1、Unit 5MusicSection Grammar&Writing第二板块单元写作 咨询信美文写作指导文体感知咨询信是指写信人就某一个问题向收信人征求或征询建议，希望收信人就写信人提出的问题给出针对性的解决方法或提出合理的建议。其基本结构分为三部分：开头简单叙述写咨询信的目的或意图，清楚表明要寻求什么样的帮助；主体言明要咨询的具体问题和存在的困难，并请求对方给出一些建议；结尾诚恳地提出希望，表达需要得到帮助的迫切心情并表示感谢。增分佳句1Im writing to tell you some advice on how to form a music band.2Nowadays，both
2、traditional and modern music are enjoyed by people in China.3For a long time,traditional music has played an important part in peoples life.4I was at a loss what to do with this situation.5I find it really hard to learn English well and I almost lost heart.6I would appreciate it if you could give me
3、 some precious advice.7Im sorry to trouble you，but I feel that I must write you this letter.8Would you like to give me some advice on it so that I can make rapid progress?经典写作示例写作要求假如你是李华，你打算与你的朋友组建一个乐队。门基乐队的成功给了你很大的鼓舞。但你和朋友对乐队的名字、主唱、乐器的选择及乐队的类型存在分歧，这让你不知所措，你决定给门基乐队写一封电子邮件，告诉他们你的想法，并征求他们的建议，如何才能使乐队更
4、加成功。注意：可根据内容要点就某一方面或几个方面的问题征求他们的建议。审题谋篇体裁应用文之咨询信时态一般现在时主题音乐人称第一人称结构首段：自我介绍并提出问题中段：具体描述自己遇到的问题、困难等尾段：希望对方给自己提出建议遣词造句1普通表达(1)开头：自我介绍并提出问题。我叫李华。我打算与我的另外三个朋友组建一个乐队。My name is Li Hua._ with my other three friends.Im going/planning to form a band你们(门基)乐队的成功给了我们很大的鼓舞。可是，我们以前没有在乐队里待过。Your bands success insp
5、ired us greatly.However,we _.你能给我们一些建议吗？Could you please _?never been in a band beforegive us some advice/suggestionshave(2)主体：具体描述自己遇到的问题、困难等。我们都喜欢流行音乐，但是我和我的三个朋友无法决定给乐队取什么名字，谁主唱以及选择什么样的乐器等。My three friends and I like pop music._ the bands name.We cant decide the lead singer.We cant decide _.We can
6、t decidewhat instruments we choose此外，我们该演奏什么样的音乐？我们是该只演奏一种音乐还是各种音乐都尝试一下呢？_，what type of music should we play?Should we only play one kind or _?你们乐队是如何决定演奏什么的呢？How did your band decide _?In addition/Besidestry every type of musicwhat to play(3)结尾：再次提出希望，希望对方给自己提出建议。我们真的希望你们能给我们一些建议。We really hope you
7、 can _.give us some advice2高级表达(1)用 but,as well as 等把句合并成一个含转折关系的并列句_(2)对句的谓语部分进行强调_My three friends and I like pop music,but we cant decide the bands name,the lead singer as well as what instruments we choose.We do hope you can give us some advice.妙笔成篇_One possible version:Dear Monkees,My name is L
8、i Hua.Im going to form a band with my other three friends.Your bands success inspired us greatly.However,we have never been in a band before.Could you please give us some advice/suggestions?My three friends and I like pop music,but we cant decide the bands name,the lead singer as well as what instruments we choose.In addition/Besides,what type of music should we play?Should we only play one kind or try every type of music?How did your band decide what to play?We do hope you can give us some advice.Yours hopefully，Li Huaword部分：请做：课时作业练速度 练能力 练规范点此进入该word板块