1、Section Writing写作指导思路点拨素材积累实战成篇如何描写考古发现 Description of archaeological finds 根据下面的提示写一篇短文,以A Noblewomans Tomb Found in Changsha为题介绍一下长沙新发现的古墓。1.一座汉朝贵妇人的墓最近在长沙出土,墓内的木乃伊保存完好,据说比19721974年出土的马王堆汉墓还要大。2.可能是西汉长沙王王妃墓穴,在隋唐时期被盗过。3.据考古学家推测,此墓可能是楚文化的遗迹,虽然很多细节问题目前尚不清楚,但是该古墓为研究西汉文化提供了宝贵的资料。要求:1.文章条理清楚;2.词数:100左右。
2、写作指导思路点拨素材积累实战成篇描写一个物品,就是把某一物品的特点呈现在读者面前,使该物品给读者留下生动具体的印象,从而使读者体会到美感或者从中得到知识或启示。物品介绍类说明文写作时应注意以下几点:1.抓准特征,说明到位 要把一件物品活生生地展现在读者眼前,需要选择物品最具特色的外形和用途来写,这样才能显出物品的独特之处。2.层次分明,条理清晰,内容连贯 在描写物品时,要采用恰当的说明顺序,从物品的外观、构造、功能等方面来分层描述,或从上到下、由里到外,或从整体到局部、由点到面。总的来说,要做到层次分明、条理清晰、内容连贯。写作指导思路点拨素材积累实战成篇3.表现手法多样 在描写过程中,可采用
3、举例子、列数字、作比较等不同的方法,以便让读者更好地了解所介绍的物品。写作指导思路点拨素材积累实战成篇常用表达:It looks like.be located in.date back to.measure.metres from.to.With a height of.it.It is in good condition.It may be used as/for.It is made from/of.写作指导思路点拨素材积累实战成篇A Noblewomans Tomb Found in Changsha A tomb of a noblewoman in the Han Dynasty
4、has been discovered by archaeologists in Changsha,Hunan Province.It is said that the tomb was even larger than the grand Han Dynasty Mawangdui tomb that was unearthed in 1972-1974.There contained the well-preserved mummy in it.Somearchaeologists predict that the tomb may be appointed by a Western Ha
5、n Dynasty emperor and belong to the queen of Changsha King.Andit was robbed in the Sui-Tang Period.Archaeologists also think that though the details about the tomb which might be spectacular examples of Chu Culture are not clear,itwill provide us with some important and valuable materials which can be used to study the culture of the Western Han Dynasty.
