1、Welcome to our class!2021二轮专题复习:短文改错A Revision of CorrectionHave a look at these pictures.What are they about?Guangxi Sanyuesan FestivalWhat would people do during the festival?sing folk songsthrow embroidered（绣花的，刺绣的）ballsSweep tombsEat delicious foodSanYueSan Festival is traditional folk festival
2、of ZHUANG,which take place on 3rd March in the Lunar Calendar.its also called Singing Festival what is only celebrated in GuangXi Province.During the festival,people are all dressed in his national costume and take part in the Folk Song Fairs.They sing folk songs,also called mountain songs,together
3、to pray for good weathers and harvest.Young women will fall in love to young men who sing good,they express their love by throwing embroidered（绣花的，刺绣的）balls to their lovers and young men who sing well.Its an interesting way to express love and chose husband.During the festival,people will also visit
4、 to dead family members tomb with sacrifice,to show respect to their ancestors.Lead-in:Read and correct the mistakes（体验）Check your answers with your group members,please!San YueSan Festival is traditional folk festival of ZHUANG,which take place on 3rd March in the Lunar Calendar.Its also called Sin
5、ging Festival what is only celebrated in Guang Xi Province.During the festival,people are all dressed in his national costume and take part in the Folk Song Fairs.They sing folk songs,also called mountain songs,together to pray for good weathers and harvest.atakes_which_their_weatherYoung women will
6、 fall in love to young men who sing good,they express their love by throwing embroidered（绣花的，刺绣的）balls to their lovers and young men who sing well.Its an interesting way to express love and chose husband.During the festival,people will also visit to dead family members tomb with sacrifice,to show re
7、spect to their ancestors._or_well_choose_with高考在短文改错中考什么？质疑SanYueSan Festival is a traditional folk festival of ZHUANG,which takes place on 3rd March in the Lunar Calendar.its also called Singing Festival which is only celebrated in GuangXi Province.During the festival,people are all dressed in thei
8、r national costume and take part in the Folk Song Fairs.They sing folk songs,also called mountain songs,together to pray for good weather and harvest.Young women will fall in love with young men who sing well,they express their love by throwing embroidered（绣花的，刺绣的）balls to their lovers or young men
9、who sing well.its an interesting way to express love and choose husband.During the festival,people will also visit dead family members tomb with sacrifice,to pay respect to their ancestors.高考考词法，句法，行文逻辑短文改错主要考查考生的语言基本功和正确使用英语进行表达的能力。语篇通常取材于考生自己的习作或类似于考生的随笔，且话题常见，篇章结构的难易程度符合高中生的认知水平，即通俗易懂，基本上无生僻的语言障碍
10、和怪、偏、难的语法结构。考生在平时写作中常出现的错误是短文改错考查的重点。短文词数通常是100词左右，考试用时10分钟左右。The steps of doing proof-reading1.Go through the whole passage to get a general idea.(通读全文，掌握大意）2.Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐句找错。切记：先易后难，缩小范围。）3.Read the passage for a third time,check the answers a
11、nd correct the difficult ones.（检查核对，攻克难点）.How to do proof reading.（如何做短文改错）生成动词形，名词数；还要注意形和副。代词格，细领悟。介词短语须关注；习惯用法要记住。冠词连词常光顾；从句引导词莫不顾。短文改错的口诀：.短文改错命题原则高考就考这些点(词法,句法和行文逻辑)请先念一遍“咒语”吧！一坚持：insist两命令：order command 三建议：suggest advise recommend 四要求：request require demand urge一坚持、两命令、三建议、四要求后接(that)sb.（shou
12、ld）do2非谓语动词的错用We can choose between staying at home and take a trip.takingstay和take之间用between and并列非谓语的关系,故take改为taking。3.主谓不一致 时态不一致Finally,there were a sudden pull at the pole and a fish was caught.wasthere be结构为倒装句，主语为 a sudden pull，故were改为was。1.动词的时态和语态错误。2.主、谓不一致的错误。to do 表主动/未发生或表目的doing 表主动/正
13、在发生done 表被动/已完成一、动词形（三维设计P11-12教师版P14-16）一、动词形谓语非谓语二、名词数指名词单、复数形式的用法错误或者可数、不可数名词的混淆，还有是否需用所有格。三 还要注意形和副.修饰名词，be动词、系动词后要用形容词.修饰动词，形容词，过去分词，整个句子 用副词.比较级和最高级的使用 四、代词格，细领悟1.人称代词，物主代词的使用。2.反身代词oneself 的使用。3.人称代词的主格和宾格。4.不定代词的使用。5.Both,all,either,neither,none的使用。6.Whose 和whos;its和 its的区别。1.冠词的错用或冠词的缺失与多余
14、He has an unusual experience in an European university分析：Europeanjrpi:n不是以元音音素开头，前面的不定冠词应为a。a(2016全国卷)But in that case,we will learn little about world.theworld是独一无二的事物，在world前加the。.冠词a,an和the的用法错误。.连词but,and,or,so和although的用法错误六、冠词连词常光顾1.定语从句引导词的错用与缺失 In an autumn afternoon,we were sent to a farm w
15、hich we learned to plant potatoes.a farm后跟定语从句，引导词在定从中作地点状语，应改which为where。where2.名词性从句引导词的错用、缺失与多余(2016全国卷)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.whereclose to后为宾语从句，引导词在从句中作地点状语，把that改为where。1.名词性从句的引导词(主从/宾从/表从/同位语从)2.定语从句的引导词(关系代词或者关系副词)3.状语从句的引导词(时间/地点/条件/原因/方式/结果/目的/让步/比较)4.
16、强调句的引导词 that/who(只限于人)七、从句引导词莫不顾.课堂巩固训练Try to finish the following proofreading composition quickly生成 Our English teacher begin to teach us in September.She has been taughtEnglish for more than twenty year.She likes we,and she is very strict in all of us.Although she is a bit old and not so beautifu
17、lly,but we consider her as our friend.She is really good teacher.We love her very much.Were sure they will get in well with each other.beganteaching动词形years名词数us代词格，细领悟with介词短语需关注beautiful还要注意形和副a冠词连词常光顾we代词格，细领悟on习惯用法要记住When we do proof reading,what other things should we pay attention to?质疑 1）Beca
18、use of he has to go home,he wont attend the party.2）He is such handsome a boy.3）Because his absence,we all felt disappointed.4）He as well as his sister are a League Member.1）、2）符号不规范3）、4）位置不准确.思考：这样改能得分吗？of is 5）Personal,its important to make a careful plan inpersonallyadvance.6）I am work hard at sc
19、hool.hard-working5）大小写错误6）多词改一词思考：这样改能得分吗？我们在测试中所犯的错误注意：Follow the following requirements(认真读题目要求，做到规范答题)下列短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写上该加的词。删除 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改 在错的词下面划一横线（-),并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。VII.短文改错解题“4原则”1.改动处以最少为原则。每 句最多
20、有两处错误。每处错误只能 增、减或换一词。2实词以改变词形为原则。在短文改错题中，实词只改形式，不改词义，（改形不改义）3.虚词以添加或删除为原则。4.以保持句子原意不变为原则。改错时，应针对文中的用词错误、语法错误、逻辑错误加以改正，做到“换词不改意，加词不增意，去词不减意”。生成另外四不改原则1.单词拼写不改2.大小写不改3.词序不改4.标点符号不改生成VIII.Summary1.Recite the rules and the steps with dealing with proof reading.动词形，名词数;还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟;介词短语须关注习惯用法要记住冠词连词常光
21、顾从句引导词莫不顾做题步骤1.通读全文,掌握大意。2.分句阅读,逐句找错。3.检查核对,攻克难点。2.Summarize the phrases and sentencestrutures from the above exercises be used for(doing)sth.一坚持、两命令、三建议、四要求 后接(that)sb.（should）do there be结构为倒装句 meet ones demandfind/think it(动词+it+宾语补足语+不定式(动名词或从句)leave.for.“离开某地到另外一个地方”dream of doing sth.IX.Homework Finish four proof reading exercises after class.(Homework 课时作业本P96，短文改错四)