一步叙述事件(what)、起因(why)和经过(how)。记叙文应以记叙为主，可适当发表见解、议论和抒情，但不可过多。【写作分析与指导】写作前，我们可根据所提供的信息首
2、先列出所需要的单词和短语；然后把这些词语扩充成句子；最后根据所给信息，使用适当的过渡词语把这些句子连成一篇短文。2.时态与人称分析：记叙文叙述的事情通常发生在过去，因而其时态通常为一般过去时；要求以第一人称或第三人称来写作，第一人称主要用来描述自己的经历，第三人称主要用来描述他人的经历或事迹。【写作分析与指导】二、词句储备1.写作中可能使用的词语有：(1)教官 _ (2)特殊的 _ (3)中秋节 _ (4)基地 _ (5)做演讲 _ (6)宣布 _ (7)庆祝(n.)_ (8)与有关 _ (9)表演 _ (10)赞美；欣赏 _ specialinstructorthe Mid-autumn F
3、estivalbaseannouncecelebrationbe concerned withperformgive a speechadmire二、词句储备1.写作中可能使用的词语有：(11)分享 _ (12)期望；期待 _ (13)玩得开心 _ (14)给留下深刻印象 _ (15)活动 _ (16)像家一样的 _ have fun withsharelook forward toimpressactivityhomey2.写作中可能使用的句子有：(1)去年我们学校高一的学生、老师和教官们在三清山军训基地度过一次特殊的中秋节。First of all,Principal Wang gave
4、us a short speech,announcing the beginning of the celebration.(2)首先，王校长简短致辞，宣布活动开始。Last year we Senior One students and our teachers and military training instructors spent a special Mid-autumn Festival in the military training base of SanQing Mountain.(4)我们坐在一起品尝水果和月饼，赏明月，分享你我故事，憧憬美好未来。(3)我们演唱了与中秋节
5、有关的歌曲，特别是音乐老师们的二胡表演赛马，将活动推向了高潮。We sang some songs that are concerned with the festival and our music teachers gave the Erhu performance Horse Race to us,which pushed the activity to an exciting climax.We sat together and ate moon cakes and fruit,admiring the full moon,sharing our stories and looking
6、 forward to our bright future.(5)虽然远离家人，但我们玩得很开心，活动不仅给我们留下了深刻的印象，而且从中也让我们感觉到了家一般的温暖。Although away from our parents,we had great fun with each other and were deeply impressed by the activity,from which we also found the homey feeling.三、下笔成文Last year we Senior One students and our teachers and militar
7、y training instructors spent a special Mid-autumn Festival in the military training base of SanQing Mountain.First of all,Principal Wang gave us a short speech,announcing the beginning of the celebration.Then we sang some songs that are concerned with the festival and our music teachers gave the Erh
8、u performance Horse Race to us,which pushed the activity to an exciting climax.After that,we sat together and ate moon cakes and fruit,admiring the full moon,sharing our stories and looking forward to our bright future.Although away from our parents,we had great fun with each other and were deeply impressed by the activity,from which we found the homey feeling.【点评】本文要点齐全，重点突出，详略得当，篇章结构清晰，语言自然流畅，信息整合巧妙得当。并列句和复合句的交替使用更使文章富有节奏感。本文还使用了诸如-ing形式作状语的表达以及定语从句等复杂句式，大大提升了文章档次，突显了作者深厚的语言功底。