1、写作任务假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Jack 发来邮件想了解伦敦和北京这两座城市的异同。请你根据所给提示，用英语给他回一封电子邮件。城市不同点相同点 伦敦1.面积约 1 500 平方公里；2人口约 820 万；3四季温差小。北京1.面积约 16 400 平方公里；2人口约 2 100 万；3四季温差大。1.都是首都；2历史悠久；3重要的经济文化中心(economic and cultural centre)；4著名的旅游城市。注意：1词数 100 左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Jack，Im very pleased to receive
2、 you email.Im writing to compare London and Beijing._Yours，Li Hua写作指导一、审题定调本写作要求写一封电子邮件，其正文部分是比较两座城市的异同，属于说明文。二、谋篇布局因为本写作任务开头和结尾已给出，根据提示内容我们可以将正文分为以下三部分：第一部分：介绍两座城市的相同点；第二部分：介绍两座城市的不同点；第三部分：简要总结。三、组织语言第一部分：介绍伦敦和北京的相同点普通表达高级表达 The two cities are similar in many ways.Both of them are capital cities an
3、d have a long history.Both are important economic and cultural centres.They are famous tourist cities,and many tourists come to visit them every year.The two cities share something in common.,both of which are capital cities with a long history,are known as important economic and cultural centres.Be
4、ing famous tourist cities,both of them attract millions of tourists every year.第二部分：介绍伦敦和北京的不同点普通表达高级表达 There are also some differences between the two cities.The area of.is about.The population of.is about.has a mild climate all year round but the temperature differences in.are very big throughout
5、the year.They differ from each other insome aspects.covers an area of about.which is about.times that of.has a population of about.while.has about.people.enjoys a mild climate all year round while.experiences big temperature differences throughout the year.第三部分：简要总结普通表达高级表达 In short,each of them is
6、a very special and attractive place.All in all,each of them has some distinctive(与众不同的)features and is worth visiting.常用表达1过渡词：in the same way,similarly,likewise,on the contrary,by contrast,however,equal to,on the other hand,while,whereas,though,although等。2常用结构和句型：so/such.that.；as.as.；比较级than.；We ca
7、n draw a conclusion that.【范文展示】普通范文Dear Jack，Im very pleased to receive your email.Im writing to compareLondon and Beijing.The two cities are similar in many ways.Both of them are capital cities and have a long history.Besides,both are important economic and cultural centres.Moreover,they are famous
8、 tourist cities,and many tourists come to visit them every year.However,there are also some differences between the two cities.The area of London is about 1,500 km2.And the area of Beijing is about 16,400 km2.The population of London is about 8.2 million and the population of Beijing is about 21 mil
9、lion.Whats more,London has a mild climate all year round but the temperature differences in Beijing are very big throughout the year.In short,each of them is a very special and attractive place.Yours，Li Hua高级范文Dear Jack，Im very pleased to receive your email.Im writing to compareLondon and Beijing.Th
10、e two cities share something in common.London and Beijing,both of which are capital cities with a long history,are known as important economic and cultural centres.Being famous tourist cities,both of them attract millions of tourists every year.However,they differ from each other in some aspects.Bei
11、jing covers an area of about 16,400 km2,which is about eleven times that of London.London has a population of about 8.2 million while Beijing has about 21 million people.Besides,London enjoys a mild climate all year round while Beijing experiences big temperature differences throughout the year.All
12、in all,each of them has some distinctive features and is worth visiting.Yours，Li Hua实战演练假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友 Tom 发来邮件询问南京和悉尼的异同。请你根据所给提示，用英语给他回一封电子邮件。城市不同点相同 悉尼1.人口约 503 万；2有 200 余年的历史。南京1.人口约 833 万；2有约 2600 年的历史。1.首府或省会；2气候湿润；3著名的旅游城市。注意：词数 100 左右。One possible version：Dear Tom，Im very pleased to receive
13、 your email.Im writing to compare Nanjing and Sydney.The two cities share something in common.Both Nanjing and Sydney are capital cities and enjoy a mild climate all year round.Besides,both being famous for their popular tourist attractions,they attract millions of tourists every year.However,they d
14、iffer from each other in some aspects.Nanjing has a population of about 8.33 million while Sydney only has about 5.03 million people.Furthermore,Nanjing has a history of about 2,600 years,which is about 13 times that of Sydney.All in all,each of them has some distinctive features and is worth visiting.Yours，Li Hua.