1、Section Writing 影视评论写作技法指导影视评论简称影评，要包括影片的背景、故事梗概、精彩之处，以及对影片的评论。写影评时要注意紧扣“电影”与“评论”两点，评论可以从多方面进行，但一篇评论中心观点只能有一个。在写作手法上要注意两点：一是点面结合；二是观点与材料的统一。点面结合就是要对你所评论的电影先做一个总体介绍，如导演、主要演员、主要情节等，这是“面”的介绍。然后结合某一情节，或某一段对话、某一个场面、某一细节、某一事物作具体分析，这是“点”的评论。观点和材料的统一就是要树立明确的观点，然后引用电影中的具体情节加以分析。我 们 中 学 阶 段 的 影 评 写 作 大 多 是 指
2、导 性 写 作(guided writing)，即根据所给内容材料进行写作。通常要包括四步：1给出影片的基本信息；2对情节进行简要概括；3给出对影片的观点，包括好的方面和不好的方面；4给出自己的结论和评价。1对影片的概述The film.directed by.is a story about.The film.is set in.The film is a love(romantic/moving)story.2对影片的评价This is a very touching film,a must-see.My favourite part of the film is.Judging from
3、 the wild clapping and cheers that filled the cinema,everybody agreed that it was indeed the best film of the year.积“黄金”词句，写高分文章However,many people have complained that the film is too.Im disappointed with the film because.Many viewers have expressed great dissatisfaction with the movie.Even with th
4、ese small problems,the film is still a great one,and I really enjoy it!Personally,I think the advantages carry more weight than the disadvantages.三步写作规范根据下面提示写一篇影评。片名(name)外星人(E.T.the ExtraTerrestrial)导演(director)史蒂文斯皮尔伯格(Steven Spielberg)(美国)主演(starring)Henry Thomas(Elliott,a boy)剧情梗概(main idea)外星人
5、(E.T.)被同伴误留在地球上，Elliott 把它秘密留在家里躲避他的妈妈和政府的搜查。ET.和 Elliott成为好朋友，分享痛苦与欢乐，最后 Elliott和他的兄弟姐妹冒险送 E.T.返回它的星球。评价(comment)美丽而感人；友谊和爱是人生最重要的。注意：1.影评须包括以上表格要点，不要逐条翻译；2词数 100 左右，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。第一步：搜索词汇1经典之作 _2错误地_3冒险_4感人的_classicmistakenlygo on an adventuretouching第二步：由词造句1它讲述的是一个故事：一个外星人 E.T.被它的同伴误留在地球上，想返回自己的
6、星球。It is about a story.An alien ET.on the Earth by its companions.It wants to go back to its own planet.is mistakenly leftIt is about a story that an alien ET.,_on the Earth by its companions,wants to go back to its own planet.It is about a story that an alien ET.,_ on the Earth by its companions,wa
7、nts to go back to its own planet.who is mistakenly leftmistakenly left2一个叫 Elliott，由 Henry Thomas 扮演的男孩，找到它并把它藏在家里，保护 E.T.躲避他的妈妈和政府的搜查。A boy.He finds it and hides it in his own room to protect ET.from being searched by his mother and the government.called Elliott is acted by Henry ThomasA boy,findsi
8、t and hides it in his own room to protect ET.from being searched by his mother and the government.A boy,finds it and hides it in his own room to protect ET.from being searched by his mother and the government.who is called Elliott and acted by Henry Thomascalled Elliott and acted by Henry Thomas3他们成
9、为好朋友，很亲密并彼此分享悲伤和快乐。They became good friends.They _ each other.They became good friends and are they share sadness and joy with each other.They became good friends,they share sadness and joy with each other.are close and share sadnessand joy withso close thatwho are so close that第三步：连句成篇ET.the Extra-
10、Terrestrial is Steven Spielbergs classic for both children and adults.It is about a story that an alien ET.,mistakenly left on the Earth by its companions,wants to go back to its own planet.A boy called Elliott and acted by Henry Thomas,finds it and hides it in his own room to protect ET.from being
11、searched by his mother and the government.They became good friends,who are so close that they share sadness and joy with each other.At last,Elliott and his siblings go on an adventure,managing to help ET.find a way back to its home planet.The film is beautiful and touching.It shows us that friendship and love are the most important things in life.谢谢 观 看